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Primeval Drive

A seed is sown, begins life impromptu, with nurture from our rich and fertile Earth. It sprouts with life to make a grand debut; pursues a plan for fullness, height, and girth. A sapling soon, unhindered at the start, limbs stretching up and out with room to spare, to soon become a complex work of art enmeshed and blended with the others there. From seed to sapling, to a full-bloomed tree, in spite of brush and weeds, it will expand and push ahead to full maturity; from seed to tree, progression makes a stand. The wonder of all life's primeval drive; create and grow, expand, fulfill, survive. May 13, 2018 ~6th Place~ Premiere Contest: No 430 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 07/05/2018 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Premiere II - Open Poetry Contest Sponsor: Roy Carmack Judged: 05/15/2018
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Brewer Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 2:05 PM
The miracle of a tree’s growth cycle eloquently described. Well written, Sandra
Haight Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 1:11 PM
Thank you so much, Geoffrey, for your visit and lovely, uplifting comment. Much appreciated, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Haight Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thank you very much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Beautifully written, congratulations on your win hugs Eve aw5
Haight Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Back with more congrats, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Perfect closing couplet! Exquisite! Congrats on your placement. ~ Gershon
Haight Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for your visit, congrats and lovely comment. Sandra
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Sandra, this is outstanding. Glad to see this poem among the contest winners; I missed it the first time around. And the last line is a lovely motto.
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Thank you very much, Agnes, for your very uplifting comments. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Sandra. Well done.
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Thanks, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 1:18 AM
Congratulations Sandra. Tom
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you very much, Tom. Sandra
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Very nicely done. Congrats.
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so much, Dale! Sandra
Gentry Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 2:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Thank you very much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Carmack Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:18 AM
TY and congrats Sandra.
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Thanks for the great contest, Rob, and for my nice placement and congrats. Much appreciated. Sandra
Sands Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Very nice Sonnet Sandra. Good luck in the contest :)
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Thanks, Heidi! Hugs, Sandra
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