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When I Was a Chambermaid

When I was twenty-two and lived
In Israel for a spell,
I needed cash and got a job
In a small seaside hotel.

We worked in teams to clean the rooms;
We vacuumed, dusted, scrubbed -
The hardest work I’d ever done
(‘Til teaching, when I subbed).

One little tidbit I recall
Involved the bathroom goals -
Fresh towels, washcloths, bath mat
And new toilet paper rolls.

We never left a started roll
Nor tissue box half-filled,
For seeing something someone used
Would make guests less than thrilled.

I doubt if that’s the case today.
Though I don’t really care, 
In my current hotel bathroom,
Two half-rolls were hanging there.

Premium Member The Chambermaid

A sign in a Japanese hotel, “Please take advantage of our chambermaid”
Sounds like it could quite possibly involve touching her undercarriage
Steady down, friends
It's only pretend
But on leaving, you should thank her for allowing you backstage

Premium Member The Chambermaid

A sign in a Japanese hotel, “Please take advantage of our chambermaid”
Sounds like it could quite possibly involve touching her undercarriage
Steady down, friends
It's only pretend
But on leaving, you should thank her for allowing you backstage


Premium Member The Chambermaid

A sign in a Japanese hotel. “You are invited to take advantage
of the chambermaid” sounds like it may involve her undercarriage
Steady down, friends
It's only pretend
But you may want to thank her for allowing you backstage

Premium Member Chambermaid With Ravens

The Aberdeen bus arrives, deposits and boards
the same people daily. One is the dark-haired
chambermaid at the tourist lodge, awkward
in her print dress and wearing a frown. Her
big breasts inspire and her long legs are
quintessence. The sun dispels moisture,

with fire-blackened face I lick a popsicle 
after work and achieve a counterfactual
childhood. This is what the chambermaid’s scowl
is about, the frozen treat and smile of a grown 
man. On a summer night what passions
would I find in her? We take our place in the pattern

of daily activity, pick-up trucks with crews
arriving and leaving, uniformed rangers narrow
in their imaginations. Two ravens fly low
over the clearcut like weather, in weather, there will
be weather. Felling trees in the forest, I look uphill. 
The ravens float like hawks, nearly immobile.

Premium Member Mine Chambermaid

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                As I sat
        comfortably in my
            soothing seat 
I am put to the test by the sound

    the slow creek of her walk
         down the wooden
                 steps

       As I try with all wit
       to pen on mine slip
        her walk closes in
        as her finger tips

     Yes how quick mine
                 Wit
           my pen and
                 slip
             vanished
          when her lips

      touched mine hips


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