(Entry for the Tanka-Haiku Poetry Contest, sponsored by Oliver Mckeithan, submitted August 2, 2025 - First Place)
a leisurely stroll, walking alone in the park, I voice deep secrets - thoughts that I have never shared - with the forest primeval verdant, sheltering, it absorbs the unrevealed ~ nature is opaque
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