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The Passion

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Melodic passion, lilting harmonies lull my slender fingers, when I play with the stringed keyboard, I sink into the mellifluous music, can feel the gentle keys under my fingertips softly as the alchemy notes cadence spasmodically. Swirling colours lost in time, chimes of the electric waves rhyme, repetitive sonorous beats one after the other replete the very ambience with cancerous, calm vibes. The reverberating strains of those sacrosanct, subliminal-sounds' ripple effects lull senses with esoteric mellow polyphonies and my secluded, aesthetic-self, unconsciously submerges in those polyphonies silently. The lyric goes on and on while immersing my soul, the world seems calm from every harm on those ambrosial moments, once the last crescendo is struck, the enamoured silence of tranquility generates an utopia of its own, yet, an art of magical touch of each pitch to the subliminal conscience and existence in sublime solitude can't be captured by interpretive ink Can sense the calm after playing the stringed keyboard in solitude; the exalted gadget is the catalyst to inner peace, a feast to the soul, what makes the esoteric journey complete, her dreamy rhythm makes my heart beat . © Silpika Kalita

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/21/2024 5:41:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/11/2024 4:04:00 PM

Silpika I was pleased to have joined in on your esoteric journey. Flowing so smoothly The lyric should it be accompanied by your passioned playing on the audio would be heavenly to hear. hugs poetess and warmest wishes~Anaya

Silpika Kalita
Date: 4/23/2024 2:09:00 AM

Dear Anaya. Your feedback is always heart warming. Not only u have a golden heart but also golden words. Hugs

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/18/2024 10:38:00 AM

I don't play any musical instruments, but I have certainly had some of the experiences you mention in this piece from just listening to some of my favorites. I like classical music, especially. Love the pics, BTW.

Silpika Kalita
Date: 3/18/2024 7:29:00 PM

Thanks much Jim.

Peter Dome

Date: 3/17/2024 7:41:00 PM

Wow. What a beautiful work of art. Perfect exquisite and sublime. Pete.

Silpika Kalita
Date: 3/18/2024 7:29:00 PM

Thanks much Peter. I appreciate your time to review

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/14/2022 4:18:00 PM

Silpika, this lyric poem expresses your love of playing the stringed keyboard which I would so love to be able to do. Music is the harmony that elevates the mood and the soul. Music and poetry are combined arts, keep playing and writing from your heart… Belle

Silpika Kalita
Date: 8/14/2022 8:52:00 PM

Thank you much Belle for the wonderful feedback and visiting.... Silpika

Michael Tor

Date: 8/10/2022 1:16:00 PM

Music is such a relaxing and wonderful experience Our Lord created, and the effects you feel are all his creation to experience. Thanks for sharing Silpika...

Silpika Kalita
Date: 8/10/2022 1:31:00 PM

True, thanks Michael.. Have a blessed day

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/10/2022 5:38:00 AM

I sink into this musical phantasmagoria you so aptly and superbly script Silpika. I favor your last two stanzas. hugs, Linda

Silpika Kalita
Date: 8/10/2022 5:53:00 AM

Thanks much dear Linda... Hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/9/2022 8:24:00 AM

Hi Silpika what a medley of breathtaking topics you always choose to write about, your versatility and eloquent phrases are simply delightful and your general knowledge excellent - you are unbelievable, a poetess who will live on in eras and history books to come. A WONDERFUL WRITE AS ALWAYS. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silpika Kalita
Date: 8/9/2022 11:10:00 AM

Thank you much dear Jennifer. I am much honoured by your precious feedback.... Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2022 9:11:00 AM

You describe it beautifully . Sure wish I had this talent which you seem to have!! I loved this line here: he world seems calm from every harm on those ambrosial moments

Silpika Kalita
Date: 7/5/2022 7:09:00 PM

Thanks much dear Andrea for the splendid review, have a blessed day with music.....

Bill Baker

Date: 7/4/2022 3:09:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Silpika. A joy to read and internalize. I happy for you to have found something that you can immerse yourself in and experience the oneness at ther soul level of consciousness. Music has a power within it that is more that notes and sound. Your comprehension of the vibration is obvious through your ability to communicate on different levels concerning how the music and playing it communicates with your soul. Smiles ~ Blessings I'm following your poetry my friend. Bill

Silpika Kalita
Date: 7/4/2022 3:20:00 PM

Thanks much Bill for those wonderful words, much revered by your revered words.... gratitude

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2022 12:42:00 PM

WOW!!! What a beautiful write and pictures. I Love your line, "The music goes on while immersing my soul." Yes, music does that. I wish you would write. more. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............

Silpika Kalita
Date: 7/4/2022 2:21:00 PM

Thank you much dear Paula for those magnetic words and accolade... have a blessed day...

Valsa George

Date: 7/3/2022 11:32:00 PM

The soothing vibrations, music can bring upon the soul is tremendous !"Under the moonlit, the euphonic ditties echo through the trees, under the rustles of leaves, each sacred note heals covering each hole of my soul." Indeed music is so therapeutic ! Sup on heavenly music, dear! Silpika, I feel lost in the beauty of your diction ! Lovely penning.....

Silpika Kalita
Date: 7/4/2022 2:20:00 PM

Thanks much dear Valsa, you are not only an amazing poetess, but also an amazing reviewer... have a blessed day... Silpika

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/3/2022 6:30:00 PM

“existence in sublime solitude” ~ music was ver my forte but I can relate to the sounds of silence. Beautiful poem penned, Silpika, enjoyed from start to finish

Silpika Kalita
Date: 7/4/2022 2:19:00 PM

Thanks much for such sublime words... Silpika

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/3/2022 2:22:00 PM

Its nice that you have the talent to play such a wonderful instrument, would you be able to put music to one of my lyrical songs, ?

Silpika Kalita
Date: 7/3/2022 2:31:00 PM

Thank you much dear for those lyrical words, just a passion ye nit sure, whether have the dexterity enough to cater such wonderful lyrics of yours. But, can give a try, if found eligible... hugs and blessings

Susan Lawrence

Date: 7/2/2022 6:33:00 AM

I love this Silpika ! So many wonderful passages . I love your immersion into the movement of the keys, the cadence of the music and the healing vibrations that are allowed into your heart and inner soul. A sacred dance between you and the keyboard , and a healing energy received . Beautiful words and music intertwined. Blessings, Susan :)

Silpika Kalita
Date: 7/3/2022 3:35:00 AM

Thank you much Susan for the wonderful feedback.