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The Passion

Melodic passion, lilting harmonies lull my slender fingers, 
when I play with the stringed keyboard, I sink into the  mellifluous music, can feel the gentle keys under my fingertips softly as the alchemy notes cadence spasmodically. 

Swirling colours lost in time, chimes of the electric waves  rhyme, repetitive sonorous beats one after the other replete the very ambience with cancerous, calm vibes.


The reverberating strains of those sacrosanct, subliminal-sounds' ripple effects lull senses with esoteric mellow polyphonies and my secluded, aesthetic-self, unconsciously submerges in those polyphonies silently. 

The lyric goes on  and on while immersing  my soul,

the world seems calm from every harm on those ambrosial moments, once the last crescendo is struck, the enamoured silence of tranquility generates an utopia of its own, 
yet, an art of magical touch of each pitch  to the subliminal conscience and existence in sublime solitude can't be captured by interpretive ink

Can sense the  calm after playing  the stringed keyboard in solitude;
the  exalted gadget is the catalyst to inner peace,  a feast to the soul, what makes the esoteric journey complete,  her dreamy rhythm makes my heart beat .
© Silpika Kalita
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 5:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Anaya Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 4:04 PM
Silpika I was pleased to have joined in on your esoteric journey. Flowing so smoothly The lyric should it be accompanied by your passioned playing on the audio would be heavenly to hear. hugs poetess and warmest wishes~Anaya
Kalita Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 2:09 AM
Dear Anaya. Your feedback is always heart warming. Not only u have a golden heart but also golden words. Hugs
Slaughter Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 10:38 AM
I don't play any musical instruments, but I have certainly had some of the experiences you mention in this piece from just listening to some of my favorites. I like classical music, especially. Love the pics, BTW.
Kalita Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 7:29 PM
Thanks much Jim.
Dome Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Wow. What a beautiful work of art. Perfect exquisite and sublime. Pete.
Kalita Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 7:29 PM
Thanks much Peter. I appreciate your time to review
Edmonds  Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 4:18 PM
Silpika, this lyric poem expresses your love of playing the stringed keyboard which I would so love to be able to do. Music is the harmony that elevates the mood and the soul. Music and poetry are combined arts, keep playing and writing from your heart… Belle
Kalita Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 8:52 PM
Thank you much Belle for the wonderful feedback and visiting.... Silpika
Tor Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 1:16 PM
Music is such a relaxing and wonderful experience Our Lord created, and the effects you feel are all his creation to experience. Thanks for sharing Silpika...
Kalita Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 1:31 PM
True, thanks Michael.. Have a blessed day
Fowler Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 5:38 AM
I sink into this musical phantasmagoria you so aptly and superbly script Silpika. I favor your last two stanzas. hugs, Linda
Kalita Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 5:53 AM
Thanks much dear Linda... Hugs
Proxenos Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Hi Silpika what a medley of breathtaking topics you always choose to write about, your versatility and eloquent phrases are simply delightful and your general knowledge excellent - you are unbelievable, a poetess who will live on in eras and history books to come. A WONDERFUL WRITE AS ALWAYS. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kalita Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Thank you much dear Jennifer. I am much honoured by your precious feedback.... Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 9:11 AM
You describe it beautifully . Sure wish I had this talent which you seem to have!! I loved this line here: he world seems calm from every harm on those ambrosial moments
Kalita Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 7:09 PM
Thanks much dear Andrea for the splendid review, have a blessed day with music.....
Baker Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 3:09 PM
Beautiful poem, Silpika. A joy to read and internalize. I happy for you to have found something that you can immerse yourself in and experience the oneness at ther soul level of consciousness. Music has a power within it that is more that notes and sound. Your comprehension of the vibration is obvious through your ability to communicate on different levels concerning how the music and playing it communicates with your soul. Smiles ~ Blessings I'm following your poetry my friend. Bill
Kalita Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 3:20 PM
Thanks much Bill for those wonderful words, much revered by your revered words.... gratitude
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 12:42 PM
WOW!!! What a beautiful write and pictures. I Love your line, "The music goes on while immersing my soul." Yes, music does that. I wish you would write. more. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............
Kalita Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 2:21 PM
Thank you much dear Paula for those magnetic words and accolade... have a blessed day...
George Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 11:32 PM
The soothing vibrations, music can bring upon the soul is tremendous !"Under the moonlit, the euphonic ditties echo through the trees, under the rustles of leaves, each sacred note heals covering each hole of my soul." Indeed music is so therapeutic ! Sup on heavenly music, dear! Silpika, I feel lost in the beauty of your diction ! Lovely penning.....
Kalita Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 2:20 PM
Thanks much dear Valsa, you are not only an amazing poetess, but also an amazing reviewer... have a blessed day... Silpika
Seeker Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 6:30 PM
“existence in sublime solitude” ~ music was ver my forte but I can relate to the sounds of silence. Beautiful poem penned, Silpika, enjoyed from start to finish
Kalita Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Thanks much for such sublime words... Silpika
Rose  Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Its nice that you have the talent to play such a wonderful instrument, would you be able to put music to one of my lyrical songs, ?
Kalita Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Thank you much dear for those lyrical words, just a passion ye nit sure, whether have the dexterity enough to cater such wonderful lyrics of yours. But, can give a try, if found eligible... hugs and blessings
Lawrence Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 6:33 AM
I love this Silpika ! So many wonderful passages . I love your immersion into the movement of the keys, the cadence of the music and the healing vibrations that are allowed into your heart and inner soul. A sacred dance between you and the keyboard , and a healing energy received . Beautiful words and music intertwined. Blessings, Susan :)
Kalita Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:35 AM
Thank you much Susan for the wonderful feedback.
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