Best Tortuous Poems


Premium Member The Wonder of Creation

I climb high up the tortuous path
Of a ragged hillock and 
In pensive solitude I look around
Upon the universe that surround me.
 
There from on high
I spy so many mysterious wonders
That God endowed this worthy earth,
And blessed all His creations
With wealth, momentous and great.
 
The waning sun creeps down over the horizon
To gain its well-earned rest.
A reddish dusk tinges the hilltops
As swallows glide serenely below the ridge
In search of a homely sanctuary 
To dream the dark night away.
 
The multicoloured flowers in the valley
That swing in nightly breezes,
And feed the insects bright;
The trees that grow so mighty
Whilst bushes provide haven to so many
Graceful creatures of the wild.	
The glorious stars that light the dark
The dazzling sun that ripens crops,
The lakes and seas that ripple
And reflect the mountains high:
Is it not easy to understand
How blessed we all are?
Yet do we ever stop 
To thank our dear Lord
And ponder on these gracious gifts?
Categories: tortuous, creation,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Peace Is Our Governance

Love sets our hearts on fire,
not the city.
We abide by the eternal victory
set forth by life’s Word.
We are about the Lord’s business,
not the entanglement of choice,
not the frothing of the masses.
We kiss the feet of Jesus.
We don’t soak our own feet
while we spit hatred to the wind.
We hit our knees, black and blue bruised,
the devil crushed beneath.
Our prayers are real,
not tortuous to our mirrors.
We don’t think ourselves God!
We don’t lean into our every word.
We don’t deliver arrows to the great or weak.
Instead,  we beseech the creator of our land.
We are wise as a serpent, harmless as a dove.
Peace is our governance.
We seek it.
We read it.
We live it.
And when we fail, and we do,
we repent and start anew.
Lies are not our gospel,
that is good news.
Pride comes before a fall.
Before you turn your finger outward
you’d best look within your own universe,
thoroughly, completely, no drawing back,
no hiding places. He who is without sin
throw the first stone. Boomerang!

2/24/2021
Categories: tortuous, christian, introspection, love,
Form: Dramatic Monologue

Premium Member Oh, Lord, What Have I Done

The glamorous uniform looked sharp in the posters about town.
Recruiters convinced the lad to join the Marines of great renown!
Reveille called, sergeants screamed, another tortuous day had begun!
He cried, "Lord, have mercy on me! What in the world have I done!"

The giddy lad proposed marriage to his beautiful young miss.
She happily concurred and he looked forward to years of bliss!
Now he has a common scold for a wife and a paucity of fun.
He lamented, "Lord, have mercy! What in the world have I done!"

The president-elect anticipated the perks and leading the nation,
And the dream of his dubious promises sailing through legislation.
He inherited unemployment, recession, wars and things left undone.
He puzzled, "Lord, have mercy! What in the world have I done!"

Assailed on all sides by savages and with things looking grim,
The impetuous Custer found himself hanging on to a sagging limb!
His last words might have been upon nearing life's setting sun:
"Oh, Lord! Have mercy on me! What in the world have I done!"

When we near the end of life's treacherous and rocky trail,
And are about to enter eternity through that mysterious veil,
We are apt to reflect on things we've done or left undone,
By pleading, "Oh, Lord have Mercy! What MIGHT I have done?"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved
Categories: tortuous, funny, introspectionworld,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry


In a Moment's Gaze

Transpiring for tranquility, 
For that loving long embrace…
Once again, I look away from my existence
And meet your precious gaze
Of whom do we owe our lives, our hearts, our time?
To the one who has died, or the one that dies yet still, for you..? 

I ignore the moments of pleasure so trivial in blinded eyes, 
To focus my awareness of your bleeding cadence
I see the fury of jealousy riding on the outlines of your jaw
The tension in your frown, the pain in your still, genuine smile
Your face becomes soft in my presence, though from a distance, 
You are terminally coarse
You are breaking, awakening by the frenzy of my love,
Crying so darkly for my mind to comprehend your doomed destiny

And in spurts of silver moments, 
I do see you, 
In all pools of blood and tears,
Mixing with all of the familiar hesitancies and fears

I am fighting now, to push away the useless light of the ignorant multitude
Parting from their detached arrays, into your sweet supple gaze
Where freely the tears fall upon my breast,
Tortuous, the pulse begs merciless against my chest 

Your pupils enlarge, rivaling the world in my stare
Perspiring peace glistening in our blend
We realize in this union we owe each other nothing

	For we have died together, loved freely, and lived 
	To suffer again no more

-For Justin Bordner's "The Crosses In Your Eyes" Contest-
Categories: tortuous, appreciation, heart, hurt, introspection,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Silent Gun

The crimson  sun still up
as she woefully walks
in an abandoned rustic railways;
Her feet ~ as heavy as the stale steel rails
almost buried in forgotten soil;
Her hands as cold as tombstone plate
whilst holding a gun on her left hand~
She grips a quill pen
to write the obscure death 
of the man in blue suit~
and the deaths of twelve passengers
still unsolved...

She was here some decades ago~
aboard in an old steam train
The memory of  that macabre ride
haunted her for thousand days and nights.

She writes in scarlet ink
on a bloodstained scroll
that says like this:

" To all the victims who died here,
I lay my hands before this forgotten railway 
and the weeping willows as my witness;
I never thought too much love would kill.
I killed my beloved man in blue suit,
the driver of that  tortuous train journey...
Yes I killed him to save the three million people
dwelling on the final station;
Using the twelve infected people,
He was sent to spread that virus
that he thought would change the world.
I didn't understand till now~
Yes, I killed him with a silencer
and unlocked that explosive weapon
before it reached its final destination.
But I was spared~
not the twelve people;
Now, with  this gun I’ll give justice 
to all people who died here
by killing the undersigned murderer.

Till death,
Anonymous ”.

The gun silently flicks
pointing her head~
Darks clouds hide the day
as her blood flows
on the thirsty ground.



1 May 2021

Modified for “ Guns Poetry Contest”
Sponsored by Anthony Biaanco
11th place
© JCB Brul  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: tortuous, angst, imagination,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Renascence

When above the high sea in tempest 
Surging thunderous cloud swells 
The pole star disappears from the sky 
The ancient mariner in me loses the bearing. 

In dormant senses hope prevails
For the halcyon horizon will rise again 
In the sunburst tranquil dawn
Delineate the chromatic shore yonder. 
 
As my footsteps lose the rhythm of certainty
In the tortuous track called life
Leading me toward dismal wilderness 
I revive the faith latent within me.

I make to myself an ardent promise	
To run a long marathon race
Reach surely the winning position 
At the end of the painful pursuit.  
 
When I am lost in the labyrinth of living 
Search for the escape route 
But find the exit doors close one by one,
I then discover the hidden compass.

I follow the invisible trail of trust
Feel the resurgence of fortitude
For at the end of the tormenting tunnel 
I see the light of freedom finally appear. 

As the sunshine day fades out fast 
The twilight sky falls with depressing dusk  
I don’t forget that the sun should sink
To rise with surreal splendor again.
 
I wait for the heavenly hues to saturate me  
And inspire the Phoenix concealed within
To rise from the dust of distress
In the divine dawn of renascence.

______________

October 27, 2022
Title Chosen : Renascence
Contest : This Or That, Vol 14
Sponsored by : Edward Ibeh
Categories: tortuous, depression, hope, inspirational, life,
Form: Free verse


Premium Member Recital

Recital / free verse / Pride

Expectation rushes in
As her silent walk begins
All eyes staring
Watching for a hint of emotion
But none revealed
As she takes her place among the muses

No one breathes as her studious eyes
Examine the two-dimensional codes
Then silence breaks
As both hands spring into fantastical dance
On an ever changing ivory and ebony stage

Mellifluous tones, conspicuously full and rich,
Transport all on an uplifting emotional journey
Ears, minds, hearts and lungs
Feasting on delicious pabulum of spirit

Soon tortuous movements diminish
The fantastical dance declines
With final notes
Striking harmonious chords
Deep into our psyche
Our ethereal journey ends
And we gently land where we began

She pauses, then rises
To a cacophony of applause
All eyes staring
Watching for a hint of emotion as she exits
But none revealed
Save a quick glance & brief smile
Acknowledging her proud parent's pounding hearts
Misting eyes and beaming faces


Recital / tanka / Pride

smooth operator
flawless rhapsody in blue
climax conclusion
cacophony of applause
with proud parents’ pounding hearts
© Mark Toney  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: tortuous, daughter, music, parents, pride,
Form: Free verse

Does It Seem As If Im Dreamin

Does it seem as if I'm dreamin',
When I lay my head at night,
Or can you hear me screamin',
As I face my biggest fight,

Pictures of the past replayed,
A revolving reel of pain and dread,
An untold war taking place in the shade,
On a field of a pillow where I lay my head,

A relentless battle between good and bad,
With the only outcome guilt,
An endless torment designed for the mad,
A straight jacket for a quilt, 

Locked in a darkness where no light has shined,
Regret and anguish with no release,
A blackness deep inside my mind,
A tortuous turmoil with no relief,

So does it seem as if I'm dreaming',
When I lay asleep in bed, 
Or can you see the demon,
That I fight inside my head...
Categories: tortuous, psychological,
Form:

Premium Member Precious Moments


When the opaque nights were starless, 
and the depressing days desolately cloudy,
the journey through the tortuous valley of life 
wasn’t easy as it was meant to be.

When the wilted flowers turned pallid, 
and the defoliated trees tarnished tawny, 
I lost the tantalizing trail of the garden path,
as in the unshed tears of toil hapless hopes sank. 

The jagged pathway of listless life I traveled, 
was sorely winding and the time finite.
At the end of the tormenting tunnel 
I didn’t see the glitter of the guiding light.

When in stormy nights I was in the wasteland wilderness, 
the surreptitious destiny designed for me,
the shards of my splintered sky fell asunder, 
I forlornly envisaged strewn all around me.

I didn’t question the supreme designer’s motive,
and His ways of mundane manifestation,
but prayed for the sparkle of the sapphire nights,
and for the shower of the sunny days’ shine.  

Without complaint I endured complacently
the transient time’s turbulence as His gracious gift,
waited for the spring to bloom the divine flowers, 
and grow the emerald trees to enliven the blessed me. 

When under the ruins of the fallen sky 
my broken dreams were in the debris of despair,
I traveled within crossing the dark corridor,  
and in the soul’s precinct I discovered the heavenly light.

In those precious moments I totally surrendered,
and remained subservient to His omnipresence.  
I got the inner strength to hold up the falling sky, 
and those enlightened instants kept me going.
Categories: tortuous, analogy, god, life,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member On the Wheelchair

The old man gazed at the sun about to set
And its molten core soon to dissolve in the sea
Scratching his head with tremulous hands
And running his fingers on the stubble of his unshaven face
He held once more tight to his wheel chair
Casually he had a glance at his hands
Those dry, weak and shriveled hands
Gone wrinkled with passing years!

His hands once so busy are now limp
His days once brisk are now long and dull

He noticed the discolored patches on his skin
Under them the lattice of tortuous veins on the dorsum
They run down to join with the bigger ones 
Like small rivulets flowing towards larger rivers

He remembered how the streams from summits
So vigorously come down with a gush
Also the noisy cataracts somersaulting down,
Leaving reverberating echoes all around
But they produce only a soft musical sound
As they join with the rivers and pass through plains 
And finally end in a kind of hushed stillness
Just before merging with the sea!

The old man philosophized;
Life too is like a river:
Fierce and ferocious when one is young
Gentler and sedate after middle age
And slow and sloppy in old age

With this calm acceptance of the need to de-accelerate
Wrapping himself in the shawl against the growing cold
He turned away from the window.

Pushing his wheel chair,
He moved forward,
Knowing no haste…..
Towards his bed for another night’s tired sleep!
Categories: tortuous, analogy, grandfather, philosophy,
Form: Free verse

Bloodshed In Myanmar

The sky is red by the blood being shed
The conscience of civilized world asleep
Where in the world is humanity being lead
Here is a corpse there is a throat cut deep

Vultures are feasting, dogs devouring
Devils dancing, angels clamoring
Monsters feasting, demons dancing
Guns tottering, weapons wielding

Is Muslim blood thinner?
Easy to be shed without remorse
Palestine, Afghanistan, Pakistan, Kashmir and now Myanmar
And existing Al-Qaida, Lashkar-e-Jhangvi and Taliban’s curse 

Tortuous perils and vulnerability,
Fanatical sectarianism’s brutality
The two-edged sword of bigotry
Parochial savagery and barbarity  

Religious teachings innocuous
Be them of Buddha, Muhammad or Jesus
Where are your wits, where is the focus?
Insensitive, vicious and callous
Await the leaping Hell-fire’s tentacles
----
Categories: tortuous, conflict, death, faith, horror,
Form: Rhyme

Unheard Speech To a Puddle, Long Time Ago

1
Puddle, swallow me in your 
archaic and gracious depths.
I’ve been roaming through
my city and its veins
with no oceanic nor 
dry eyes to salute to,
with no raw rapid river nor
traffic sign to guide me.

2
Their gods are angry at me, 
puddle;
they now know -and not before- I have mocked
their rituals and broken their now transparent
and blood-ebon core. They´re angry at me,
puddle.

3
Release me from my self-put chains
Release me from these empty bonds
of mine,
from this modern and boring-to-watch Greek tragedy.

Save me, puddle;
sing to my haze under the red coldness 
of the moon
and to my solitude under the fire on the petrified 
willow.

4
I often walk through destroyed
statues,
with flesh and vines
touching the new light,
parasites of the old shadow 
upon them.

I stare, and the copper-covered statue
blinds me with the reflection
of the wicked
sun
through the tortuous
morning mist.

5
There are
only 
my dreams
in the mist,
and
my silhouette
dressed
as a man.

6
Please puddle,
let
my feet
touch gently
your first drops,
and so on
until
my figure
is wet
in the ocean
and
my neck
is hanged
from 
the sky.

I’ll be able to swim towards the calm shore,
and rest in that land,
in the half-wet half-dry sand,
in a pain-free limbo.

Time will pass by,
and I will have forgotten
my human cover.
But just after my eyes clarify,
I will be forced to leave
the snow that had surrounded me,
and I will  have to return to my core
and to the chaos I lived in. 

And even if chaos won’t let me do it,
I will keep
trying to kiss it.
Categories: tortuous, conflict, confusion, dark, death,
Form: Romanticism

Premium Member A Shining Afterglow

A Shining Afterglow

we have rambled together
        along the Ganges river
	just you and me
	gazing at each other
we have trodden together
       	the streets of Bombay
	through narrow 
         tortuous lanes
        goading each other
we have sauntered together
	along the Delhi boulevard
	eyeing each other	
         and some of the wonders
         of the world
we have ambled together 
	along the snow-capped hills 
	of Kashmir hand in hand
	skating down the snowy slopes
we have ascended together
	the steep Tripura hills
	laid with thorns
	pulling up each other
we have braved together
	the desert of Arabia
	strolling side by side
	under the torrid sky
	till our throat had run dry
we have explored together
	the Kenyan reserve forest
	with its wild fauna
	breezing together
	with our lips fondling each other
we have roamed together
	in British public parks
        meandering amidst marvellous
	alleys of red roses
	vying with envy 
        at cherry blossoms
	and inhaled their intoxicating scent
we have swum together
	in the cerulean waters
	of the Mauritian shores
 	with the setting sun
	reflecting its pink afterglow
        on the leisurely undulating waves
         where we lay in close embrace
        atop ivory sands.

we have for so long
      	   shared the same roof
		during the summer 
                       of love and care 
                       when the salutary
                       shine of the salubrious sun
		        illumined our lives	
               during the winter
 			of dark despair
			when woeful wild winds
			threatened to blow down
			the façade of our home
we have for so long
	   been duty-bound
      		  caring for each other
			since the break of day
			during the sweet glow of the day
			at the dim twilight hours
			during the darkness of night
we have for so long 
           seamlessly shared
		our joys and sorrows
		our fears and hopes
		our pains and pleasures
		our daydreams and nightmares

now that the autumn of our life
	life Is at close
		let the afterglow 
		of our love linger on and on
		shining until will last our breath.
Categories: tortuous, feelings, life, love,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Destiny

draw one’s own future
pass through certain tortuous roads
gift of nature’s voice









Honorable Mention
Contest: Haiku on probabilities
Judged: 8/8/14
Sponsor: Poet Marvin Celestial

June 8, 2014  (old poem)
© Len Gasun  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: tortuous, dream,
Form: Haiku

If You Crossed Elvis With Michael Jackson You'D Get Michael Presley Or Vice

A BRIDGE OVER THE RIVER QUIET

‘Tis the infancy of yet another day
And I hear it crying for its bottle now
But I know the sun is no child anyway
It can be a sadistic son and it will teach you how  

I live under a tunnel on the highway’s right
Yet wrong I may ever be
I found an old mattress the other night
so discomfort doesn’t bother me

Today yesterday is but an artifact
An ancient find to hunters of the past
But it seems the sun and Satan have some sort of pact
Alas, whatever it is will probably hold fast 

I’m lucky enough to live with my lover
She’s agreed to live free along with me
And often when it rains we needn’t run for cover
The umbrella is our love to be

The term “shelter” means different things to different people I know
Shelter to some might mean a mansion in France
To people like me and my lover “shelter” means just somewhere else to go
Moved by an emphatic embrace and the lives we each enhance

To us rain, cold or snow doesn’t mean we get up and go
It’s the tortuous sun we know will eventually come
So we weather the weather knowing all we need to know
For my lover and I may be homeless but neither of us is dumb

Now let’s get back to the infant son and the fear of it’s adolescence
Because as we know children can often be rambunctious and rude
In the heat of mid-day we suffer an adult son’s insolence
And being fully grown it only treats us kindly when its in the mood  
                © 2011.….free cee!
Categories: tortuous, angstson, people, may, people,
Form: Quintain (English)
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