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Beyond the wildest dreams From the dark side of the moon I am no longer rich In love Like the six million dollar man My circuits explode I do not have to shine outwardly In a dimension of my own Slipping of into another world Like a spaceship landing on the moon With a monkey hanging from a tree His tail wrapped around the branch The branch broke At the trees joint Falling down The cow jumped over the moon Away with the fairies to another land You would not believe it Under a mushroom hiding there My head spinning Around with love You found me there You kissed the frog The fairytale began

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/3/2013 8:14:00 PM
I enjoyed this whimsical fairy tale! You have an amazing way of storytelling within your writing, which allows us to escape our normal everyday lives, and visit a world we could only dream of. Wonderfully written!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 4:37:00 AM
THANK YOU KINDLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/30/2013 2:25:00 PM
the depiction of a fairy tale mixed with Love ..intoxicating
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 2:51:00 PM
AH YOU ARE VERY SWEET THANK YOU SO KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/30/2013 9:49:00 AM
hey, this is surreal!!! LIke a dream poem. I enjoyed it.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 10:09:00 AM
andrea thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 8/30/2013 6:28:00 AM
Hi Liam, Nice write buddy with a fairytale theme... Ken..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 7:22:00 AM
THANK YOU KEN MY OLD FRIEND DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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