I Met A Tin Man

His workshop looked neat.
Unlike many others who prefer dusty feat
His tools are arranged in order.
Within a tool-line with a border
He took one at a time.
And placed back in a manner sublime.
Many novices around him he had
To learn from him, they were glad...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A creative/wonderful write/great ending. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
Sharma  Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 12:58 AM
Oh looks like a very disciplined ambience with a brilliant mentor.. Wonderfully expressed here..
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December 2, 2023 at 2:11 AM
Sounds like a great teacher..
Alex Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Your observation is right but a little differently. I am an ordinary teacher.
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