Best Go Down Poems


I Must Go Down To the Sea Again

I must go down to the sea again,
My face turned towards the sky
With wind-snatched sounds from the beach below
And above, the seagull’s cry.

Let me walk along the cliff again. 
Let me learn into the gale.
See the breakers as they curl and crash
Hear the sound of the shifting shale.

Let me lie in the cliff-top grass again.
Let me hear the singing sand,
Feel the sting of the wind-whipped dunes
And walk the long sea strand.
   
I must go down to the sea again,
So I can say ‘good bye’
And feel the salt spray on my face
Once more before I die.





Written for Tracy Decker’s “Inspired by the Masters” contest.
First line has been taken from John Masefield's lovely poem.
Form: Quatrain

Let Me Watch the Sun Go Down

Let Me Watch The Sun Go Down

Let me watch the sun go down
The end of a life giving day
The flowers tightly curl
Hiding their beauty until the light returns
Breezes slow and fade into stillness
The scents of the day drops onto the moist ground
Animals crawl into their lairs
Do they dreams of open fields?
Or do they watch the darkness
Eyes straining into nothingness
Looking for the moment of their deaths
Their babies cuddle beneath a dense thicket
Clinging close to their mother
Waiting, hoping for the morning’s light
Let me watch the sun go down
Watch its beauty as blue turns into gold and lastly black
Night comes and the world finally sleeps
And still I watch

Premium Member True Story - In Some Quarters Things Go Down This Way

When I say stuff you don't agree with
and you ask me questions about it
and I answer them 

and then you say stuff I don't agree with
and I ask questions
and you answer them 

and slowly we get
to know each
other as long as respect is foremost
in both our heads
this can get done

without violence.
Form: Verse


A Dangerous Lane To Go Down

Of all the lanes we could go down,
Memory Lane may be the most dangerous of all.

If you choose to take a trip down this lane,
There are a few precautions it would be wise to take. 
Be prepared for an emotional roller coaster,
Ideally you should start the journey emotionally detached,
With any preconceived ideas left behind,
And take time to visit more than just past wrongs,
It is a journey best postponed if suffering from fuzzy logic
Or Selective memory loss. 
Wearing rose tinted glasses may not be a good idea. 
Choose wisely any travelling companions.
Avoid alcohol or drugs for 24 hours before starting journey.

If you think the journey down is problematic,
The return journey may be more so.
Checking your baggage before you start back is a must,
As hate and prejudice along with others too numerous to mention,
Are always looking to hitch a ride,
Blame is looking for an easy transfer.
Virtual memories  are waiting to be picked up by the unwary.
You should not stop at some places after dark. 
If you want to avoid bitterness setting in.
To increase your chances of a successful journey
Down this lane and back.

As with most journeys,
Preparation and having realistic expectations are key,
Along with the right music to set the tone.
And don't forget your sense of fun and a willingness to explore
All that is available.

Ashes Might Go Down Easier

Once in a while -in a moment 

of immense sulfurous clarity, when 

every grace I locked in my dilated pupils

begins to form lesions, yellow-running

tears through the deepest, lusty scarlet –

black and white would be a relief.


My mind billows like sheets,

silken, swathing whore-hues

over my perception.

I have to turn my head, hold my eyelashes together

with two fingers 

hoping reality is more palatable

in the abstract. 


On the edges of my eyes, where the

tawny evil beckons, bending

streaks of light, blurred through my subconscious

I see myself continue.

Unfamiliar limbs flowing over the sidewalk,

never missing an ill-fated furrow,

the cracks that I know will break me

before they seep poison into my mother’s back.


I’ll set aflame this fool’s-gold heart in 

my crimson-stained fingers

and hope I don’t burn myself down

like the insanity with her claws on my eyes, 

holding every torch high and shrieking to the 

heavens for

fire, fire, fire;

No pretenses, just destruction –


hope ashes don’t lodge in my throat

like the drunken revelry,

the celebration: saliva and child-sobbing

unending in the streetlamps 

gag-reflex mercy from the pitiless

that preceded them.

Go Down Moses

I had a song on my heart for a while I could not described the feel the emotion
Of a tone take from favorable to last supper what it mean of such love
Humanity don of time next saw the 
Don of century seeing to reading I 
Understanding the meaning of music
But this song on my heart it means the 
World to hear it once again how does it go once more.
Form: Verse


Don'T Let the Sun Go Down On Me

tropical retreat
                                       bestowed by clouds overture
                                                somber islanders
Form: Haiku

If You Go Down To the Streets

if you go down to the streets today
beware of the frozen ground
if you go down to the streets today
you're sure to go slippin' around

for all the snow so pretty last night
has gathered there and turned into 
ice
Today's the day you need claws on 
your footsies.

winter time is such lovely fun
with snowflakes dancing in the light
watch them, catch them
challenge friends in snowball fight
you can sleigh, you can ski,  print 
angels in snow
"Till the cold and the wind come like 
thieves in the night
and a fire and your bed fill your heart 
with delight

it's cold down there in the streets 
today
it's better to stay at home
it's vile down there in the streets 
today
It's safer to stay at home.

the icy winds got spiteful alone
and turned pavements to soapy 
stone
and getting around is sure to be no 
picnic
Form: ABC

You Don'T Want To Go Down There

you don't want to go down there 
           Have you been there 
          Yes there where the politicians
          Are shooting killing and   
          Fighting                   
          I know you don't want to go       
          Down there 
          Yeah you don't want to go   
           Down there 

You don't want to go down there 
Down there the place so famous
Down there the place so dejected 
Down there the place so scattered
Do you want to go down there 
Down there where all is to be is death 
Down there where hell is on earth (ghetto)
Do you want to go down there
Yeah I know you don't want to go 
Down there 

          Have you been down there 
           Yes there where politicians 
           Are shooting killing and
           Fighting 
          I know you don't want to go 
          Down there
         Yeah you don't want to go 
         Down there 

You don't want to go down there 
Down there so polluted 
Down there full of corruption 
Down there so hard 
Do you want to go down there 
Down there where hunger kills
Down there where jails are full of 
Criminal as said 
Down there so hot 
Do you want to go down there 
Yeah I know you don't want to go down there 

           Have you been down there 
            Yes there where politicians
           Are shooting killing and
           Fighting 
          I know you don't want to go
           Down there 
         Yeah you don't want to
          Go down there 

You don't want to go down there 
Down there so terrible 
They say 
Down there so horrible 
Their media portray Africa 
Down there so dangerous 
They show to their innocent people
So now none want to go down 
There so bad 
Do you want to go down there 
Yeah I know you don't want to go 
Down there 
 
          Have you been down there 
          Down there where politician
          Are shooting killing and 
         Fighting 
          I know you don't want to go 
          Down there 
        Yeah you don't want to go 
        Down there
Form: Epic

Premium Member I Shall Only Go Down On My Knees For My Father---

Suffer me to fathom the sorrows
The unrighteousness of today's tomorrows
I shall not surcom to those pressures of life
I shall not give in to those valleys of demons strife
Render me on my pleas
I shall only go down
On my knees for my Father
And my Father's Name is Almighty
Almighty God

World of hate unacknowledged true love
The sinfulness of yours and mine
Redeemable but we're running out of time
Not give in to those valleys of demons strife
Render me on my pleas
I shall only go down
On my knees for my Father
And my Father's Name is Almighty
Almighty God

World and Satan may if I only allow
I speak it into existence 
I will not let the world nor Satan knock me down,
down to my knees walking over me
I go down to my knees to Reverence Him my Father God
  the All Mighty
         God
Form: Pastoral

Premium Member Do Not Go Down There

No, no, I tell you, no
Do not go down there,
Turn back from the door
Step away from the stair

I cannot tell you, I can't 
The secrets and the lies,
Because... it's too... dreadful 
When a pretty thing dies

Yes, she was a pretty thing
But, should you see her now,
All gone and gray and sunken
O, I could not tell you how ...

Don't look, please do not
Well, the door is open a bit,
Peer inside, dare if you must
Do so without my permit

But, o, the sun, she must set
And another day be done ...
Then up jumps the silver moon
Now ... isn't darkness fun!
Form: Rhyme

Words Grow Oysters Go Down

Words Grow Oysters Go Down

Words grow on barbed wire
On acid rain with sugar droplets
They sit on foreigners tongues assembled
Numbered and fermenting
Difficult to pronounce
Or say in public
Words never come easily
Buying vowels is expensive
Consonants too solid for the air around them
Stay heavy. They end there, untouched
Some words never fit the mouth
And remain unborn
Language seedlings grow in nations
Cultivated underground like mushrooms
Tasting damp and dark
Natural words slip away
Down the throat like oysters
There are no words for that
Form: Didactic

When Stones Go Down

Stones hide under rocks for cover
Left to their own devices they will never move
And don't have plans this afternoon

There is something about boulders too
Breaking loose from mountain tops
Roaring down with tumbling sounds

Stones have no choice but to follow in their actions
Join in the boulders calamity of gravity
Down with trouble and nothing better to do

One slip is all it takes to start an avalanche
When they crush the home set on the cliff
Make splintered sounds, cracking wood

It is too much collective heavy force
People inside become crumpled with the structure
Massive weight makes changes

Occupants of the house don't care for boulders 
And stones don't think of murder
They hide under boulders normally

Occasionally rocks become emotional
Boulders roll over with indifference
When stones go down the mountain

Premium Member Take the Up Elevator --Go Down, Come Back Up

Bad luck?  Bad news?
--Rage blindly
--Deny utterly
--Nosedive completely...

...Analyze deliberately
   Examine painstakingly
   Accept graciously...

...Re-invigorate, all the stronger for the experience!
Form:

When I Go Down

WHEN I GO DOWN

the thing that I hate more
than anything else is
the way I am powerless
to dictate my own moods

so many things could 
have been so much more
praying problems go away
in wasted breathless curse 

taking everything                                                                                                                      I've learned                                                                                                                          to teach destructive disregard                                                                                                                        going down to hit the bottom                                                                                                                           heavy load that got me there

clear myself of clouded mind
and watch myself settle down 
into places where peace can
search me ready to be found 

control slips through weak hands
as ever-present conscience shakes
its moral  head and reprimands 
blaming all ill on selfishness

exhaling briefly I hear Your voice 
it gives hope and hope  gives life
my words hardly making a noise
a fallen soul praise hath pried

assuring me I’m not dead and gone
my life is worthy and I belong


© Kim van Breda—June 2014

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