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Bang Tidy

Beyond the wildest dreams 
From the dark side 
of the moon 
I am no longer rich 
In love 

Like the six million dollar man 
My circuits explode 
I do not have to shine outwardly 
In a dimension of my own 

Slipping of into another world 
Like a spaceship 
landing on the moon 
With a monkey 
hanging from a tree 

His tail wrapped 
around the branch 
The branch broke 
At the trees joint 
Falling down 

The cow jumped 
over the moon 
Away with the fairies 
to another land 

You would not believe it 
Under a mushroom 
hiding there 
My head spinning 

Around with love 
You found me there 
You kissed the frog 
The fairytale began

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/3/2013 8:14:00 PM
I enjoyed this whimsical fairy tale! You have an amazing way of storytelling within your writing, which allows us to escape our normal everyday lives, and visit a world we could only dream of. Wonderfully written!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 4:37:00 AM
THANK YOU KINDLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/30/2013 2:25:00 PM
the depiction of a fairy tale mixed with Love ..intoxicating
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 2:51:00 PM
AH YOU ARE VERY SWEET THANK YOU SO KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/30/2013 9:49:00 AM
hey, this is surreal!!! LIke a dream poem. I enjoyed it.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 10:09:00 AM
andrea thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 8/30/2013 6:28:00 AM
Hi Liam, Nice write buddy with a fairytale theme... Ken..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 7:22:00 AM
THANK YOU KEN MY OLD FRIEND DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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