Best Rim Poems


Cry From the Rim

Where the water washes white surfs across
Sand banks porous with green dreams in our hearts
Where the sun surveys the wet desert of loss
The salt thread like blood stitching together our parts
Find me there wandering the wailing shores
I am a new citizen with ancient desires still
Living on the restless rim of of crinkled azures;
Watching history bleach my memory of will.
Here I pine to see my mother whole as I am
Here I pray for justice from the impaled lamb 

This Caribbean sea that pens my rage in me
Water where my ancestors footsteps no imprints leave
Of vast voyages now void on the Atlantic lea
This Caribbean sea in modern voice I cannot grieve
My people sundered like a broken ship
Mastless, anchorless, drifting drumless on weed
My people bleeding from tongue lash and whip
And no Cudjoe, Tacky, or Boukman to intercede
I am a citizen of the rim, a place undefined
In the subtle representations where I'm maligned.

Here in this world of diverse languages and shade
Across the bloodless salt of shrivelled water we trade.

Premium Member Of Freedoms Rim

They would have all of our thoughts
align in eclipse of the truth
blot from our eyes cold tears
not shed at reasons death

No more the fiendish touch
of tempting speech
to challenge questions asked
and why

Nor does the hand of wonder
dare reach to touch
for fear it might enrage
the gods they praise

Thus do the lemmings march
to chanted hymn
along the darkened edge
of freedom's rim

John G. Lawless
3/1/2021

Anagram- - Batman Alder Rim

Secret Identity, covered face
and my thoughts begin to drain
I wander who the real Batman is
Is his name really Bruce Wayne?

His real ID kept secret
So we should recieve
All possibilities of who he could be,
Including ones we don't perceive

So now we have a Mystery
Let's put Batman on a brim
Bruce Wayne is his "secret secret" ID
Batman, for real, is Alder Rim
~*Miranda Lambert*~


A Toilets Rim

Perished in thought burn all things to ash    
Like those inspired by a shadows edge,  
But who is blessed in the miracle of life, the complexity of thought and dream  
Under the question from ones conscience; 
Strange it is when truth has breached  
By a thousand souls descendant 
And the drip from my toilets rim  

Give to us all the vision of change    
Deep in thought and perception,  
Until the sanctity our intent inspired  
Is characterized by the solitude within; 
Speak the lines in reflected reason 
When impressions are all unjust  
Under the drip from my toilets rim

Do not desert what lays condoned   
By the ancient deceptive oracle,
For there is no explanation to complexities, or the isolation of its decent 
Into our moral servitude;
Listen to the knowledge in the words we speak
The question of a thought applied   
To that drip from my toilets rim

The Lemon Wedge On the Rim of Your Glass

The Lemon Wedge on the Rim of Your Glass

By Elton Camp

Exposure to germs isn’t always a blight
They make the immune system work right

In normal living, we get all that we need
But lemon wedges all good sense exceed

It’s quite likely that you are going to find
The lemon picker scratched his behind

Washing lemons, restaurants say they do
In most cases, the claim simply isn’t true

Lemons are dirty when they enter the door
In the café, they’ll get contaminated more

Slicing is done with hands germy as can be
And the knives used aren’t of bacteria free

The slices are handled with glove or tong
Think that and you’re usually very wrong

Servers pick them up with hands unwashed
And against the glass rim they are squashed

With pathogenic bacteria your drink is spiked
The risk of getting sick has just been hiked

A recent study found bacteria such as these
Pathogens from skin, saliva and even feces

Even when it’s “No lemon” that you say
It may appear on or in your drink anyway

Drinks lemon-free really ought to remain
If from drinking germs you would abstain
© Elton Camp  Create an image from this poem.

Rattling Rim Shot


So you took your best shot,
but sadly it rimmed out
Rocket swish arc reached for the brightest star ... 
only to receive 
a missed blastoff launch tipoff  
Got time zone sent       head fake crash landing 
to the parquet floor ocean bottom

Love is a heart rattling thing ... 
net elusive, 
and so very nylon tantalizing

And when you make the wrong call,
false accusations that fray
Out of the hoop pops the ball — 
a certain love score
gets taken away

Now you’re muttering low,
back pedaling thru life so slow
Pounding your fist into your chest,
knowing that you never really gave your best

Ever looking to shoot for 
the easy access escape route,
because the tight rim of iron doubt
always caused a falling out

And when the circular tears
would finally start to double dribble down,
only the comforting benched touch 
of your leather sofa felt soft

Then faded backcourt memory fears,
became a slippery slope surface 
for a failed playa pawn Globetrotting clown

It was your last shot to win,
but the sure aim drop just rattled out
To the high displeasure 
of a mumbling, low-post peeved pout

Losing ain’t a sin,
if love 
wasn’t a game 
you were simply playing


A Toilets Rim

Perishes in time the meaning of our lives  
Instilling things from a darkness of shadow,  
But who did bless this miracle, the complexity of thought and dream  
Under the question from ones conscience; 
Strange it is when truth is breached  
By a thousand souls descendant 
And the drip from my toilets rim  

At times we are callous to changes in ourselves     
Though deep it is in thought and perception,  
Until the sanctity our intent inspired  
Is characterized by the solitude within; 
Speak the lines in reflected reason 
Here deep with faiths intent   
Under the drip from my toilets rim

Do not desert from what lays instilled 
The ancient deceptive oracle,
For there is no explanation to complexities, or the isolation of its decent 
Into that moral servitude;
Listen to the knowledge in the words we speak
When questioned are our thoughts applied   
To that drip from my toilets rim

Premium Member THE FRAME OF HIS DAYS

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The wire rims~
thin as a whisper,  
holding the weight of every page he turned,  
every clockface he squinted at before dawn.  

Now they sit,  
empty orbits on my desk.  
I lift them,  
and the world bends~  
not as he saw it,  
but as I imagine he did:  

The morning newsprint smudging into prayer,  
the stubborn lawnmower that refused to start,  
my childhood face,  
always slightly out of focus,  
as if love itself were a thing  
that needed adjusting.  

I wear them like a ghost.  
The bridge rests light,  
almost apologetic,  
as if they knew  
they were never meant to be mine.  

Through Pop’s lenses,  
the light is softer,  
the edges kinder.  
The coffee stains on the counter  
look like continents he never visited.  
The crossword puzzle~  
half-finished,  
pen dropped mid-clue~  
becomes a map of all the words  
he didn’t have time to say.  

I take them off.  
The room sharpens  
into my own life again,  
but for a moment,  
I swear,  
the air smelled like his aftershave,  
and the light was gold,  
the way it is  
just before it fades.

Premium Member Spilling Over the Rim

My heart is a vessel of blessings that always spills over its rim.




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June 9, 2017
The Glass is Always Full
Sponsor: Alexis Y
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.

Roll Up the Rim

The contest came on yesterday
to roll your rim again.
The time going into rolling them
from here to there and then.

To win a prize for certainty.
The odds at six to one.
Just knowing that I'm drinking all
to up until there's none.

The winners often coming back
to get their fill of food.
The likely prize for everyone
especially if it's brewed.

And still I go on rolling them
with prizes on my mind.
Enjoying every coffee made
that each cup has to grind.

Outer Rim

If a star appears would be to much to ask it real

A dark side of red amber light shield of rusk

Darken the shade reflect of pain what is of ambition to strike

If telekinesis was real and chakra was more then energy what

Word 

Would be able to describe a figure?

Like glass shallow to the effect of time what moment hold of

Truth to search for reason?

Not all cause and effect start with a big bang

But with all similar question 

Answers all do evolve.

Caul Tour Rim

which words
makes him stumble
those he wishes to hear
or those he longs to hear

which words do she want to hear
those that causes togetherness
or those that divides loneliness

might the two be the same?

The Rim

Has fallen into these two eyes,
The sky with all its stars;
Pour some water in the vodka,
Or the rim will get stained.

-Pin Dew (04/05/2017)
© Pin Dew  Create an image from this poem.

South Rim North Face

I'm going to get a new subject
or an old one back.
All my poems are about him anyway,
And my poetry group might like to 
see something light out of me.
		
So maybe we could fall in love again.
We could descend together once more into
the canyon from the south rim,
deceptively easy and peaceful on the descent,
the return trip much, much the more difficult.
You could tell me again of your 
adventure that summer when your
friend slipped and you saved his
life with a twig and a prayer.
And we could drive again over the Rockies,
My stomach rising with the altitude
until it is at my throat at 14,000 cold 
feet in August, glaciers of black ice,
never thawed in thousands of years
contrast with our rented Ford Taurus.
In that place time changes nothing.
Down below, the only thing certain is change.

Family Rim, Stream and Team

Senior citizens 
Crated in old people’s homes
Discarded denizens
Wrinkled forms

Pivotal during heyday
Generating national growth
Beyond payday
Bestowing cloth

On backs of offspring
Pouring sweat day and night
Zip in their gait and spring
Delight and sunlight

In hearts of extended families
Fountains of love and generosity
Inspiration for hallowed homilies
Wellspring of wisdom in the city

Senior citizens houses built
From scratch
Committed to the hilt
From a rural hut with thatch

Where senior citizens originated
Trekking hundreds of kilometres
Sunshine baked and incinerated
Through bush path nanometers and metres

Feet aching
Parched tongues
Future taking
Mustangs

Searing heartache
When senior citizens forsaken
Monumental mistake
Faith shaken

Time
To reconsider
Importance of the dime
To consider

Values and beliefs
That pride of place accord to the aged
In kerchiefs and handkerchiefs
Rummaged and foraged

To honour the old
Held in high esteem
To withhold 
Neglect in family fabric, team and stream.

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