Best Metaphoric Poems


Metaphoric Richness

He smiles at me.
As though the weight
Of psychedelic visions
Were insubstantial
And inconsequential;
A trivial thing.

Broad-shouldered emotions
Mushroom through 
Organic momentum
To greet my pain,
A throbbing haze
That is my post-script.

Narcotic serenity
Wraps around my brain,
Slurring everything
In my tilt-a-whirl scene,
Until the funhouse
Sweeps me away.

I feel myself shrinking
Like Alice In Wonderland,
But I am not afraid
Of the beautiful myriad,
Understanding how addictive
Compulsiveness can be.

Opulent pleasure
Invades my space,
Stinging reality
With a new perspective,
Numbing submission
In a morphine choke-hold.

Sound and color bend,
A sensational delight
Of exotic flairs
And pendulums humming;
It’s unlike anything I’ve known
Except for his smile.

Metaphoric Love

The stars are shining brighter 
And the wind is flowing free today
Oh my heart is racing faster
Nd my hairs are blown away
The stars, the breeze, the love 
It all feels the same ....

And now i come to think of you 
And my mind is still awake 
I see reds out of blue
This love won't ever fade away
The thoughts, the reds, the love 
It all feels the same ....

While I'm your subdue
I'm enchanted by your every way
Of life, of love, of truth 
Just like the flowers of May 
The way, the may, and love
It all feels the same......

My heart is over brimming
As your love is filling
And there is only one thing 
As I'm scared to let you go 
This fear, you dear, and love 
It all feels the same....

Metaphoric Experience

There's this game I've been 
playing

And it's taught me stuff

I've not had it long

But I've played enough to know

If I don’t turn back now

It's going to be rough

I'm looking for some luck cos' I 
feel real stuck

The first few levels

Were easy to complete

They make the deep end look 
like a couple of feet

But as the game progressed

It picked up the heat

Now the Mother-****ing 
shallow end looks deep.

The Story-Line was mind 
blowing at the start

Slowly I climbed up , Part by 
Part

Progressing, Tired, Game saved 
in the book

The All nighters took - 
Great...now I'm hooked

When I'm playing, I feel 
Skillfully Brilliant

Like a militant, untouchable, 
full of resilience

I got the skills to pay the bills

All my debts considered repaid

Until what goes up must come 
down

One by One people Fade

If you understand the 
metaphoric game that I played 

Then you understand the steps 
I had to take 

After two years feeling high I 
finally found 

This isn't life it's time to come 
down.


Premium Member Zombies, Astral, Mental and Metaphoric

Zombies, astral and metaphoric
The zombie I like the most
Is the Zombie astral.
It’s typical residence is a bottle
Which Voodoo bokor can sell it for luck
Not at all a trouble maker 
Feed him with salt 
Will obey to return to its grave.

But there are zombies as metaphor
Difficult to handle mindless inclined to mindless
Adherence to authorities
And now in modern times we have a new
Metaphorical Zombie, the forms of hacker
Virus like Trojan horse
Ever disobedient in character

Most entertaining but less frightening
Are the made-up zombies
and the most obedient ones
As all are familiar with zombie kits,
Fake skin mixture, creamy face fainted
Fake blood makers, with stipple sponge

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Date 10/12/13
Dr. Ram Mehta
Third Place win
Contest: Halloween poem contest poem with only 1 theme
                                         By Leonora Galinta

Metaphoric Whirlwind

I am offended 
by your metaphors,
they're vindictive
the way they dangle themselves 
above my heartstrings,
periodically plucking
when one gets tangled in the wind

they just hang there
like an untame pennon
waiting to flap
for blatant recognition

my, how you crave those squalls
with such ravenous gluttony,
gnawing at the pellucid air
as though it were chewable

Metaphoric Tissue Paper Cuts

Obscurity's trenchant
     sorrows blotting 
        tissue paper cuts,
tears aptly smeared
    in hidden fears of
        first dashed allusions,
darkly flippant metaphors
       sans passionate accolades 
          left to gingerly decay,
    grandiloquently speaking,
       'Happily Ever After' is
           hardly a verbose nuance
             throughout a quinine
                         poet's collection
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Metaphoric Flower

To be honest
Winter stings
And it forever broke my heart, but to tell you the truth
I'm addicted to the pain
Addicted like a drug addict
Winter froze my heart
And took away the dandelions for its own pleasure
But it forgot one
Left it deep in the cave
Living with no sun
I met it the other day while writing a haiku
Last one to leave my
Broken heart
Alone
It tries to glue my life back together
But I'm already gone

Premium Member Metaphoric Magnificence

The splendor of the blooming flower
on the lips of the unfurling bud
radiates glamour in the frame of charisma,
suspended on the wall.

I float in the air of fascination
to the magnetic meadow of Mona Lisa, 
as the sensuous force enthralling,
unveils time-transcending beauty of woman.

Nothing lies between Eve and you,
when you’re in my vision suffused 
with the radiance of rainbow allure, 
shimmering with the enigmatic smile. 

The spectacular still life icon, 
created by the painter supreme,
activates the sense of awe in me 
with the perpetual attraction. 

The aura of exquisite brilliance exudes
in the masterpiece of superb living art.
The metaphor of her persistent appeal 
defines women’s mesmeric magnificence. 

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May 3, 2023
For A Brian Strand Premiere No, 1213 Contest

Premium Member An Interior Mechanism

"If you wish to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first invent the universe," ... Carl Sagan

Subtle crafts soundly, using euphemisms,
yet cluelessness dealt a sheltered abyss.
When one confront internal mechanisms,
whatchamacallit ... orphaned hit-or-miss.

A conundrum conspires an endowed soul,
behooves postmortem liken achievement.
Where'er wits helix baptism, buried hole,
an urchin crawlspace, be I foundling sent.

Newborn bid birthright a pardoned envoy,
of mature absence deemed as uncharted.
Internals blueprint designed, bad employ,
indeed, tunnels end--will be lights outed.

Rare conscientiousness temper unknown,
infiltrate hallmark translates as dethrone.

The Metaphoric Tree....

Sometimes I have questioned this fruit, upon which some call, divinities tree?

So deliciously appealing it has seemed, unto these desirous and sometimes wistful eyes

As they have gazed upon its splendour and beauty, which adorns its lovely branches....

Standing amid this amiable Garden of Eden; whilst reflecting upon, "'My Fathers' Words" ~

"Of all things are yours," He said, "but choose wisely, that you may live"

"Eternally within this everlasting paradise; which I have created for you and My children!?"

"For nothing should you wish, shall never not be yours"

"Yet I have placed temptation afore your eyes, that your faithfulness may be sown...."

I have walked through this garden as if, but only a dream 

Beholding paradisiacals boundless and endless glories; majestic ~

Although, when I approach this certain simile that, "My Father" had spoken about

I always stop and stare for a moment; marvelling upon its wonderment

This golden fruit; which sometimes permeates my wanting heart

From wall to wall and throughout its corridores

But for a taste, of its enticing flavours

Glistening before my wanton red lips, this metaphor....

Sweetened desires; to savour upon the very tip 

Of my thirsting and yearning tongue!? 

Ahh, just one bite I think, as I then do contemplate, if "My Father," would ever know?

For she looks so lovely; as spellbound becomes her enchanted 

Amid her listful and temptress view; aslant....

Caught betwixt the flesh and the spirit once more, as I peer upon her leaves

Finding these stirring rushing currents, soaring through my searing veins

Within another day inside of this garderobe; my soul perplexed

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Before this metaphoric tree of, such, forbidden  fruit!?

Metaphoric Maze

Metaphoric Maze
 
Still damp from the wash of a waking dream I realize the pain from the past and how much 
its lied
Although not by force I was led to believe in the dimmest of truths thus kept awash in grief 
All of the many things now remade as they truly were splendid things simple hidden treasure
Grasping at the meaning from the other side of the murky metaphor is finally a thing not so 
futile
It has always been worth the while even as the seconds have become long yet timeless years
My epic life a work of art the masters of fate around me still hard at work in bliss and 
contempt 
As I look down on the tableau from where I’ve become the high road, I can see it very 
clearly now
It has never been the easy path filled with twist, turns, danger, and despair but so worth it all
Erected by cause and effect as a monument for later travelers to ponder as they reach for 
the summit  
Yes as feeble as it may seem the wizened ones were so right, the journey is its own reward

A Haiku Series the Metaphoric Window

a gap in time
a window to the future
to late it’s closed

to late it’s closed
a window to the future
a gap in time

my heart… a window
beating rays of love shine out
beams of hope and peace

beams of hope and peace
beating rays of love shine out
my heart… a window

our hearts… our windows
our souls exposed… see the love
poems yet untold

poems yet untold
our souls exposed… see the love
our hearts… our windows

bleeding hearts
seen from my back room window
fuchsias in the rain

fuchsias in the rain
seen from my back room window
bleeding hearts

my window… open…
a heartfelt song fills the air
my true love calling

my true love calling
a heartfelt song fills the air
my window… open…

blacked out… all windows
a chance life might survive
broke many a heart

broke many a heart
a chance life might survive
blacked out… all windows

he stands before you
your window open… calling
his heart is yours

his heart is yours
your window open… calling
he stands before you

I feel your pain
your window open… you call
my heart fills with love

my heart fills with love
your window open… you call
I feel your pain

i hold a ladder
pray open thine window
heal my bleeding heart

heal my bleeding heart
pray open thine window
i hold a ladder

time to end it all
your windows open… let’s fly
two hearts… again… one

two hearts… again… one
your windows open… let’s fly…
time to end it all

windows in the clouds
fleeting chances… heaven calls
nigh 50 years hearts waiting

nigh 50 years... hearts waiting...
fleeting chances… heaven calls
windows in the clouds

Strength In Unity

A string of pearls laden,
Stays bonded...
They are united,
Until broken...

The string be thy peace
And not a crease,
Be there as it might
Lead to a fight...

A deadly feud,
Many are sued,
Lives are gone...
Why now mourn ??

Do not let a scissor
Cut the string of peace
Do not let a trigger
Bring a crease....

Thy be the pearl....
Peace the string,
And the necklace laid out,
On the earth all green.

Ode To the Poeters Obsessiveness

Thoughts honed to a razor’s edge
The dictionary and thesaurus be my whetstones
Set atop my stalwart quadrupedal aide
Pulverized hemlocks be my stationary cohort
A hewn cedar be cylindrical partner in rhyme
A sooty viscous slurry be my workmate
The milky sap of the arborist companion be my reviser
Time; unlimited; to be committed to sonnetifcation
Mete by minute or by days…to precompose
To choreograph the mind’s breadth of complexity
To see the inferences…laid out; covertly or overtly
Upon reaching a draft of my pre-thoughts; spelt out
To reave the uncomplicatedness from each line
Leaving nothing unprinted upon the page.

Premium Member Metaphoric Optimisation

I adorn your flesh in trivial words and heat,
The quartz in each brushwork may deplete. 
Ashy blossoms under shattered feet,
In the dusk, inspired by optimization accrete. 

Deep-set violet eyes without a discreet,
Reaching clouds that cover your sight beat. 
Seeking to deprive the tempo of greet,
Illuminating this obstacle isn't defeat.

When your sight is adequate to compete, 
I shall entice you till our bones excrete. 
Betrayals occur during the heat of deceit,
Overwhelmed in combustion entreat. 

Salt from the sea is in tears and downbeat,
Inhaling every color of poetry may reheat. 
I bestow my words to the shells of your feat,
Leaving blurry traces in my vision to meet. 

You are safe and muttered during the retreat,
I am inhaling your irrational fear and heat.
Rose petals satiate voids in the heartbeat.

Written: December 04, 2022
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