Private Revelation

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Hey co poets, sorry but reading this is requiring you to tell me what you think because I need it for my spiritual director, Father Piers Lahey pastor of St. Andrew Catholic Church. I just want to know what you guys think, thanks.

Abortion is supposed to be good The babies are safe in heaven The baby Angel told me Tell the priest that the babies are safe in heaven God wants to give women Chance, on the left ear Choice, on the right ear To save themselves After, saw my previous tragic car accident Spiritual director said It was the turning point of my life Need to see Archbishop Cordileone Just tell him my private revelation Then he’ll do the work Written 6182018

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Frank Sheehan

Date: 6/20/2018 12:52:00 PM

Excellent piece. It rings of truth. Enjoyed immensely.