Private Revelation

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Hey co poets, sorry but reading this is requiring you to tell me what you think because I need it for my spiritual director, Father Piers Lahey pastor of St. Andrew Catholic Church. I just want to know what you guys think, thanks.

Abortion is supposed to be good
The babies are safe in heaven
The baby Angel  told me 
Tell the priest that the babies are safe in heaven

God wants to give women
Chance, on the left ear
Choice, on the right ear
To save themselves
After, saw my previous tragic car accident

Spiritual director said
It was the turning point of my life
Need to see Archbishop Cordileone
Just tell him my private revelation
Then he’ll do the work

Written 6182018

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Frank Sheehan

Date: 6/20/2018 12:52:00 PM

Excellent piece. It rings of truth. Enjoyed immensely.