Get Your Premium Membership

Tin Hearts

Through Tin Hearts, shallow pleadings wander unwillingly with time, in concert with a melancholy spectre of Love's past. Surely, it must not be too late to borrow these moments nor to clear the hollowness that echoes from the smithery of despair. Empty of it's consortion , Hope desires respite. Loneliness, on the other hand, always has an eager companion. 07/15/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/5/2020 11:36:00 PM
Charlie and Tin Hearts, 'Loneliness, on the other hand, always has an eager companion. Spoken so well in poem.,as if from the seventh son of a seventh son. -Richard
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 9/6/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Quoth...
Date: 9/5/2020 10:47:00 AM
oh so true Charlie:-( hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 9/6/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Jan...
Date: 8/31/2020 9:42:00 AM
It does indeed, Charlie, a compassionate write, thoughtful . . .
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2020 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Indiana...
Date: 8/31/2020 8:01:00 AM
Oh, so true, Charlie:)
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2020 6:40:00 AM
Thanks Jo...
Date: 8/14/2020 12:16:00 PM
Love this write. The heart can say so many things. Love is the best of all. Enjoy your day writing away................
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 8/24/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Paula...
Date: 7/30/2020 6:13:00 PM
You write the truth!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 8/24/2020 7:04:00 AM
thank you Nancy...
Date: 7/16/2020 4:22:00 PM
You write of the tin smithy and hearts, so I'm reminded of the Tin Man in Oz. You have a big heart, Charlie. Who is the companion of loneliness? It must be a heart made of tin...cold as stone? Certainly not yours. I caught you on a round of visits. Stay well.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 7/16/2020 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Lin...
Date: 7/15/2020 2:31:00 PM
Brilliantly done, Charlie--love the ending lines.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 7/15/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Vijay...
Date: 7/15/2020 12:51:00 PM
I can relate to this meaningful poem Charlie. Well written. I hope all is well. Take care :)
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 7/16/2020 5:22:00 PM
Thank You Heidi...
Date: 7/15/2020 11:03:00 AM
A wonderful write full of truth and meaning, nice to see you penning again Charlie, hope you are recovering well!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Charlie Smith
Date: 7/15/2020 11:59:00 AM
Thanks John, all is well...

Book: Reflection on the Important Things