The Wonder of Creation

I climb high up the tortuous path
Of a ragged hillock and 
In pensive solitude I look around
Upon the universe that surround me.
 
There from on high
I spy so many mysterious wonders
That God endowed this worthy earth,
And blessed all His creations
With wealth, momentous and great.
 
The waning sun creeps down over the horizon
To gain its well-earned rest.
A reddish dusk tinges the hilltops
As swallows glide serenely below the ridge
In search of a homely sanctuary 
To dream the dark night away.
 
The multicoloured flowers in the valley
That swing in nightly breezes,
And feed the insects bright;
The trees that grow so mighty
Whilst bushes provide haven to so many
Graceful creatures of the wild.	
The glorious stars that light the dark
The dazzling sun that ripens crops,
The lakes and seas that ripple
And reflect the mountains high:
Is it not easy to understand
How blessed we all are?
Yet do we ever stop 
To thank our dear Lord
And ponder on these gracious gifts?
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Edmonds  Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:44 PM
The world is truly a beautiful place. Love the poem Victor… Beryl
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Oh Victor, thank you for reminding us to stop and thank Him for these wonderful gifts He has so very richly blessed us with, this is a fave, I love it so much!
Winter Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:10 AM
Oh how lucky we are to live in this beautiful world. How lucky I am that I got to read this beautiful poem. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, dear Victor
May Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 6:17 AM
We are left in awe at the beauty and mystery of the universe
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:55 AM
Dearest Victor,what a beautifully contemplative journey you’ve taken us on — from the climb to the quiet, awe-filled reflection on the wonders of creation. Your vivid imagery and gentle reverence remind us to pause, appreciate, and give thanks for the blessings all around us. Love and hugs
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Victor, your wonderful poetry perfectly expresses how beautiful and amazing the universe is. Stunningly lovely insights.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 1:45 AM
You see with your heart and write in sublime Faith with your Art! Composing a so wonderful Verse.. shedding an enlightening light on the blessing wonders of God's creation.. satiating a thirst to a poetry of Beauty and meaning.. restoring enlivening feelings of gratitude.. How blessed we are! How grateful we are to God and to people of God! So grateful to you, Victor, for such a wondrous poetry! Stay always blessed and gifted. My deepest regards and blessings.
Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Thanks for sharing a poem reminding us to be thankful to God for the creation we are allowed to participate in. Praise God from whom all blessings flow, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 1:16 PM
Do we even know how blessed we are! Wonderful write filled with thankfulness!
Sands Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 11:48 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Great descriptions. So much to be grateful for. A Fave for me. :)
Buehler Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 10:12 AM
What tranquility, peace and beauty is portrayed in this exquisite poem! We have so much to thank God for. I loved every line. hugs :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 9:47 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful/lovely write. We need to say, Thank You to God more each day. I was off the computer for a week and now way behind. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away........
George Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 9:42 AM
This universe is a great wonder, full of beauty created by God and it thrills our eyes and other senses. Everything is meticulously arranged for man to enjoy. But hardly man raises his heart in gratitude to God. Indeed it is a pity. Your lovely poem is a sweet reminder to be thankful to God for every blessing.
Rodgers Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Dear Victor, I found myself quietly humbled by the rhythm of dusk, the gliding swallows, and the majesty tucked into flower and flame. Such a luminous reminder to pause, look around, and feel the sacred in the ordinary. Summer Blessings, Dear Victor, Daniel
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 2:38 AM
- A wonderful poem... the creation is amazing... I enjoy this poem, Victor :) - hugs
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