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Cry From the Rim

Where the water washes white surfs across Sand banks porous with green dreams in our hearts Where the sun surveys the wet desert of loss The salt thread like blood stitching together our parts Find me there wandering the wailing shores I am a new citizen with ancient desires still Living on the restless rim of of crinkled azures; Watching history bleach my memory of will. Here I pine to see my mother whole as I am Here I pray for justice from the impaled lamb This Caribbean sea that pens my rage in me Water where my ancestors footsteps no imprints leave Of vast voyages now void on the Atlantic lea This Caribbean sea in modern voice I cannot grieve My people sundered like a broken ship Mastless, anchorless, drifting drumless on weed My people bleeding from tongue lash and whip And no Cudjoe, Tacky, or Boukman to intercede I am a citizen of the rim, a place undefined In the subtle representations where I'm maligned. Here in this world of diverse languages and shade Across the bloodless salt of shrivelled water we trade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/2/2009 8:04:00 AM
'I am a new citizen with ancient desires still' ... 'Across the bloodless salt of shrivelled water ' wow your lines are superbe!! i love the way you have packed this brilliant writing so well ... allowing you to tell your emotions and thoughts!! BRAVO my friend!! :) ~ Arany
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:29:00 AM
This is a sad write but so well penned. You have a way of bringing the emotions alive with each line. You have captured the heartache and greif that lives inside when we lose those we love or just don't understand why life is such a struggle. Very powerful write friend. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:18:00 AM
Brilliant writing my friend..the Caribbean sea tells wondwerful stories that are living in this masterpiece...voices from the dead are applauding...
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