Best Tidy Poems


Premium Member tidy

poverty a blight 
a dustpan for the fight
keep our cities clean 

armed with will and might
the Israelis got it right
strategy obscene 

burn them in their tents
bid vermin good riddance
best not to be seen

Neat and Tidy

NEAT AND TIDY

astute as a Mermaid
calculating cards
blameless at daylight
night less her dark
yearning a past when
selfish shellfish
blades were placed
out of time
out of mind 

she waits from within
sea bed rocks of stone
beneath the coral glass
veneers of harsh deathly
calamities
blood spoors   of
austere tragedies that
stain yet remain

bodybeached seagarbage
raw gashed lurid
grievously purpled
lie stagnant in rock pools
hidden by pure white sand



shells and claws of
re mottled pores
like tapestries on
forgotten shores
she casts tales
and slides into
forgotten times




© Kim van Breda—3 October 2015

Premium Member Gay Man Tidy

I wish I could be gay man neat and tidy,
instead of straight man disorganized and sloppy.

- Was the above incorrect politically?


Tidy

 TIDY 

" They say , 
Its so beautiful to fall in love ,
With a glitter of shimmer , tender & so clear ,
And the way 
I felt it was ironic . 
They say , 
We stitch the edges of love ,
With knots making it rider with lesser of fear , 
And the way 
I felt it was chronic . " 

S•R• 
@thatoneshe_

Enter Prize Zine Wit 24 Tidy Lines

of mice an men aye n'er doth quit
dialing countless times google 
   fascinating to this human caboodle ling kit upon porcelain goddess, 
most brilliant ideas congeal in me mind, and thou' loo pee did lit
this sole seasoned bugs bunny car tune character son of kit
soon after traipses superhighway road viz imagination 
   fired with fleeting thoughts that hit
sweet soft spot futilely attempt to net ideas in me mind flit
   i yam a poet favoring words that rhyme a bit!
iambic pentameter strands crochet themselves magically con verse
interleaving like boughs of - arbor shielding this solitary soul
   wherein shafts of sunlight dapple cerebral canopy 
   affecting dark shadows at the edge of night to disperse
   from outer limits of the twilight zone
ebbing and flowing in tandem & nsync 
with circadian metronome this trolling
   troubadour lost in space transformed 
   into edenic serenade from Mother Nature 
   while unseen terrestrial oeuvre 
   reassures don’t fear the reaper’s scythe silent curse.

Premium Member Tidy

Located in the perfect place
       Filed in transparent drawer
       Unruly impediments erased
       Facets interact free of flaw


       Seamless system clockwork 
       Methods remain meticulous 
       Design drawn up by a doctor
       Considered,  inconspicuous 


       Routine guides a room's tidy
       Itemising verbatim shelves
       Briefcase organised abiding
       Data struck upon first delve


       Packed in precise patterns
       Utility is readily predicted
       Shipshape sailing on satin
       Scurvy sufferers evicted


        Fold exposes name brand
        Recognised categorically 
        Regular overhauls planned
        Excess viewed as slovenly 


        Upkeep travels compact
        In zipped compartments 
        Disarray tends to detract
        Regimented requirements 


        

       
             8th of **** April


The Outside Tidy Up

The Outside Tidy up.

What on earth am I going to write today,
To keep up my poems for one every day?
I've told of the blitz on the house inside,
Now it was the turn of the scruffy outside.
Cleaned out the waterfall, made it look grander
Refilled it and placed it back on the veranda
I shifted the bags of compost and peat,
Now the front is getting tidy and neat.
I then moved round to work on the back,
The broken down cabinet was first to go,
So I could store winters logs, row upon row.
Now where to put all the gardening stuff?
The old log box would hold all, good enough.
Tomorrow, back front and side I will blast,
With the blower and that maybe the last.
Well tired but glad of a job that's now finished,
Showered and ready for dinner, I'm famished.
Wishful thinking I know,I hope it comes true,
That Fran doesn't find me something to do.

© Dave Timperley 07 August 2016

Premium Member Bang Tidy

Beyond the wildest dreams 
From the dark side 
of the moon 
I am no longer rich 
In love 

Like the six million dollar man 
My circuits explode 
I do not have to shine outwardly 
In a dimension of my own 

Slipping of into another world 
Like a spaceship 
landing on the moon 
With a monkey 
hanging from a tree 

His tail wrapped 
around the branch 
The branch broke 
At the trees joint 
Falling down 

The cow jumped 
over the moon 
Away with the fairies 
to another land 

You would not believe it 
Under a mushroom 
hiding there 
My head spinning 

Around with love 
You found me there 
You kissed the frog 
The fairytale began

Let Me Tidy Up a Few Things

oh lord
before my life has ended
let me tidy up a few things
first, I need a set of wings
for my soul to set sail 
towards 
the kingdom of glory
next, I want to continue 
to serve God
through 
faith and to do His will
through good works
well done thy faithful servant
well done
while
being a guardian angel of mankind
in the presence of God
who is forgiving and merciful
before my life has ended
let me tidy up a few things

Effort Isn’t Loud

I show up ready 
Like it’s nothing, no big deal.
But calm is just a front I put on,
No one sees the ache

They say thanks, but don’t see the work,
Only the finished things I do.
They don’t know how many times
I’ve held it together when it got hard.

They see the results, not the fight,
Like it all came easy overnight.
They say, “You always have it figured out,”
But they don’t know the truth.

I check my work twice or more,
Late at night when no one cares.
I clean and fix before they ask,
But effort’s never what they see
It’s just expected of me.

I hide these tired eyes 
And they love it when it’s done,
But not the work behind it all.

Neat and Tidy

Rows of green spaces in a row

Trying to control natures flow,

all things wild have to conform,

To fit in with accepted norm.

Cut down trees they block out the sun,

Trim the lawn curtailing fun,

Chemical additives help it grow,

nature needs no help why dont you know.

Habitats destroyed no foxes homes,

Cleverer than us able to adapt,

Complaining about sea birds nesting in towns,

High rising buildings to them are cliffs.

Move to the countryside escaping the hub,

but whats this church bells ringing destroying the quiet,

smells of animals permeate the air no use at all,

Silage it is makes the crops grow and flourish.

When all is sanitised what then will we eat?

Grass will be gone under synthetic sheets,

Animals left untouched like sacred cows,

die first before eating meat.

Everyone telling us this and that and how to live

While barricaded in their castles with moats,

Im all right you should be too earn your corn,

like i had to do using a poor mans strength.

In a church somewhere gather the well to do,

shaping a god into their own corrupt image,

We be blessed beyond measure and rule the land,

But thats not what was promised by his mighty hand.

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