Oh, Lord, What Have I Done

The glamorous uniform looked sharp in the posters about town.
Recruiters convinced the lad to join the Marines of great renown!
Reveille called, sergeants screamed, another tortuous day had begun!
He cried, "Lord, have mercy on me! What in the world have I done!"

The giddy lad proposed marriage to his beautiful young miss.
She happily concurred and he looked forward to years of bliss!
Now he has a common scold for a wife and a paucity of fun.
He lamented, "Lord, have mercy! What in the world have I done!"

The president-elect anticipated the perks and leading the nation,
And the dream of his dubious promises sailing through legislation.
He inherited unemployment, recession, wars and things left undone.
He puzzled, "Lord, have mercy! What in the world have I done!"

Assailed on all sides by savages and with things looking grim,
The impetuous Custer found himself hanging on to a sagging limb!
His last words might have been upon nearing life's setting sun:
"Oh, Lord! Have mercy on me! What in the world have I done!"

When we near the end of life's treacherous and rocky trail,
And are about to enter eternity through that mysterious veil,
We are apt to reflect on things we've done or left undone,
By pleading, "Oh, Lord have Mercy! What MIGHT I have done?"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/20/2011 5:25:00 AM
Powerful words, with a deep meaning! I like how you end this poem!
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Date: 5/11/2011 10:23:00 AM
VERY NICE...*
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Date: 5/7/2011 11:14:00 AM
WOWWW! Love the comparison of the president to Custer as well as those famous last words, Bob. That last line -- brilliant! That's what we will be asking ourselves on our last day. Sorry I missed this one earlier, Bob. You should let me know when you post something. Always enjoy reading your work, but I haven't been online that much. A fave here for me! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2011 7:12:00 PM
GREAT moral lesson at the end of this one, Robert. And I really feel for Obama's stanza. Poor guy . the question is what did I get myself into?? Very fun read.
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Date: 5/5/2011 2:08:00 PM
Great piece, Bob. Great message. Nice going. Ralphie
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Date: 5/4/2011 7:36:00 PM
Perfect. I love this one too. your words have so much flavour it makes your poetry so exciting. I just wish I could capture just a pinch of your talent to liven my own. I have a lot to learn Sir Robert and I have chosen you as my teacher.
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Date: 5/4/2011 1:20:00 PM
Can't argue with that Robert, the (hard thing is) how do we do the things we should? (when we should,) when the pressures of the things we did did before the things (we should be doing now) keep getting in the way? ( i ..say) you know we should do something about it!
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:03:00 PM
another great one, by the great one. a cute little piece you wrote Robert. and so true.
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Date: 5/4/2011 8:46:00 AM
Amusing, yet thoughtful. Thanks!
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