James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Mine Chambermaid

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                As I sat
        comfortably in my
            soothing seat 
I am put to the test by the sound

    the slow creek of her walk
         down the wooden
                 steps

       As I try with all wit
       to pen on mine slip
        her walk closes in
        as her finger tips

     Yes how quick mine
                 Wit
           my pen and
                 slip
             vanished
          when her lips

      touched mine hips

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Wilma Neels November 4, 2010 at 10:42 AM James, you say just enough to paint the picture and what an magical one it is. Enjoyed this ;) love Wilma

John Loving Iii November 4, 2010 at 6:10 AM what a chambermaid! john

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 4, 2010 at 3:44 AM Sexy poetry.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 3, 2010 at 8:35 AM This sure is a very cute and sweet write, James and I love how you worded this-- enjoyed reading this very lovely & witty poem :) -- nikko :)

C.C Bloomsfield November 3, 2010 at 6:36 AM Ow it was worth the time not writing i guess :)Sweet poem,sweet!Celene

Sara Kendrick November 3, 2010 at 4:08 AM Reads like her sound was a delight to your ear for you delighted to have her near.Alas, you wanted to continue to write but you got a great poem out of the situation."Had Times Been Different"..Yes, James, I loved this man who was my adoptive father..I love him because he chose me to be his child..He had reared his family and this time of his life could have been much easier but he chose to take me into his life .Taking on that parenting responsibility for another lifetime..Enjoyed your work..SK

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2010 at 9:22 PM Methinks you could not be TOO repulsed by her sound!! Great ending on this one. LUv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2010 at 4:42 PM Kiss me quick, James! This is a steamy write that I really enjoyed. Hope you and Noah are doing well, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick November 2, 2010 at 10:09 AM A sensual delight to read this afternoon, James...The visual is perfect in these few words, as always, enjoyable. Always, Audrey

Sharon Ruebel November 2, 2010 at 9:30 AM Hello James, My but you are witty this morning, I love this one, its a keeper.... Thank you for your kind words As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2010 at 9:16 AM Yummy James.. great play on words rolling one into the other.. sweet creativity this election day ..luv.. enjoyed James...