Best Tin Can Poems
Tin Can SailorsThe mighty 3rd to the north did steam,
Chasing a ghost not to be seen
Guard the landing your task assigned,
Quiet the day is to be benign
At dawn the Imperial fleet does appear,
Surprise complete, ranging fire splashes near
Outnumbered and out gunned, duty is clear,
Close the range you...
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Categories:
tin can, courage, inspirational, remember, tribute,
Form:
Rhyme
Tin Can KidHappy (dead) Mother's Day.
A fistful of flowers for your final resting place.
Wasn't blessed with the time to know you.
Your demise was far swifter than your time.
Just a few clips on a strip of 8mm film
From that ancient time:
Your smile was sweet and wide.
A...
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Categories:
tin can, life, loss, mother,
Form:
Free verse
Tin Can With a Wire Handlefrom all identical to nothing identical
many exceptions to no exceptions
eventually deduced from the above
all deductions being eventual
that to have a spirit there must be suffering
now for the latest in strong arm technology
The U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics estimates
that 13,013 food industry workers lost...
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Categories:
tin can, how i feel,
Form:
Free verse
Tin-CanI’m leaking gasoline.
My soles have holes.
Run ragged,
stripped to the bone.
I’m a splintered bat,
shattered by my momentum.
My heart lacks desire,
but it beats
it beats with the hands of a clock.
tick tock tick tock
I’m running on borrowed time
I can’t look back,
see no end in sight.
Lost track of where...
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Categories:
tin can, depression, lonely, lost,
Form:
Free verse
Tin Can AlleyTIN CAN ALLEY
Orbital debris, my ocean of grief.
Fourth rock from the fire, my time will be brief.
Eclipsed by mankind and shrouded in black.
Vexed and impure on the wrong starry track.
Solar to polar, please feel my disease !
Righteous afflictions, being borne out of greed.
Children do...
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Categories:
tin can, space,
Form:
Rhyme
Tin CanDan Cwiak
There Dan Cwiak was, utterly lost below.
The silent waters that surrounded his work,
All but had to go.
"Up Periscope", he cried into the night
"We will not go weakly and meekly,
No, we shall but join the fight!"
The Destroyer above is lost in the fog
This is the...
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Categories:
tin can, allusion, analogy, imagination,
Form:
Rhyme
Tin Can FateThe submarine stayed silent.
Our insides shuddered as we saw.
The base of our war vessel hitting the sea floor.
Too deep to escape and survive the voyage to the shore.
Although the sub was intact it could not move any more.
We felt the eerie silence of realisation setting...
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Categories:
tin can, dark, death, heartbreak, horror,
Form:
Dramatic Verse
Tin Can NavyTo the Signalmen of the Watch
She is cool gray steel, slicing darkest sea.
Crewed by crazed youngsters, both man and woman.
Quiet and deadly, in following seas, free.
No light above, but the Moon and Orion.
Coffee, cigarette, red night lights aglow,
I, reading Conrad, lookouts are all set.
Only...
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Categories:
tin can, adventure, sea, social, work,
Form:
Sonnet
Silver Tin CanSilver tin can swept
by svelte twilight gust, under
amber moonlit gaze
Posted : 4th May 2022...
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Categories:
tin can, beauty, care, celebration, character,
Form:
Senryu
Drunk Man's Tin CanWe had been living in a drunk mans tin can
until up pulled a renovated police van
my beer it hit
the right hand turn switch,
Oh sh it
Sweet,
bring the whole fleet
He lit me me up, I pulled to the shoulder
the cop had my birthday but threw no...
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Categories:
tin can, addiction, analogy, anxiety, art,
Form:
ABC
The Rusty Tin Canraindrops collect on corrogated tin metal
Which covers me in the early morning.
i remember sitting on those steps
and listening to each distinct
drip..drop..drip..
that would come off of the leaves
and trees as the rain fell.
and i suppose there was some
...
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Categories:
tin can, native american, me, me,
Form:
Tin Can Nightdon't be concerned
no matter how well prepared
the glancing blows will come
one by one
at times in clusters
you have to roll with them
wipe the blood off the nose
keep moving forward
like an old plow horse
stumbling up a rocky hill
keep moving upward
using the past as rocket fuel
to reach that...
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Categories:
tin can, journey,
Form:
Free verse
Futile Escape Out Clutches of Penury Rattle Tin Can Oncefinds yours truly groveling along
February third 2022,
never linkedin - analogous to stray animal
without being befriended,
thus I don't belong
survival instincts taught yours truly
the necessity acting
courageous and headstrong
even if necessary
to stare down King Kong,
who actually shows me respect
such that every now and...
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Categories:
tin can, anxiety, dark, depression, destiny,
Form:
Free verse
Futile Escape Out Clutches of Penury Rattle Tin Can TwiceYours truly dug deep with bony strength
in tandem with fantasy notions know
king around in figurative heady
toboggan noggin like cranial carapace
to muster every ounce of strength
in an effort to escape chronic confrontation
with endless streak of bleakness.
Although cursed with brutish,
nasty, and...
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Categories:
tin can, absence, abuse, addiction, america,
Form:
Free verse
Old Paint in Old Tin Can
I pried with a screw-driver driven into a lid
sealed with age, and rust, to crack open a
callous retribution, set aside, tombed over.
I was curious to learn how much remained
and in what condition. Up came the lid with
a gurgle, fizz, hiss, expelled with age...
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Categories:
tin can, forgiveness, remember,
Form:
Other