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Whispers of Autumn We Longingly Recall

Under the canopy of the pine trees we lay Enthralled in saffron shades of flaming fall-forest As feisty robins sing and zesty sparrows play Nestled in thick branches of evergreen foliage. Enamored by blue-sky assimilating orange vibes Twilight illuminates scarlet face of crimson arc Having kissed ruby-cheeks of blushing sundown Where bald-eagle flies conquering mountaintop. Amidst chirping birds a ghastly roar resounds -- Echoes of wildlife emanating nocturnal sounds-- As a deer, white-tailed, approaches camp grounds Ambling in glistening of starlit heavens above. Mountainous winds wheeze in ambiance of love Elaborating fervid themes evening mood invokes Awakening splendor of russet autumn dreams Applauding subtle hints in rhythms of heartbeats. Marveling air-dance of leaves red, orange, brown Lyrics of your heart spur a passionate response Flashing in moonlight a sassy, flirtatious glance Mesmerized by autumnal whispers of romance. April 8, 2020 Placed 1st: Poetic lines from a poetry soup poet-Eve Roper Sponsor: Silent One “Under the canopy of the pine trees we lay” from The poem: “Under the canopy of pine trees” by Eve Roper HM: Strand Pick 11 contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/19/2020 11:13:00 AM
Abundant captivating imagery sets the stage for another beautiful romantic ending, Vijay. ~ Congratulations ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/17/2020 3:23:00 PM
Ah so soothing; beautifully penned imagery, my friend.
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Date: 4/17/2020 8:14:00 AM
Way to go, I can see why this received top honours. Congrats.
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Date: 4/13/2020 6:45:00 PM
back to offer my congratulations on this beauty...I knew it was a winner on first read... hugs and blessings
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:24:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 4/13/2020 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Enjoy your day writing away.........
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:23:00 PM
Much appreciate Paula--many thanks.
Date: 4/13/2020 2:16:00 PM
- I knew this would be a 1st place poem, Vijay ... congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
Date: 4/13/2020 1:58:00 PM
Kudos dear Vijay - you poems go from excellent, to superb to unbelievable! Blessings Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate, Jennifer.
Date: 4/13/2020 11:57:00 AM
Lovely as always, Vijay! Congratulations on first place! Love: Flashing in moonlight a sassy, flirtatious glance
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:22:00 PM
Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.
Date: 4/13/2020 11:07:00 AM
Vijay, you've written such a lovely setting with such a romantic touch. Just stunning. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
Date: 4/13/2020 8:35:00 AM
Vijay Congratulations On your well deserved 1 placement! This is so descriptive one could have used a paint brush and achieved less! Brilliant work and very awe inspiring! Enjoy the Easter break!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:21:00 PM
Much appreciate Krish--many thanks.
Date: 4/13/2020 6:56:00 AM
So many wonderful lines here, I do not know how to start.. You seem to know the formula for entering my contest... I always admire, how you use word play to create your vivid imagery.. Always full of colour and vibrancy... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:21:00 PM
That is so kind--much appreciate, SO--many thanks.
Date: 4/12/2020 6:29:00 AM
A prayer for a Happy Easter full of health and love is being sent your way dear poet friend. Thank you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Belated Easter wishes for you.
Date: 4/11/2020 9:52:00 AM
Great composition my friend exploiting Eves talents...hope you are keeping safe Vijay...all the best from the Wingster :o)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2020 12:20:00 PM
Much appreciate WW--many thanks.
Date: 4/10/2020 12:22:00 AM
A poetic beauty.. As usual, you expressed your excellence when nature touched your pen..I adore your magical muse.. Long live poet..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2020 6:59:00 AM
That is very kind of you Jenish. Much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.
Date: 4/9/2020 7:29:00 PM
Such a beautiful seasonal poem. The mood is calm and tender. Peaceful. Eve is a very talented poetess. You have created a masterpiece, with this line from her poem. I feel like I am there in the moment. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2020 6:57:00 AM
Happy to read your feedback--much appreciate your kind remarks,Brandy--many thanks.
Date: 4/9/2020 6:37:00 PM
WOW Vijay! This is outstanding! I hope this receives Top honors! xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2020 6:56:00 AM
That is so very kind of you Connie--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 4/9/2020 10:05:00 AM
Such a beautiful, vividly descriptive piece, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2020 1:18:00 PM
Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Date: 4/9/2020 9:29:00 AM
wow, you were greatly inspired by her lovely line, Vijay. Just beautiful!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 4/9/2020 7:23:00 AM
Unending poetic beauty of rapturous verses that uplifts heart, spirit and mind, my friend Vijay. A Fav. For me my friend. Take care
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2020 9:44:00 AM
Much appreciate, Demetrios--stay safe my friend--many thanks.
Date: 4/8/2020 3:19:00 PM
I can listen to you recite poetry alllll day xo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2020 3:59:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 4/8/2020 2:07:00 PM
Marvelous imagery Vijay, I can feel Autumn in the lines of your beautiful write, Best for a win !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2020 2:17:00 PM
Much appreciate Mike--many thanks.
Date: 4/8/2020 10:36:00 AM
Eves line well inspired you Vijay, beautifully composed. Good luck. Stay safe and well. Tom
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Date: 4/8/2020 12:31:00 PM
Taking all the precautions to stay safe...you do the same, Tom. Much appreciate, as always..many thanks, Tom.
Date: 4/8/2020 7:17:00 AM
- GORGEOUS, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2020 12:30:00 PM
Much appreciate, as always--many thanks, Anne-Lise.
Date: 4/8/2020 6:38:00 AM
wow this is beautiful my friend, you took the given line and painted a masterpiece of vivid imagery...I am sure this one will be on the winner's list, it's gorgeous... hugs and blessings!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/8/2020 12:29:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful feedback my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

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