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Rattling Rim Shot

So you took your best shot, but sadly it rimmed out Rocket swish arc reached for the brightest star ... only to receive a missed blastoff launch tipoff Got time zone sent head fake crash landing to the parquet floor ocean bottom Love is a heart rattling thing ... net elusive, and so very nylon tantalizing And when you make the wrong call, false accusations that fray Out of the hoop pops the ball — a certain love score gets taken away Now you’re muttering low, back pedaling thru life so slow Pounding your fist into your chest, knowing that you never really gave your best Ever looking to shoot for the easy access escape route, because the tight rim of iron doubt always caused a falling out And when the circular tears would finally start to double dribble down, only the comforting benched touch of your leather sofa felt soft Then faded backcourt memory fears, became a slippery slope surface for a failed playa pawn Globetrotting clown It was your last shot to win, but the sure aim drop just rattled out To the high displeasure of a mumbling, low-post peeved pout Losing ain’t a sin, if love wasn’t a game you were simply playing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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