The Private Lives of Those I'Ve Loved

The hutch 
like everything else in this house is
crooked.  A slanting hardwood floor 
and the burnished ends 
of an ancient table. 

An ever rounding table 
"a table with history" she says, 
a lineage with the cut 
and lineaments 
of the eight-score man who built it. 

The eerie, beautiful portrait 
of some great-  great-  great- 
someone-or-other 
hangs so solemnly with Victorian grace 
the nail has begun to bend, 
but she will never fall. 

One cabinet for the silver 
and wine glasses 
has been painted triple-white 
and sunk into the wall like a safe. 
Its shelves boiled clean 
to hide their ignoble wood
(probably pine).

Not like the Oak left bare-  
the smell and musk 
of those dark hand-hewn ceiling beams 
and the redolence  
from somewhere behind the house 
of deep-purple lilacs 
growing fat like grapes. 

Outside, the painted gardens swirl together 
in a dizzying carousel of color and light
with short, fat brush strokes
and heavy, bold shadows;
the flowers burn from the healthy soil 
replacing sand from ten years ago.
200 bags of fertilizer and now: 

A nightgowned woman plays firefighter 
every morning with a green hose, 
keeping up with the investment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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December 19, 2008 at 10:22 PM
Paul, Congratulations on Your Featured POEM " The Private Lives of Those I've Loved" I think in my Youth I saw this house and Garden YOU have used Imagery To perfection Merry Christmas and may the New Year bring YOU and YOURS Health and Prosperity...HG
Jordan Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 4:54 PM
Paul - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
Mason Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 11:51 AM
Astounding lyrical write here Paul and the imagery is just fantastic! This is a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week. Congratulations to you!! Hope '09 is a wonderful year for you and yours ... glad you are at the Soup!!
George   Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 8:45 PM
I would like to know more of the story. Thank you for sharing, Paul. lainie
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December 15, 2008 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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December 15, 2008 at 5:00 PM
Creative reflection. Congratulation on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Austin Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 4:01 PM
I like the musty aroma of the trip. Description wins the gardner. Congrats on this pick. Love, daver
Guzzi Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 1:41 PM
Simply wonderful who is this a discription of "Mom" "Wife" and you have discribed Beauty. By seeing these things you have chicen to take the Beauty Way please enter this in my contest!Light & Love Debbie
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December 15, 2008 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Paul. Love, Carol
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