Timberland Glade

The valley is hushed before daybreak, until the animals awake. Fawns snuggle for warmth against their mothers beneath leaves of aspen trees, dappled in dawn's pale light. In thicket and forest, dense with vines and shrubs, there is a lake with cascading waterfall where Mama Bear fishes for her hungry cubs. The sun has reached its zenith as a fireball. Flora are blooming; fauna sleep in the shade of clouds that will soon bring an afternoon squall. Crawlers on forest floor, scurry in parade, as squirrels nibble acorns to their heart's content. It's a normal day in this timberland glade. As dusk hurries daylight to make its descent, weeping willows shed tears of wistful lament. amber horizon sun submerges in the sea ~ wolves howl in the night September 6, 2020 Writing Challenge - Nature Four in One Sponsored by: Constance La France * I chose valley, deer, forest and sunset in the order of crystalline, kimo, terza rima sonnet, and haiku
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La France Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your imagination and pen are working overtime. I love your line, "where Mama Bear fishes for her hungry cubs." Another wonderful write. Enjoy your win..............
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 7:33 AM
- A wonderful poem X 4, Jenna - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 5:21 PM
My favorite so far! Especially: Fawns snuggle for warmth against their mothers beneath leaves of aspen trees. Congratulations, Jenna!
Koplin Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 4:44 AM
Very powerful imagery Jenna! A very beautifully written piece!
Logan Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 3:53 AM
Thank you for liking these lines, Mark.
Gondolf Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 5:08 AM
Wow, you have created something beautiful here, Jenna, it gives me a calm peaceful feeling reading it. I think this will do well in the contest. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 11:04 AM
I'm happy to have provided you with even a few moments of respite from a world gone mad, John. Thank you for your 'think'. lol
Fowler Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Jenna, you must live in the most enchanting place on earth. Your poems are full of evocative verse. I learn a lot from your efforts. Many thanks for the enjoyable read. Linda
Logan Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Hi Linda. I have an active imagination and my impressions of this wonderful glade would be a lovely place in which to live. I'm delighted that you think I've described it from reality, and that's quite a nice thing to know. Thank you!
Mcconnell Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Stunning superb piece Jenna, a really fine write with good imagery and expression. Hope you're doing well,Blessings,Gordon
Logan Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, as ever, Gordon.
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Wow you have done this so well jenna these are quite challenging forms, such lovely imagery I especially like the haiku ending and the crystaline , I've not had chance to even look at the contest, good luck:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 5:57 PM
I always appreciate the information about something a reader particularly likes, so thank you for that, Jan. It's a really good idea for a contest...different and fun.
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