Private Conversation

Father it’s me again. It’s been too long between talks
Days, years: restless lost wasted years
Choices made based on greed, pride, arrogance and misbegotten dreams
It’s difficult at best to understand how You can still love me
The blessings continued throughout it all
I had Kristofferson on the stereo asking Why Me Lord
Now I know I just want to come home
One more shot at doing it right, conscience not materialistic ideals
Finding peace within myself, empathy for those who cannot.
The journey was a bit different than I imagined
Detours, lost highways, dead ends. Many roads. Wrong ones
More light at the end of the dirt roads
Than the ones paved in gold
Harder to reach your destination 
But the accommodations were better in the end
One more thing I meant to say and never did
Thank You Father for the hard times
Thank You for the trials that helped strengthen me
At the time, I didn’t understand
Now I see. Tears can cleanse the soul 
Only when they are real.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 8:48 PM
Vince, I just dedicated a verse to you and Chris..lets see if you like it...let me know if I need censoring!! ;) Light & Love
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:40 AM
Speechless Vince, that's how your rendered me with this one.. I can just sit back and exhale with a smile..
Guzzi Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 5:21 AM
Just wonderful Vince, nothing else to say. Light & Love
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 10:49 AM
wow very powerful i loved it!!!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:44 AM
Great write. Like the line "Thank You Father for the hard times".. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
La France Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 12:37 AM
Tears can cleanse the soul... you have painted such a stunning picture of life in this wonderful poem.. and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry
Hilliker Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Great write. I feel that way sometimes too.
Chircop Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 11:53 PM
I love your faith ,its deep,,how beautiful to believe that even the hard times were not there to destruct our being mbut to make us stronger,to make us who we are today..excellent work--Charma
Derequito Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 4:51 AM
This work reminds me of KK's 'The Pilgrim': "Taking on every wrong directions on his long way back home..." Bravo, Mr. Suzadail! Fred (PS So does this mean a final goodbye to the countless Bobbie McGees you met? Just asking, Vince, ha ha)
Brown Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 4:35 AM
I enjoyed reading your Amazing heartfelt poetry this morning Vince. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Mason Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 7:58 PM
Amen. Wonderful writing here, Vince ... its always a treat to see your name on the list of new writes ... smile ... Have a wonderful Thanksgiving my friend !!
Owens Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 4:51 PM
This is so nice...enjoyed...Marty
Devonshire Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 2:54 PM
Gosh, it's great to see you posting again, Vince. First you had me rolling with the turkey poem and now this incredibly insightful spiritual write! How true that there are many "dead ends," but as you say, the struggles we endure help strengthen us and also give us an appreciation for the better "accommodations" when we reachour final "destination." Brilliant work! Love, Carolyn
Jordan Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Vince this poem is wonderful - I reckon that its the best I've read in this category - It is always so ice to read your writings - How have you been Vince and how is the family - As for us all is well in fact I'm feeling awfully blessed and equally as proud - School is going so well Vince that I'm almost shocked - God Bless you my friend and I'll be adding this to my fav list for sure, your friend Michael
Nieves Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Nice conversation with the BOSS upstairs, Vince.
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