The Bath

Breath laden islands rise and fall
beneath the steam-graced surface of clear water,
capped with rosettes, red-brown, silken, warm,
beaded with water running in rivulets
down hillsides of flesh, puddling,  
in the dark oval navel of desire.

Water rises about kneecaps
pristine and alabaster in hue.
Angular shoulders hug the far end of the tub.
A slender neck is held aloft, crowned with auburn hair
and hazel eyes, changling orbs, of green and gold
in an oval face rivaling Modigliani’s Madonna.

A ruddy glow spreads across high cheekbones.
The rising water submerges all, but the mounds
and the porcelain neck with its upturned face, full,
full of moans as tendrils, curl and coil splay upon
the rocking water.

Lids droop languidly, lips pout petulantly,
as the water invades, buoying delicate arms,
lending slip to fingertips, fingerstips 
...avidly playing.. upon 
the pearl white key of desire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 5, 2011 at 10:50 PM
D.G.,;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 9:20 PM
wow, splendid erotica, Debs!! Congratulations on your win. (first word omit e)
Smith Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 6:41 PM
Ah, the pearl white key to desire. I've been looking for one of those. Congratulations on your win.
Arowolo Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Fine write,Debbie.Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....
Brown Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 10:14 AM
super congrats Debbie on another wonderful win luv..
Richards Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 8:33 AM
CALGON....TAKE ME AWAY!!! Wow, if you wrote the adds for bath products, sales would skyrocket!!!!! (The water is hot!) :)
Williams Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:03 PM
A slender neck held aloft a crown of auburn and hazel eyes rivaling Modigliani’s Madonna.....??? email you how... Deborah ..without an address.. input and IF are intriguing.....but maybe I am just thick... as I haven't figured out how to contact somone through soup mail....
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