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Faraway magic sparks inside distant dreams awaken tears
spells under a smiling moon casting shadows out howls lonely
within deep soft moving feelings lights all candles in four chambers bright

Silver whispers one lone wolf cries princess moonlighting ball faraway dance
flying on wings across many oceans sweet warmly beams kiss beat stop
Crystal reflections breaking thought vision shatter mirror apex
 
Over snow mountain under a white blanket hidden inside cold turkey trembles
howls deep chilling winds covered in grey cloud capped silver to gun barrel grey 
Striking hot air parting with a bolt lightening strikes the deepest cord

Gasping blows out in waves breathless crashing the highest notes holding 
the deepest key reality rippling currents sparking drumbeats skip faster sparks 
Growling grumbles to the Heaven's roar almighty bang ignite

Fading away into mountain echoes into a town called Sunday cross an honor 
Exquisite faraway beauty you stand out one flower among'st roses brightly
dazzle crowning blossoms stargazing lights up the dark Trawbega bay shore

Amazing colors adorable star spangling treasures gift pure to kiss holding hands
shading from the heart's desire misting dream of dreams promise wish 
rainbows sweeping within deep mysterious beauty in your eyes awestruck

Melt with me into the shadows of another world floating mystery
Jewels of the Nile drifting deeply over ocean sands warmly embraced 
in one treasure holding vision paradise queen swept away beautiful valentine  

unrhymed terset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/31/2015 4:53:00 PM
Hi Liam! A very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend. Very dreamy and sweet! Awesome! I love it! ! A huge solid 7 +++ from me ! Another very dazzling and romantic poem penned by you to be held very close to ones heart. smiling. Your pen is truly golden! May all your hopes and dreams come true. Always believe in you! God bless you and keep you in His Light and protection always! Praying He keeps you strong in all! Have a very lovely weekend Liam! :) Love and hugs! xoxox D.^O^"
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Date: 1/31/2015 3:23:00 AM
Liam, a beautiful poem. The scenery's amazing... and WOW... must I say... LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2015 9:17:00 PM
A journey I am pleased to have travelled my friend. Such scenery and magical waterfalls of exquisite hope, glory and promise! A7 and should be given a super 10! Bravoooo!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 1/30/2015 7:47:00 PM
Go Liam go! Light & Love
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Date: 1/30/2015 4:18:00 PM
Liam Mate!! A most beautiful and exquisite pen here indeed worthy of the master poet you are my dear friend. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:39:00 PM
Wow you sure take the reader on a wonderful journey,,love this Liam
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:15:00 PM
Glad you are back my friend . . . your beautiful words are manly magnificent! 7
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/8/2015 3:43:00 AM
david dear pal needed a break from this site for a few days to clear my mind wonderful comment great to see you wishing you a blessed beautiful sunday wonderful heartfelt comment deeply appreciated
Date: 1/30/2015 2:52:00 PM
This flows so beautifully Liam the imagery is divine - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/2/2015 5:46:00 AM
thank you kindly jan dear pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you

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