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How Gambling Haram Harms
Our religion forbids all 
games of chance guys
We ain't allowed to 
indulge in that harmful 
enterprise
But no one can claim that 
gambling is at all wise

To more has gambling 
brought much misery 
and misfortune
Trying your luck that 
way brings bad luck to 
this money goon!...

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Categories: elaborating, abuse, addiction, games,
Form: Didactic
Premium Member Niitthaar Perumai, the Fundamental Role of the Ascetic, Canto 3 of the Thirukkural By Thiruvalluvar
Niithaar Perumai, the Fundamental Role of Ascetics, Canto 26 of the Thirukkural, the Tamil Classical Treatise on Ethics, Translation and Commentary by T. Wignesan 


[Given the scarcity of information (mostly conflicting even then) on the origins and times of the author of this classical Tamil...

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© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: elaborating, education, humanity, life, philosophy,
Form: Epigram
Premium Member Parteeeee
Principally, pretty Penny the poet gave the ILLUSION of preening
Outside the Palace in the portico pre-party. 
Edward the Bard entered elegantly, elaborating with an INFUSION of
Trendy calligraphy pens and colored inks of CREATIVITY.
Ralph, the Shakespearian sonnet writer EVENTUALLY strolled in with a scroll.
You would think...

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Categories: elaborating, funny
Form: Acrostic

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Young Falling Minds
Approaching life with no scrutinizing dispositions.
Relishing their youth,
Basking in the freedom of their most lively years.
Or so they say.

Young falling minds:
Everything is limited by perception,
Perception leading to misconception,
Misconception gradually surging to holistic pessimism.
Fallen minds don’t possess frame,
Or rather let me say, they are cluelessly lame.
Back...

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Categories: elaborating, youth,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Action Reaction Mx Missle
mr.X may have said,"By any means necessary." In elaborating, I'll say,"By any means necessary which is sensible, logical, rational, ethical, and most of all moral." Lately, all I'm starting to see is a Dead Sea. I'm in no way God. But I hired him. He's...

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Categories: elaborating, autumn,
Form: Blank verse
Denouement
The garden was abloom
Life passed in glee
They were close friends
In a happy levity

He never felt that
She had started believing
The whole canvas of his poem
Was her exclusive possession

When he got the morphed photos
Involving him with a little girl
Who was his favourite student
All his peace went into...

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Categories: elaborating, conflict, dark, emotions, hurt,
Form: Verse



Words
Words, some times be brief
Words, never a full sentence
Words, like those of belief
Words, that bare reference
Words, can be powerful
Words, sometimes stark                        ...

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Categories: elaborating, write,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Quit Being Hyper Hypocritical About Freedom
Stop it! Quit being hypocritical about freedom
What type or what kind that you are talking about?
Be serious! Keep on talking about freedom
Until you drive me to boredom
Until I am strong enough to eat a live trout
Keep on yelling freedom, freedom
Until you lose your kingdom
In Galatians...

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Categories: elaborating, africa, america, betrayal, creation,
Form: Rhyme
Get No Gifts Sans Giving
Only so pleased by sacrifice
Proffered through sacred flame,
Graceful gods do give gifts of choice
So deserved by unselfish aim;
He that eats fruits by them bestowed,
And gives not so in turn,
Who gets, not so does earn,
A thief he’s that hath to all owed.    ...

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Categories: elaborating, giving, thanksgiving,
Form: Free verse
City Night
Eclectic is the night, with its potpourri of smells and sounds...
A perfect muse on this lit, but dark, city street...
This town seems to change after the days' sun fades...
The streetlights bathe the place in a soft, dim glow...
No glare from the towering buildings' glass faces...
Music...

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Categories: elaborating, social, people, people,
Form: Blank verse
Premium Member Whispers of Autumn We Longingly Recall
Under the canopy of the pine trees we lay
Enthralled in saffron shades of flaming fall-forest
As feisty robins sing and zesty sparrows play
Nestled in thick branches of evergreen foliage.

Enamored by blue-sky assimilating orange vibes
Twilight illuminates scarlet face of crimson arc
Having kissed ruby-cheeks of blushing sundown
Where bald-eagle...

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Categories: elaborating, autumn, memory, nature,
Form: Verse
Premium Member Literature
Literature
In a kingdom full of textbooks
There stood a documentary brooks...
Literature
Take thy literacy from out my heart
I am sworn of my descartes
The paper bound proficiency pretesting
My encyclopedia festering
Literature
I awoke and flung the philosopher
'It's that rhetorician,' I muttered
And its eyes have all the writing
Inciting, with my handwriting
Literature
Elaborating...

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Categories: elaborating, analogy, appreciation,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Do I Need That
A funny thing happened this evening
My littlest daughter sat too far back on the toilet, slipped in and was stuck
(Have we all been there? I remember my experience well...)
She found it hilarious and shouted for everyone to come and see
There she was wedged in, laughing...

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Categories: elaborating, anxiety,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
10-16-14: In a Conference Hall
The grey chairs form a perfect line of grey,
Like stagnant, grey-clad businessmen at work.
I have no life to give this lifeless day.
Blind, blundering Heart! Will you drain everything to grey?
My longings grab the life from surer joys,
	Shunning what is and grasping for what seems,
	Restless for...

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Categories: elaborating, how i feel,
Form: Lyric
The Squirrel Is Dead
The squirrel who played like a kitten is dead
    found her stiff and rigid body where she used to tread,
    on the ground by the pond she lay still and silenced
    only the furry tail still...

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© DM Babbit  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: elaborating, animal, death, weather, wind,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry