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Timberland Glade

The valley is hushed before daybreak,
until the animals awake.

Fawns snuggle for warmth against their mothers
beneath leaves of aspen trees, 
dappled in dawn's pale light.

In thicket and forest, dense with vines and shrubs, 
there is a lake with cascading waterfall
where Mama Bear fishes for her hungry cubs.

The sun has reached its zenith as a fireball.
Flora are blooming; fauna sleep in the shade
of clouds that will soon bring an afternoon squall.

Crawlers on forest floor, scurry in parade,
as squirrels nibble acorns to their heart's content.
It's a normal day in this timberland glade.

As dusk hurries daylight to make its descent,
weeping willows shed tears of wistful lament.

amber horizon
sun submerges in the sea ~
wolves howl in the night


September 6, 2020
Writing Challenge - Nature Four in One
Sponsored by: Constance La France
* I chose valley, deer, forest and sunset in the order of 
crystalline, kimo, terza rima sonnet, and haiku

Premium Member The Bliss of Solitude

In life’s incessant din
As I search for peace within
Lone spaces I desire
And stillness I adore
Then silence is my mate
And noise is what I hate

Closing my eyes to the outer space
A window opens to my inner space
I begin to find solace in my solitude
And look up to Heaven in gratitude

Enriched with visions pleasurable
I enter into a realm so delectable
The vault of Heaven gemmed and bright
And the Earth and sea overwhelmed in light
The disquiet within me subsides
An unassailable calm slowly descends

I hear a caring voice from somewhere 
A faint voice quite reassuring, so near
Then within me the Wider Life emerges
And the lesser life finally submerges
I experience what is true peace and content
And I am so sure it is heaven sent

Oh! What solace is in my solitude!
And how I move into near beatitude!

Jan.31.2023


Finding Peace Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Regina McIntosh
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Passion

Melodic passion, lilting harmonies lull my slender fingers, 
when I play with the stringed keyboard, I sink into the  mellifluous music, can feel the gentle keys under my fingertips softly as the alchemy notes cadence spasmodically. 

Swirling colours lost in time, chimes of the electric waves  rhyme, repetitive sonorous beats one after the other replete the very ambience with cancerous, calm vibes.


The reverberating strains of those sacrosanct, subliminal-sounds' ripple effects lull senses with esoteric mellow polyphonies and my secluded, aesthetic-self, unconsciously submerges in those polyphonies silently. 

The lyric goes on  and on while immersing  my soul,

the world seems calm from every harm on those ambrosial moments, once the last crescendo is struck, the enamoured silence of tranquility generates an utopia of its own, 
yet, an art of magical touch of each pitch  to the subliminal conscience and existence in sublime solitude can't be captured by interpretive ink

Can sense the  calm after playing  the stringed keyboard in solitude;
the  exalted gadget is the catalyst to inner peace,  a feast to the soul, what makes the esoteric journey complete,  her dreamy rhythm makes my heart beat .
© Silpika Kalita
Form: Lyric


Premium Member The Graduate's Sanctuary

the graduate

      submerges in pool

          Mr. Robinson

               debates career paths above:

sanctuary found in sounds of silence


For Chris's "Sanctuary" contest.  Based on the film "The Graduate."
Form: Tanka

Poucha Dass Meditation

I close my eyes 
locked in a millisecond
the moment before the bow 
touches the strings 
where silence has a tremor
and wraps me in darkness 
until I hear its particles 
vibrating against me
 
the bow wrenches
from the depth of the bass 
a groan from the earth
as if waking a millennia of slumber
the first note
long, rich and haunting
now coming to life 
now ready to speak 
 
legs crossed and hands limp
pay attention 
to the sources of discomfort
tension in the neck, anxiety in the chest
fatigue in the limbs
heaviness in the core
 
let this weight sink
pull down through me 
melt through me
let it drag and seep 
through my bones
until it submerges 
into the ground below
 
transform to roots 
connect me
grow deep into the soil
until the energy is revitalized 
until I am reminded
we grow from this intricate system
no different from the forest and gardens
spreading, connecting, entwining
 
the earth is booming 
the bass its voice
chanting, singing, commanding 
a mantra in a language I don't understand
but with a pulse
I can feel
and it is telling me
I have all I need
 
visualize one by one 
sources of emotional exhaustion
with each dredge up the full power 
of all feelings
feelings long suppressed, feelings of fear
allow body and mind to swim 
one last time 
before I breathe in and blow them away
 
my body is lighter, sitting straighter
a tall blade of grass 
swaying as one
looking across the field 
up to the cliff's edge
and over the sunlit ocean 
 
taste sweet scent
of wind
stretch to feel 
soft earth
open eyes 
to unending sky
focus
on what it means to be alive.

Premium Member Bathing Beauty

Breathe laden islands rise and fall
beneath the steam graced surface of clear water,
capped with rosettes, red-brown, silken, warm,
beaded with water running in rivers
down mountainsides of flesh, puddling,  
in the darken depression of navel.

The water rises, about kneecaps
pristine and alabaster in hue.
Angular shoulders hug the far end of the tub.
A slender neck held aloft, crowned with auburn hair
and hazel eyes, changling orbs, of green and gold
an a oval face rivaling Modigliani’s Madonna.

A ruddy glow spreads across high cheekbones.
The rising water submerges all, 
but porcelain neck and upturned face,
tendrils, tresses, coil, splay on still water.

Lids droop languidly, lips pout petulantly,
and still the water rises
buoying delicate arms, ending in fingers 
...avidly playing.. upon 
the pearl white key to desire.


Road More Traveled

Her hands were happy, 
she fluttered them against 
a cliché sense of blue in the air
and laughed when the allure of 
the flowers further on trilled against
her skin. She submerges herself in light,
filtering through veined jade appendages.
-deeper-

Life is what she lusts for, 
twirling in circles with the moon 
to see if she can become a world of her own.
She picks roses and strips the petals 
to smell the thorns –and shakes her head
because none of her pain is original.
Even so, she breaks into a run, bitter
at the dust beneath her and
every single one of the 
footprint after footprint scars.
She might as well not even try the other road,
they tell her.
-the light bends around her, she rubs her eyes
to rid them of the green edge-

She realizes too late, the thorns are disappeared.
The path stretches on without end –it draws her into
a malachite mist. 
She inhales slowly and 
gags against the moisture that now 
condenses on the walls of her lungs.
Clawing at her tongue, she stains her fingers 
with mucous.
-The sky bleeds poisonous green arcs-     
    -what happened to the blue-

The heels of her palm against her eyes
-a vain attempt to salvage color-
she screams as she turns –
inside out, emerald. She feels them 
sour, glassing over premature
and dripping venom. Liquid
strains her veins against her clouding skin.
She vomits bark, 
desecrating the space between her toes –
putrid, willowy leaves sprout from her hair.
She looks up as if from beneath miles of
sea water, her undulating legs firmly rooted.
-I don’t want it-
   she says faintly.

and the forest groans against her weight,
settling slowly like ash on the residue of thorn-ridden existence.
-The pulse glows green-
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Seared Sunrise - Tautogram

Strength sparce, shattered self-esteem 
Should she shout, should she scream
Stunned she sat, spirit suddenly shorn
Should she show said 'spouse's scorn'

Sorrow's sting submerges, silence surrounds, sanity slips
Splintered, she seeks satisfaction searching spite's sinking ships
© FJ Thomas  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Tautogram

Undefined Emotions

As each thought races, the mind slows down to give such images,
In every sense of imagination, wonder sparks,
Enlightened, I start tapping the keys as the words form into phrases,
Emotion is drawn from these letters that are hieroglyphs to hearts in the dark,
The raw, unrefined, realness to such depth within,
Emanates the wonder flowing goosebumps on my skin,
An awareness of a breeze and smell of the salty seas,
The sunlight that struck within the trees,
Its grace only felt by ones who stop and notice,
Such beauty that submerges any doubt of being,
Any false hope of expectation. Any rage or disappointment.
In a split moment, an overwhelming feeling to comprehend,
An understanding that is forever held but is gone upon a second thought,
Moving each feet with a wonder of the search,
Baring my skin, my ears, my eyes and nose,
In hopes of the next glimpse of such bliss and joy.
As simple as is it, nothing can take the oneness away when all has halt.
Your mind only drifts in the slow inducing symbol of a natural state of being.
A calm that floods your heart and feeds your soul.
It is indeed around me. The effects of which has affected me within.
For now, my mind is ever open in this sequence of these undefined emotions.

Spring's Sensation

Winter and summer
submerges your sweet sensation
… the fair flowers affection
Form: Haiku

Hurricane Harvey Landfall August 27th 2017

This long time doodling Yankee 
(who calls Southeastern Montgomery, Pennsylvania LV
plus III four seasons visited 
   upon swath of topography to see
and hear flora and fauna over run 
   via industrialization he doth experience pity
sympathy, humanity deafening cacophony undermining 
   once abundant bounty, which mutiny 
upon bounty outwits mother nature in this REAL LIFE “GAME” of jeopardy 
where survival of the fattest dominates avast geography

thence a tempest in a global teapot doth brew
which phenomena Gaia foments, inducing meteorologists due
tee fully issuing catastrophic fallout asper category 5 carved foo
tang clan along Gulf Coast 
   reserving special vengeance (alas domino effect) 
   for oil derricks hue mans insatiably drill into 
   ever more difficult to access reservoirs sans fossil fuels, but Jew
blintz echoes across watery expanse when excavator loo
king for liquid gold hit a mother lode (or off shoot) exciting new
man hick pumps furiously fracking gnome hatter 
   watching grim faced absent magic spells such as phew 
fi foe...aghast at the rapacious, pernicious, malicious....rue
th less ness heaped upon Planet Earth, 
   where tipping point 
   re: specifically *****Sapiens over population will true

lee interrogate meteorological altercations, conflagrations, and
exterminations of multitudinous botanical & animal genus or species 
   as wrath of monster storms akin to a oceanic brigand
wreaking loss of life and limb, additionally bringing destruction 
as megadeath metal lick ha - monstrous maelstrom 
   mercilessly muscles itself when making land
fall, where record rainfall submerges once smug Texans man
dated to evacuate far from the pan
demon harum-scarum as retribution for incessant lambasting wan
ton ness exploiting terrestrial resources selfishly will eventually ban
hush the dominant primate requisitioned to become extinct – anon.
Form: Imagism

Premium Member A Whale of a Tale

A whale perches
   next an isle
   teeming with humanity

   A little girl smiles and waves
   the whale submerges
   as the sun nods its approval

Plumb Line Hoisted Deep

Brainstorm cometh, damning frontal hemisphere
jamming lookout, noggin perched, roiling thinking
uber wayfaring zealot, drills legendary phalanx.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Writer's block afflicts Das scribe,
     who whiz now stricken supine
     adept dull livery sub par excellence
     his gold standard worse

thus, another day
     to slog thru arduous process
     crafting admirable verse
wrestling behemoth loosed sniper
     dodging enfilade broadcast sos terse.

N'er easy chore to fashion
     acceptable word worth poem to whit
staring at flickering
     accursed cursor doth blank stare visit

flash flooding warning saturated
     gray matter fist sized unit
groundswell burgeoning leveed banks
     barging signals transmit

urgent army corps of engineers
     to reroute via sluice, sans surfeit
apprentice longshoreman
     doth double duty

     as grammarian sought to retrofit
arduous struggle ensues, where drowning
     affects consummation
     strong temptation quit

ditch ching progress made,
     thus far in hot pursuit
mind comfortably numb
     stream of consciousness

     submerges concentration
     entrenched deep posit
craftiness sentenced to punctuate
     disequilibrium doth outwit

venerably beaded trademark
     Scottish matted flair
     abandoned unfinished poem
     left forever stranded orbit
     zero escape velocity

zinging, unsprung, 
     pinging mindscape nonprofit
able endeavor reflecting zeitgeist
     bombarding Messerschmitt
undermining, strafing, disabling
     cutting crew rescue outer limit
faint feint blinking in the twilight zone.

Feeling

O! Abstract thing 
I have never seen you 
You exist in my thought 
You find your residence in my heart 
And travel sometimes to my mind. 

You exist as an idea 
You flow within my body 
You submerge yourself with my blood like a river submerges itself with an ocean. 

I smile when cool breeze touches my skin 
I know that touch is you 
My heart whimpers when I'm pained 
I know that pain is you 
I bawl like a bolt of lighting when I'm vexed 
I know that vex is you 
I remain closemouthed when I'm depressed 
I know that depression is you.

I reflect you in my smile 
I reflect you in my tears 
I reflect you in my voice 
I reflect you in my silence 
I pen you down when you are in my mind 
I'm within you 
You are within me 
I own you 
You own me. 

- Ankita Panda
© Ankita I   Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member The Bath

Breath laden islands rise and fall
beneath the steam-graced surface of clear water,
capped with rosettes, red-brown, silken, warm,
beaded with water running in rivulets
down hillsides of flesh, puddling,  
in the dark oval navel of desire.

Water rises about kneecaps
pristine and alabaster in hue.
Angular shoulders hug the far end of the tub.
A slender neck is held aloft, crowned with auburn hair
and hazel eyes, changling orbs, of green and gold
in an oval face rivaling Modigliani’s Madonna.

A ruddy glow spreads across high cheekbones.
The rising water submerges all, but the mounds
and the porcelain neck with its upturned face, full,
full of moans as tendrils, curl and coil splay upon
the rocking water.

Lids droop languidly, lips pout petulantly,
as the water invades, buoying delicate arms,
lending slip to fingertips, fingerstips 
...avidly playing.. upon 
the pearl white key of desire.

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