A Shining Afterglow

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Written 9 April 2025

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A Shining Afterglow

we have rambled together
        along the Ganges river
	just you and me
	gazing at each other
we have trodden together
       	the streets of Bombay
	through narrow 
         tortuous lanes
        goading each other
we have sauntered together
	along the Delhi boulevard
	eyeing each other	
         and some of the wonders
         of the world
we have ambled together 
	along the snow-capped hills 
	of Kashmir hand in hand
	skating down the snowy slopes
we have ascended together
	the steep Tripura hills
	laid with thorns
	pulling up each other
we have braved together
	the desert of Arabia
	strolling side by side
	under the torrid sky
	till our throat had run dry
we have explored together
	the Kenyan reserve forest
	with its wild fauna
	breezing together
	with our lips fondling each other
we have roamed together
	in British public parks
        meandering amidst marvellous
	alleys of red roses
	vying with envy 
        at cherry blossoms
	and inhaled their intoxicating scent
we have swum together
	in the cerulean waters
	of the Mauritian shores
 	with the setting sun
	reflecting its pink afterglow
        on the leisurely undulating waves
         where we lay in close embrace
        atop ivory sands.

we have for so long
      	   shared the same roof
		during the summer 
                       of love and care 
                       when the salutary
                       shine of the salubrious sun
		        illumined our lives	
               during the winter
 			of dark despair
			when woeful wild winds
			threatened to blow down
			the façade of our home
we have for so long
	   been duty-bound
      		  caring for each other
			since the break of day
			during the sweet glow of the day
			at the dim twilight hours
			during the darkness of night
we have for so long 
           seamlessly shared
		our joys and sorrows
		our fears and hopes
		our pains and pleasures
		our daydreams and nightmares

now that the autumn of our life
	life Is at close
		let the afterglow 
		of our love linger on and on
		shining until will last our breath. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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