On the Wheelchair

The old man gazed at the sun about to set
And its molten core soon to dissolve in the sea
Scratching his head with tremulous hands
And running his fingers on the stubble of his unshaven face
He held once more tight to his wheel chair
Casually he had a glance at his hands
Those dry, weak and shriveled hands
Gone wrinkled with passing years!

His hands once so busy are now limp
His days once brisk are now long and dull

He noticed the discolored patches on his skin
Under them the lattice of tortuous veins on the dorsum
They run down to join with the bigger ones 
Like small rivulets flowing towards larger rivers

He remembered how the streams from summits
So vigorously come down with a gush
Also the noisy cataracts somersaulting down,
Leaving reverberating echoes all around
But they produce only a soft musical sound
As they join with the rivers and pass through plains 
And finally end in a kind of hushed stillness
Just before merging with the sea!

The old man philosophized;
Life too is like a river:
Fierce and ferocious when one is young
Gentler and sedate after middle age
And slow and sloppy in old age

With this calm acceptance of the need to de-accelerate
Wrapping himself in the shawl against the growing cold
He turned away from the window.

Pushing his wheel chair,
He moved forward,
Knowing no haste…..
Towards his bed for another night’s tired sleep!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 11/26/2021 5:09:00 PM
Beautiful! my mother is 92, independent-living but frail, I concur...
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Date: 11/20/2021 7:04:00 PM
I love the you way you've mingled the river of life with nature's waters, Valsa. This is a FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 11/20/2021 9:03:00 PM
Feel honoured .... if you think this is one of your Faves! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 11/19/2021 11:33:00 AM
How things are for those in advanced years, our once raging river now a gentle stream, we should always live life to the full whilst we have youth and health on our side. Enjoy your weekend Valsa. Tom
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Date: 11/19/2021 6:42:00 PM
Yes, let's make hay while the sun shines ! The shadows are lengthening ! Thank you so much Tom !
Date: 11/19/2021 6:58:00 AM
Great imagery and feel, Valsa, so well written. We do grow old and things get harder to do.
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Date: 11/19/2021 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Eve for visiting my page and for the lovely comment !
Date: 11/19/2021 6:37:00 AM
I like the idea of the river. Alas we grow old and need help. Lovely poem. ~~
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Date: 11/19/2021 8:00:00 AM
Victor, thank you so much....! We need help when we cannot help ourselves.... a sad truth!
Date: 11/19/2021 6:03:00 AM
You built his portrait perfectly, Valsa. I see him in his deep thoughts: ...Life too is like a river: Fierce and ferocious when one is young Gentler and sedate after middle age And slow and sloppy in old age. So well said. Your details speak to the reader.
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Date: 11/19/2021 7:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay for your steady encouragement ! You showed this attitude from the very start. For a beginner it is so very precious !
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