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The Wonder of Creation

I climb high up the tortuous path Of a ragged hillock and In pensive solitude I look around Upon the universe that surround me. There from on high I spy so many mysterious wonders That God endowed this worthy earth, And blessed all His creations With wealth, momentous and great. The waning sun creeps down over the horizon To gain its well-earned rest. A reddish dusk tinges the hilltops As swallows glide serenely below the ridge In search of a homely sanctuary To dream the dark night away. The multicoloured flowers in the valley That swing in nightly breezes, And feed the insects bright; The trees that grow so mighty Whilst bushes provide haven to so many Graceful creatures of the wild. The glorious stars that light the dark The dazzling sun that ripens crops, The lakes and seas that ripple And reflect the mountains high: Is it not easy to understand How blessed we all are? Yet do we ever stop To thank our dear Lord And ponder on these gracious gifts?

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Date: 7/26/2025 6:17:00 AM
We are left in awe at the beauty and mystery of the universe
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Date: 7/26/2025 5:55:00 AM
Dearest Victor,what a beautifully contemplative journey you’ve taken us on — from the climb to the quiet, awe-filled reflection on the wonders of creation. Your vivid imagery and gentle reverence remind us to pause, appreciate, and give thanks for the blessings all around us. Love and hugs
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Date: 7/26/2025 5:12:00 AM
Victor, your wonderful poetry perfectly expresses how beautiful and amazing the universe is. Stunningly lovely insights.
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Date: 7/26/2025 1:45:00 AM
You see with your heart and write in sublime Faith with your Art! Composing a so wonderful Verse.. shedding an enlightening light on the blessing wonders of God's creation.. satiating a thirst to a poetry of Beauty and meaning.. restoring enlivening feelings of gratitude.. How blessed we are! How grateful we are to God and to people of God! So grateful to you, Victor, for such a wondrous poetry! Stay always blessed and gifted. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 7/25/2025 9:38:00 PM
Thanks for sharing a poem reminding us to be thankful to God for the creation we are allowed to participate in. Praise God from whom all blessings flow, Bill
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Date: 7/25/2025 1:16:00 PM
Do we even know how blessed we are! Wonderful write filled with thankfulness!
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Date: 7/25/2025 11:48:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Great descriptions. So much to be grateful for. A Fave for me. :)
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Date: 7/25/2025 10:12:00 AM
What tranquility, peace and beauty is portrayed in this exquisite poem! We have so much to thank God for. I loved every line. hugs :)
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Date: 7/25/2025 9:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful/lovely write. We need to say, Thank You to God more each day. I was off the computer for a week and now way behind. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away........
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Date: 7/25/2025 9:42:00 AM
This universe is a great wonder, full of beauty created by God and it thrills our eyes and other senses. Everything is meticulously arranged for man to enjoy. But hardly man raises his heart in gratitude to God. Indeed it is a pity. Your lovely poem is a sweet reminder to be thankful to God for every blessing.
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Date: 7/25/2025 6:48:00 AM
Dear Victor, I found myself quietly humbled by the rhythm of dusk, the gliding swallows, and the majesty tucked into flower and flame. Such a luminous reminder to pause, look around, and feel the sacred in the ordinary. Summer Blessings, Dear Victor, Daniel
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Date: 7/25/2025 2:38:00 AM
- A wonderful poem... the creation is amazing... I enjoy this poem, Victor :) - hugs
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