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Timberland Glade

The valley is hushed before daybreak, until the animals awake. Fawns snuggle for warmth against their mothers beneath leaves of aspen trees, dappled in dawn's pale light. In thicket and forest, dense with vines and shrubs, there is a lake with cascading waterfall where Mama Bear fishes for her hungry cubs. The sun has reached its zenith as a fireball. Flora are blooming; fauna sleep in the shade of clouds that will soon bring an afternoon squall. Crawlers on forest floor, scurry in parade, as squirrels nibble acorns to their heart's content. It's a normal day in this timberland glade. As dusk hurries daylight to make its descent, weeping willows shed tears of wistful lament. amber horizon sun submerges in the sea ~ wolves howl in the night September 6, 2020 Writing Challenge - Nature Four in One Sponsored by: Constance La France * I chose valley, deer, forest and sunset in the order of crystalline, kimo, terza rima sonnet, and haiku

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Date: 9/29/2020 1:19:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 9/22/2020 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your imagination and pen are working overtime. I love your line, "where Mama Bear fishes for her hungry cubs." Another wonderful write. Enjoy your win..............
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Date: 9/21/2020 2:45:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2020 7:33:00 AM
- A wonderful poem X 4, Jenna - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2020 5:21:00 PM
My favorite so far! Especially: Fawns snuggle for warmth against their mothers beneath leaves of aspen trees. Congratulations, Jenna!
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Date: 9/9/2020 4:44:00 AM
Very powerful imagery Jenna! A very beautifully written piece!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/11/2020 3:53:00 AM
Thank you for liking these lines, Mark.
Date: 9/7/2020 5:08:00 AM
Wow, you have created something beautiful here, Jenna, it gives me a calm peaceful feeling reading it. I think this will do well in the contest. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/7/2020 11:04:00 AM
I'm happy to have provided you with even a few moments of respite from a world gone mad, John. Thank you for your 'think'. lol
Date: 9/6/2020 6:18:00 PM
Jenna, you must live in the most enchanting place on earth. Your poems are full of evocative verse. I learn a lot from your efforts. Many thanks for the enjoyable read. Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 7:03:00 PM
Hi Linda. I have an active imagination and my impressions of this wonderful glade would be a lovely place in which to live. I'm delighted that you think I've described it from reality, and that's quite a nice thing to know. Thank you!
Date: 9/6/2020 9:30:00 AM
Stunning superb piece Jenna, a really fine write with good imagery and expression. Hope you're doing well,Blessings,Gordon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, as ever, Gordon.
Date: 9/6/2020 9:28:00 AM
Wow you have done this so well jenna these are quite challenging forms, such lovely imagery I especially like the haiku ending and the crystaline , I've not had chance to even look at the contest, good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 5:57:00 PM
I always appreciate the information about something a reader particularly likes, so thank you for that, Jan. It's a really good idea for a contest...different and fun.

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