Cry From the Rim

Where the water washes white surfs across
Sand banks porous with green dreams in our hearts
Where the sun surveys the wet desert of loss
The salt thread like blood stitching together our parts
Find me there wandering the wailing shores
I am a new citizen with ancient desires still
Living on the restless rim of of crinkled azures;
Watching history bleach my memory of will.
Here I pine to see my mother whole as I am
Here I pray for justice from the impaled lamb 

This Caribbean sea that pens my rage in me
Water where my ancestors footsteps no imprints leave
Of vast voyages now void on the Atlantic lea
This Caribbean sea in modern voice I cannot grieve
My people sundered like a broken ship
Mastless, anchorless, drifting drumless on weed
My people bleeding from tongue lash and whip
And no Cudjoe, Tacky, or Boukman to intercede
I am a citizen of the rim, a place undefined
In the subtle representations where I'm maligned.

Here in this world of diverse languages and shade
Across the bloodless salt of shrivelled water we trade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/2/2009 8:04:00 AM
'I am a new citizen with ancient desires still' ... 'Across the bloodless salt of shrivelled water ' wow your lines are superbe!! i love the way you have packed this brilliant writing so well ... allowing you to tell your emotions and thoughts!! BRAVO my friend!! :) ~ Arany
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:29:00 AM
This is a sad write but so well penned. You have a way of bringing the emotions alive with each line. You have captured the heartache and greif that lives inside when we lose those we love or just don't understand why life is such a struggle. Very powerful write friend. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:18:00 AM
Brilliant writing my friend..the Caribbean sea tells wondwerful stories that are living in this masterpiece...voices from the dead are applauding...
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