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Soldier of Tin

He took apart his soldier of tin to see for himself what lay within expecting honour, strength valour and pride he eagerly toiled to get inside with soldier now cleaved in two he saw what he thought could not be true half of his warrior now cupped in each hand he gazed at an emptiness he could not understand.

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Date: 8/19/2023 3:57:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your "Soldier" thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/17/2023 7:28:00 AM
This is really good!!!
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