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The New and Improved Susie



Susie’s skirts now conceal her behind
(most of it), and she’s not so inclined
     to get drunk and start fights
       at the bars. She delights
in declaring, “Look, y’all. I’m refined!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/7/2024 5:48:00 PM
Love the new and improved Susie; too funny. And a funny thing, I'm married to a Susie, lol.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/8/2024 8:04:00 PM
Oh, wow! LOL! Thanks so much, David. Janice
Date: 1/7/2024 5:50:00 AM
That is a desirable transformation--fun read, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/7/2024 11:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

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