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oh wrap me close dear jungle deep, with fronds and fruits entwined
          and hold me to your ancient emerald breast -
I long to hear those thrums within, the pulse of thickets vined
     and feel your misty essence fill my chest

oh let your warming whispers brush the tympans of my ears
          with sultry songs of woodland mysteries -
face-to-sky I'm pattered with your maze's torrid tears
     as heaven weeps your primal histories

your canopy, breeze-tickled, shakes its tresses high aloft
          to daub upon my cheek your orchid breath -
whisp'ring o'er the blooms and dells to shrug their shoulders, soft
     through tragic tangles worthy of Macbeth

your winding streams and waterfalls, your scents of sweet and spice
          sing songs of wooded wonder, rare and rife -
I pray aloud a blessing for this perfect paradise
     and all such spots divine, the blooms ... of life.







~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Strand Select 2 Any Form Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Picturesque" Poetry Contest, Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor.

In Primeval Wood

Surrounded in primeval wood,
In awe of fern, and flower--
I attempted to delay the night
By lengthening the hour.

That day might last a minute more,
Till my pondering was done--
Delaying, and for beauty's sake,
The setting of the sun.

Primeval Pixies

I`ve seen them dance with Dodos at dawn
and slide down curves of a mammoth's tusk
to swim in the midst of creation`s spawn,
then define the gloaming and name it dusk.

I`ve seen them skate on the scalp of pluto
and confirm that saturn's rings are of ice;
then suspect all planets like games of Cluedo:
The who dunnit query of who made life?


Premium Member Primeval Drive


A seed is sown, begins life impromptu,
with nurture from our rich and fertile Earth.
It sprouts with life to make a grand debut;
pursues a plan for fullness, height, and girth.

A sapling soon, unhindered at the start,
limbs stretching up and out with room to spare,
to soon become a complex work of art
enmeshed and blended with the others there.

From seed to sapling, to a full-bloomed tree,
in spite of brush and weeds, it will expand
and push ahead to full maturity;
from seed to tree, progression makes a stand.

The wonder of all life's primeval drive;
create and grow, expand, fulfill, survive.


May 13, 2018

~6th Place~
Premiere Contest: No 430
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 07/05/2018

~3rd Place~
Contest: Premiere II - Open Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Roy Carmack
Judged: 05/15/2018

Primeval Eyes

...unseen otherwise,

        burn and chill primeval eyes

        between fire and ice...

Afloat

The length of days
that stretches ahead

      promises me again
      a skyey breadth,

a watery and windy
primeval union

      of the Earth
      and the Sky.

In their dark depths
and heady heights,

      there I swim,
      there I fly.


Premium Member Forest Primeval

a leisurely stroll,
walking alone in the park,
I voice deep secrets -
thoughts that I have never shared - 
with the forest primeval

verdant, sheltering,
it absorbs the unrevealed;
nature is opaque
© Jim Healey  Create an image from this poem.

56 Years of Exile

It looks so sweet,a pity it wasn't sung
Is there hope for what future may hold?
For faces I had thought we're gay
I saw were lined with care
Life unbelievably was clear

And vividly was clear
My lord,where shall I place my bribe?
Then society cheats itself
Billions lost publicly
Big brains lynched

Commoners suffer the wrath of the mighty
Failure justified
What kind of times are these?
The drought and the hunger
Shocking levels of unemployment

Flooded homes, flooded homes for 56 years?
Turbulence in quarantine centres
Others opting for death
The primeval beast devouring us
Turning dreams into nightmares

Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the horror of the years
It matters not how straight the gate
In the fell clutch of circumstances
My head is bloody but unbowed

The night has been long
The morning I look through your anguish
Clap hands,let's leave the preening
And stop impostering our own history

They cursed our intrusion of peace and the sun's
Intrusion of his shade
Colonial judges
Cobras uneasily lying side by side
Left to roam and bite again

No narrow fancy
Full fifty six years of exile
It has never been so profound
Solitude have I to endure?
And that's the way it should be!

Primeval Observation

Not solitude 
But loneliness make sweet the harvest
Of God's attention
The sundering of rib and breast
The grand ovation
And then the sudden shift
To hide behind a leaf
The constant surging of eternal grief.

My Primeval Times

from primeval times
  traces dry leaves, love petals
my autumns life passed

Primeval Light

I seek the light, primeval,
the one I know
is not mine
because my prism light
does not lighten
my darkness...!

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