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The Private Lives of Those I'Ve Loved

The hutch 
like everything else in this house is
crooked.  A slanting hardwood floor 
and the burnished ends 
of an ancient table. 

An ever rounding table 
"a table with history" she says, 
a lineage with the cut 
and lineaments 
of the eight-score man who built it. 

The eerie, beautiful portrait 
of some great-  great-  great- 
someone-or-other 
hangs so solemnly with Victorian grace 
the nail has begun to bend, 
but she will never fall. 

One cabinet for the silver 
and wine glasses 
has been painted triple-white 
and sunk into the wall like a safe. 
Its shelves boiled clean 
to hide their ignoble wood
(probably pine).

Not like the Oak left bare-  
the smell and musk 
of those dark hand-hewn ceiling beams 
and the redolence  
from somewhere behind the house 
of deep-purple lilacs 
growing fat like grapes. 

Outside, the painted gardens swirl together 
in a dizzying carousel of color and light
with short, fat brush strokes
and heavy, bold shadows;
the flowers burn from the healthy soil 
replacing sand from ten years ago.
200 bags of fertilizer and now: 

A nightgowned woman plays firefighter 
every morning with a green hose, 
keeping up with the investment.

Private Party

College party red cups  all across the room.
we caught each others eye.
Inbetween  dances  if eyes were a camera they'd 
be caught in zoom.

I know you came here with another guy.
Sixfoot four football player.
Tried to say whats up but blockhead just told 
me hey jerk dont even try.

But when the doors locked the window will always 
work.
Time to make ya smile and make your roomate  
smirk.

We'll stay up allnight andi dont mean watching laurel  and hardy.
Just put a tie on the door handle.
Cause this a private party.

No people no chips and cheap beer.
Will play hide in seek in the dark.
Honey iI hate to say it's no aciddent i just
grabbed your rear.

Just as the real fun had just begun  sombody 
kicked in the door.
It was that linebacker and his band of unmerry knuckleheads 
All pissed off and standing six foot four.

Punches thrown  and more than feelings were hurt
as my  private party came to abrupt end.
Thrown from a window.
Impaled on a garden gnome
Does anyone have a hopital they can reccomend.

At the ER I met this hot  nurse.
Who had a mini pharmacy hidden 
in her purse.

I knew it wasnt good when she gave me a pill and said 
Oh no.
got put in the nut ward  spent the night 
talkin to my left toe.

Caught a ride  home with my best
friend Marty.
He said man what caused all this.
And I replyed  I was trying to have a private party

Premium Member Behind the Thoracic Cage

Non exchangeable 
biodegradable 
Given time may be changeable 
However 
Forever 
Insatiable 

Thrashing out the tempo of life
Misses a beat when presented with strife 
Within Private chambers 
initials inscribed 
Etched with a promise 
None but one can revive


Premium Member Private Conversation

Father it’s me again. It’s been too long between talks
Days, years: restless lost wasted years
Choices made based on greed, pride, arrogance and misbegotten dreams
It’s difficult at best to understand how You can still love me
The blessings continued throughout it all
I had Kristofferson on the stereo asking Why Me Lord
Now I know I just want to come home
One more shot at doing it right, conscience not materialistic ideals
Finding peace within myself, empathy for those who cannot.
The journey was a bit different than I imagined
Detours, lost highways, dead ends. Many roads. Wrong ones
More light at the end of the dirt roads
Than the ones paved in gold
Harder to reach your destination 
But the accommodations were better in the end
One more thing I meant to say and never did
Thank You Father for the hard times
Thank You for the trials that helped strengthen me
At the time, I didn’t understand
Now I see. Tears can cleanse the soul 
Only when they are real.

Premium Member Private Quarters

Faraway magic sparks inside distant dreams awaken tears
spells under a smiling moon casting shadows out howls lonely
within deep soft moving feelings lights all candles in four chambers bright

Silver whispers one lone wolf cries princess moonlighting ball faraway dance
flying on wings across many oceans sweet warmly beams kiss beat stop
Crystal reflections breaking thought vision shatter mirror apex
 
Over snow mountain under a white blanket hidden inside cold turkey trembles
howls deep chilling winds covered in grey cloud capped silver to gun barrel grey 
Striking hot air parting with a bolt lightening strikes the deepest cord

Gasping blows out in waves breathless crashing the highest notes holding 
the deepest key reality rippling currents sparking drumbeats skip faster sparks 
Growling grumbles to the Heaven's roar almighty bang ignite

Fading away into mountain echoes into a town called Sunday cross an honor 
Exquisite faraway beauty you stand out one flower among'st roses brightly
dazzle crowning blossoms stargazing lights up the dark Trawbega bay shore

Amazing colors adorable star spangling treasures gift pure to kiss holding hands
shading from the heart's desire misting dream of dreams promise wish 
rainbows sweeping within deep mysterious beauty in your eyes awestruck

Melt with me into the shadows of another world floating mystery
Jewels of the Nile drifting deeply over ocean sands warmly embraced 
in one treasure holding vision paradise queen swept away beautiful valentine  

unrhymed terset

Private Romeo

Romeo Jaxx had a friend for a fool
So he never thought "Baby's in love."
He fought for his rights
and he slept through your dreams
With his self-centred wolverine paralysed
 
Drove out of the camp on a bright summer's day
waving last weekend's pass-out goodbye
Phoned Jenny, then Julie, who never complained
Filled his tank, with the world running dry.
 
Throws off the fatigues now, just too tired to fight,
He will walk to the beat
of another man's drum
sometimes valour's the best part of sin.
With a grin shoves his ring
on the pawnbroker's manicured thumb.
 
Now this story splits down three parallel lines.
My version, the truth and your lies
You saw him conversing with 12-year-old Jim
in myriad tongues, his back to the wind. 
I found him saluting a girl in Key West,
Where admirals croak and malingerers lie.
We both know he broke each old, weary taboo
Well, salmon will leap
when they're straining to die.
 
Maybe Romeo Jaxx is of much sterner stuff
And never was swayed from some destiny's path.
Straight as a die
but the die is now cast,
the cast are now blind
and the blind are aghast.
Our Romeo sees that there's no one ahead
don't tell him, there's no one behind.


Premium Member Private Roscoe D. Schlink's Ocean Cruise

Dear Folks:  I pen this note as we ply the dark and stormy sea.
Thanks to Uncle Sam I'm cruising on the Queen Mary, all for free.
You'd think we'd travel in style on such a luxurious tub,
But I'll tell you about life aboard and what we eat for grub.

As usual, the officers and nurses live in comfortable style,
But things ain't so pleasant for us in the rank and file.
We stand in line for everything, even to use the head.
I've been seasick so many times I wish that I was dead.

The brass dine at tables with linen, china and silverware,
And are served their meals by waiters with eloquent flair.
We stand up for chow, eating from greasy steel trays,
Trying to keep our balance as the boat rolls and sways.

Officers sleep four-to-a-room and have sheets on their bed.
I bunk with a hundred other guys on sagging hammocks instead.
I hear the Lord's name taken in vain frequently around here,
As we stumble over each others' feet and our assorted gear.

The brass dine on such things as ice cream, cake and steak.
I've had all the stew, orange marmalade and figs I can take.
Another bout of mal de mer is attacking me, I gotta go.
That's all for now, till next time, Your loving son, Roscoe.

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
(© All Rights Reserved)

Premium Member Private Dance-Bawdy

The Misses gave Santa a private dance
She was in the mood for some hot romance
                Played a sexy song
                Put on a red thong
It got lost, Santa liked that circumstance














12/13/2021
Contest:I Need A Good Laugh 
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
© Alexis Y.  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Is Soupmail Still Private

IS  SOUPMAIL STILL  PRIVATE 

How do non - members get into soup,
Somewhere in the system there’s a loop,
And ask you to contact them please,
It makes one to not feel at ease,
This person does not exist on Poetry Soup!

Since I commenced with this friendly troop,
Had two or three mails, outside of our group,
I just ignore them, but it happens, how?
Do others get them, good to know now,
For I am sure none of us want a snoop.

A Private Garden

Enjoying the outdoors..
As sun rays dominate
a soft gentle breeze surrounds
A picture perfect haven..
Scenic views of luscious gardens..
Colorful flowers of all sorts..
An effervescent infusion fills the air
Sweet floral fragrance..
Along..
A fresh and crisp fragrance 
Knocks out the senses..
Invigorating with such pleasure..

A private garden..
Nestled and tucked away ..
A secret hideaway from home
Where one can escape the madness of their reality
To enter a paradise on earth..
Where red robins and blue jays fly joyously..
Where lovely colorful butterflies gracefully fly ..
Butterfly wings dancing in vibrant colors..
Tremendous trees supplying oxygen.. 
Providing much comfort with a shade..

My glorious private garden..
My salvation..
Away from all..
Serene I am..
In my peaceful garden..

Saturated with graciousness
Surrounded by divine love..

Premium Member Private I-PS

Retired now, the Government calls me a carer. 
Now I ask you what could be fairer?
They pay me a few dollars to look after my better half.
They explain that I save them the cost of employing staff.

Well, I won’t tell them, but they could have saved their money, 
He won’t have a cook or a cleaner or nurse, he is such a honey,
My dear hubby refuses to have anyone in the house.
So, they could have kept their money, but I am being quiet as a mouse.

In days gone by I had a job of responsibility before I retired,
I did the job well, worked ethically and was sometimes wired.
Before I became (I guess you could say) a domesticator,
I was actually a licensed private and commercial investigator.

Premium Member Private Revelation

Abortion is supposed to be good
The babies are safe in heaven
The baby Angel  told me 
Tell the priest that the babies are safe in heaven

God wants to give women
Chance, on the left ear
Choice, on the right ear
To save themselves
After, saw my previous tragic car accident

Spiritual director said
It was the turning point of my life
Need to see Archbishop Cordileone
Just tell him my private revelation
Then he’ll do the work

Written 6182018

Premium Member Private Eyes Invasive Eyes

 Everywhere, in dark and light, 
are always watching eyes.
Way out in space, 
glowing orbs, 
some of gold; 
watch through celestial layers.

Sift through the layers, 
to allow the light.  
Expose the golden, 
watching eyes.  
Those burning orbs, 
that hide in space.

We all need our private space.
Desperate, we dress in layers, 
to escape the prying orbs.
But, when a light 
reveals prying eyes, 
our privacy’s no longer golden.

In dreams of gold, 
we fly in space.  
No nosey eyes  
will peel our mortal layers.
Our hearts so light, 
escape those nosey orbs.

Centrifugal orbs; 
spinning gold, 
upon a stage of pinwheel lights.
How they play in space, 
among dark layers, 
away from prying eyes.

Invasive eyes, 
those peering orbs, 
that hide in layers; 
infringe upon our golden, 
private space; 
smother our inner light.

Prying eyes, hiding in etheric layers to spy.
My soul-orbs, watch them spying in space.
Their privacy’s just as golden; though they wear a disguise of star light.

Premium Member Private Masquerade

Private Masquerade
Theme is "Trust in Him"
An invite to all
of those who know Him
and Believe in Him

Remember that
he's in control
Life has its ups
Life has its downs

Trials are just
a test of
your Faith. So

Put ALL
Trust in

HIM.

Private Hell

How can something so small
Cause so much pain?
With awesome power
And nothing to gain

You think you are dying
You hope that you are
Your threshold of pain 
Has been tested so far

Those who have been there
Will recognize it's sign
You're ever so lost
In this moment of time

Trapped in this agony
You're feeling inside
You lose all control
Like Jekyll and Hyde

A whole new dimension
Where many have been
No words to describe
The pain that you're in

Some people have them
Just once in their life
While others are cursed 
With this torment and strife

Nothing can help you 
You're all alone
Your own private hell
The kidney stone
© Larry Belt  Create an image from this poem.

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