Best Improved Poems


Time On Them If Removed Time On You You Improved

You can pick and choose your friends, 
who is true who is pretend 
Who needs you then they leave you 
If it suits them 
then refuse them 
Are they there 
do they care 
do they have nerve 
do they dare 
is it all one way and nothing back 
Are they owed a favour broken track 
Looping around and using you 
never occurring they should too
It’s not time that makes them close 
It’s what they do when you lose hope
Do they celebrate your victories 
And sit with you through your miseries 
When you use up your energy 
If they don’t they’re an enemy 
Are they quick to point out what they’re owed 
they want it paid back what they’ve showed 
Think they’re smarter than you are 
Push their luck and go too far 
Friends aren’t always what they seem 
they’re not always what you need 
Sometimes you should up and leave  
Even if they feel aggrieved 
Their probably a victim 
If so they are restricting 
Time on them but if removed 
Time on you sees you improved
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

The Paradoxes of High Improved and Obscured Sociates

That is truth, 
in England  
all people have looked as polished talents and genius,
even a driver there
or porter, or steward, 
or begger, or trader, 
or stealer, or priest, 
or head of ministry
do not work without great quality and service. 
There is, seem, only one stupid man - mister Bean, 
who prevailed all brilliant persons given together.
 
They are all have made themselves
as they want and planned
through successful work 
and competition
in various branches and activities
of high improved community, 
while the others unlucky
inhabitant of authoritarian countries, 
post-soviet states
and Islamic caliphates
as the Iranian regime 
that must proud only with Omar Hayam
in last millennium, 
have had a very small portion  
of really famous and respected men
or just intrinsic  professionals. 
And their waste majority
looks like as screws in clock,s engine, 
or as soldiers in training camp of rebuilding empire, 
or as religious fanats in Friday namaz
or as new slaves 
in collective farm and weapon producing factories.

They have not any chances
for arise to personality
in terms of quality and standards
so usual for British community.

Premium Member A Recycle of the Spiritual Life

We dump waste 
To recycle, remade or reuse
But we hide our feelings deep in the heart
Never mean for recycling
Happiness to be appreciated, to be remembered
And sadness to be discarded
Or to be transformed into an experience or a lesson
We keep our knowledge in mind 
Never to be polished after retirement
But the world is changing every minute
Some old knowledge have to be 
Recycled, improved, reused or discarded
We adopted old habits and beliefs
Without ever dropping them
But old habits and beliefs have to be sieved
Those beneficial and true remain
Recycling will yield experience, new knowledge and truth
Which will indeed lead to a happier life


Premium Member Improved

Renewed 

Invest some time in changing you
Modify daily habits
Proclaim your victory
Renew your mind set
Organize all
Void the doom
Enjoy 
Dare








10-7-2015
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member I Believe and I Wonder Improved I Hope

I believe  a Force in the universe
pushes around and around suns, moons
pulls and pushes electrical storms
galaxies swarm as stars sway and form

I believe there is a Force that rules
a universe that sent the stars into the night
creates all the living creatures microbe to man
seaweed, otter, whale, shark, coral, sand
the leopard the lion the wild forest buffalo
why I wonder why the pain why is it so
but this I ponder, this in life we cannot know 

I wonder does this Force sigh
as creatures fight for more life
beyond what the universe intends
Or is all good and evil, sickness
and health, weak and strong
life and death part of  a creative plan
here I sigh why is it so for deep in my heart
I think we cannot know
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Recipe For Improved Life

Recipe For Improved Life

One change a month
In a period of a year
One will surely rejoice
Being delighted with choice

Kindness
Start with one act of kindness
To the ones closest to you
Deeds of kindness in lieu of stew

Good Deeds
Do one good deed each day
To the ones you love
Know you'll receive blessings from above

Patience
Strive to be more patient
Stop and think before respond
Bite your tongue anger won't be spawned

Anger
Work on anger control
Think before you react
Remember treat one's family with tack!

First try at Didactic
Sponsor:Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Contest: Another Didactic Poetry Contest
Form: Didactic


Premium Member Peggy Sue's Eggs

Spotted dress respectable knee length
Disguises her many feathered fetishes 
Fecked feeling clucky, red hen strength
Broods on bed of egg beak wet wishes

Wings tuck tight within delicate dreams
Shell inhibits image of sloppy slack yolk
Tiny tapping tells a time arrived redeems
Ruptured glue leak nesting box will soak

Eggy Peggy Sue oogles roosters commit
White eruption risen warm oven can cook
Pyriforms produced cushion a faithful sit
Cracked careless spill beneath silly chook

Attired in cabaret shake head resplendent 
Requires stupid roosters follow new rules 
Delicious derived from proud independent
Boss of her box where boys beg for jewels 





         10th January 
        Hen Sanctuary
Form: Rhyme

Improved Future

Be first to forgive;
There will be a compromise,
And improved future. 

Jim Horn
© James Horn  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Haiku

Premium Member New and Improved

 Our crumpled thoughts don't leave for good -
They saturate and brew,
Emerging back just when they should.
Revised, they feel like new.

January 14, 2021
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member The New and Improved Susie



Susie’s skirts now conceal her behind
(most of it), and she’s not so inclined
     to get drunk and start fights
       at the bars. She delights
in declaring, “Look, y’all. I’m refined!
Form: Limerick

Premium Member A New Improved Me

As sons go, I've got one of the best
Proud as punch as you can see
A lot of his traits are much like mine
A new and improved version of me

We walk the same, we talk the same
Our outlook is almost identical
Finding humour in mundane things
Funny bones we constantly tickle

Enjoy performing our comedy routine
For those who happen to be near
Be they male or female it matters not
Squeaky clean humour, no fear

Proud as punch is how I am feeling
To have fathered this gem of a son
A little bit bias? Well maybe you're right
But we sure have oodles of fun!


© JJack Ellison 2013
Form: Quatrain

The Ribbon - Improved

Looking down at her lifeless dead face
The delicious fragility of her china doll complexion
I tied the ribbon in her hair in a foolish way
The atmosphere is so heavy with this tragedy
Her loved ones enter, I hope they will remember her alive
Her warm skin, loving smile and playful laugh
But looking into their bloodshot eyes, I can see their one wish
I know from my heart this wound will never heal.

Improved

from SELL OUT
Nick Armbrister 


Improved
Build the car with thicker metal
Give it a bigger engine more power
Beef up the brakes and gear box
Improve the other things
You’ll get an improved model
Looking like the old one
But with state of the art
Features full of benefits
Ride drive like the winds
Nobody and nothing to stop you
A souped up Olds Mobile
Give it some on the road
Ride to meet the Devil

New and Improved

Ok so which is it?
I mean it can't be
both "new" and "improved"
at the same time
now, can it?
It's like the 
egg and the chicken
one has to start
the process doesn't it?
So I'm thinking
the chicken knew
the egg was improved
but still...was unmoved.

© Goode Guy 2011-06-08

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© Goode Guy  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member The New and Improved Normal

The locusts yet screech after dawn
  While the buzzard cackles from his perch
The red sun's inflamed in the morn
   Snarled traffic pauses to lurch...

Staring into the abyss of an angry rush hour
  ~ Workers from home take a shower
Form: Rhyme

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