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Traces

TRACES...

A faint footstep left behind since my birth
And a thousand years later, I found so clear
A burning vision from the flames of wailing hearts
A drum-beat, a bull-horn sound, a clap
A music of realities dorn, this hour...

... somewhere this day...
I live to see it clear, my footsteps; so clear
From within the mirages I foresee a future
So my hearts' wish now is the sun's dawn
So I sing the lost rythm "Hail Thee Son's Afrikana"

At long last! oh what a day....
For the sun's blesses upon my heard
Times' testimony to my thirsts
For what we lost long ago, wailing as losts......
Traces of our footsteps yonder the dark clouds

Today is a merry day
For traces recoverred
For ideas emancipated
For the shackles clang of freedom
Worthy for none than the stocks* liberated now.

Human conciousness, human liberation
Spiritual Rediscoveries, soul cleansing
Races fostering bonds, lands-boundaries collapses
Hungers eradication, lives elongation
When the accordions laugh, as the twilights blazes.
 

(c) Lamptey Godson K. 2012

Premium Member Let Me Be More Than Just a Memory

Now I was born in the last century
Dorn into a world of diversity
And I've grown into this sinful sphere
Full of disappointments, savagery and fear
Now my parents are long gone dead
Just me and my brother of the immediate family alive left...
And I'm prayin for longevity of life
Even through heartache suffering and strife
Oh! Lord let me be more than
More than a memory
Lord help me, help me be more than a memory

Now I'm living on the other side
No longer married cause my wife died
Considered elderly but I'm just as young as God makes me feel
And I've grown into this sinful sphere
Full of disappointments, savagery and fear;
Reaching out further having no appeal

Oh! Lord let me be more than
More than a memory
Lord help me, help me be more than memory
Allow my legacy to go on and on and on
Up until You come. . .

Many think not of me
Some don't ever have time for me
Never bother to call or even come visit me
Some don't even have time for me
You see, everyone's got their own families  (0f there own)
No one wants you if you can't keep up
No one loves you unless you got enough (money and material things)

So don't remember me, be apart of me
Be my embrace be part of my cause
Don't let go, let God
Don't base  your lifetime of loving me base on a memory
Won't you come and be apart of my legacy

Don't let me be
Let me be more than just a memory

08/30/17
Written by James Edward Lee Sr.

Wonderland

Wonderland

O'er the hills lush and green,
Around the squishy marsh,
A ship stopped at the dock,
Her name was Wonderland. 

Over the seas she sailed,
With me as the captain,
And the sailors were all young men
But their strength never failed.
They rowed the oars for hours,
Often day and night,
Whilst one rowed the other rested,
I was proud of my crew.

We set off early at dawn,
With a blow from my bugle horn,
And all the excited passengers
Came with me to Land Dorn.
We sailed the mighty seas
That tossed and turned and roiled,
But our boat was even stonger,
And it tamed the wild ocean.

To paradise we were headed,
The mystical land of Dorn,
Where 'tis said the faeries live
The magical land of Dorn.
We arrived the following day,
The faeries were quite nice,
They gave us food and gave us drinks,
And told us to permanantly stay.

O'er the hills lush and green,
Around the squishy marsh,
A ship stopped at the dock,
Her name was Wonderland.


-dive-

Poetry Day #2: Alfred Dorn Sonnet
Dive

The moon is high as she watches the night,
The gentle crashing waves of the ocean.
A light midnight breeze passes through her hair. 
Closing her eyes as she smiles in the light,
The silence setting her dreams in motion;
Nothing can touch her body while she’s there. 

Standing up, the girl steps towards the ocean, 
Falling, the blurry world in slow motion. 

Air rushing up, but the girl gives no fight,
As she dives into the ocean’s blue waves. 
Despite morning being far, the sea is bright,
Welcoming her as one of the free slaves.  
As the world around turns a hue of white,
She is now walking in the watery graves.

An Alfred Dorn Sonnet - I Feel Nature

I FEEL NATURE
**************
I feel nature, it's part of my being.
A cock blackbird soloist, what a joy.
The tiny Jeny wren throughout the day.
Nature's turned it's volume up, ears ringing!
Bidding me to hip-hop but I am coy.
My invisible partners dance away.
Fairies with their friends, Elves and Leprechauns.
Fireflies and Gloworms partied till light dawns.
Can't teach nature about hip-hop, raving!
The whole forest is jamming, owls twoo, late.
The dawn chorus, ain't all life amazing!
I breathe in joy, all wildlife celebrate!
Time now, party done, all procreating!
Oh yes, next time, I'll bring my wife, my mate!

***************

Zingara

In darkness beams a shaft of tender light,
A dream foretold within a gypsy’s tent,
While she sat gazing on an open hand,
The gift of gods revealed in second sight,
And had she seen my heart was left unspent,
As she then told of the destiny planned.
Then into the cup, she began to stare,
And told the wonder that she saw in there.
How love and fortune lay within the night,
As in the crystal, she then cast her eye,
My hopes and dreams were bound in love’s first flight,
At last, no more my heart is born to cry,
I felt the joy that comes from pure delight,
As my dreams unfurled in a gypsy’s scry.





Fprm: Alfred Dorn Sonnet


Thine Eldest Graduating Sharply Splendidly Supremely

Into Young Womanhood

this glorious role, sans
     helping beget and nurture thine first born
three day shy of Christmas 1996,
     fills thy being
     with joie de vivre and doth add dorn

more resplendent than any horn
of plenty, and aye can only imagine
     more precious than fine spun gold
ah...how this papa doth recall,
     when he didst hold

and/or swaddle his edenic bundle of joy
     and taking stock,
     how she (christened
     Eden Liat) didst mold

herself into an autonomous offspring,
     rarely receiving a scold
cuz, she most times seemed well mannered
     and infrequently told,

and thus said benevolent prized progeny
     required no special programming nor app
even when a child, adolescent or,
     latte (sipping) teen,
     this genetic bounty evinced

     laser like thinking
     with a custom made thinking cap
although...yes, (there erupted a verbal flap
toward the missus or me,
     (the latter and former

     markedly differed asper child rearing,
     which unseen rift 
     engendered a figurative gap
mollycoddling, holding, consoling,
     et cetera distraught daughter on me lap

which cradling, fas incubating, rocking...,
     which oft found 
     this biomedically cherished baby taking her nap
twas at such poignant bonding moments,
     aye DID NOT decry the parent trap,

thus now, special "gifts"
     with bittersweet motions bespeak
as tears (viz - ode to joy)
     stream down each stubbled cheek
this middle aged grown man,

     doth recollect with embarrassment
     how as a teen thyself as classic "geek"
whereat mine demeanor extremely meek
AND let NO chanced avail

     for one to take a peak
and now...unstoppable
     grievousness awoke, 
     oh no...nothing un speak
or print able did occur only a human weak

ness, when thine voice 
     un-necessarily raised yet,
blink back moistened 
     slightly crowsfeet darkened eyes set

tills within this intelligent 
     well read and let
hard bloke accepts the "circle game of life"
...listening to thee

     beautiful, charming, exemplary dulcet
an em ma nant treasured 
     valuable accouterment tummy life...
     YOU BET!

A Little Patriot's Rhetos

Little patriot's rhetos

If we don't see through,
Through the eyes of our fathers
And if we don't write
Write the stories of our mothers
Can we ever be better 
Better than bustards

And if we hate those
Those Who fly with, our same features
Dorn in our same feathers
Won't it make much a difference
If we as a people, 
If we embrace each other
And be the other's shoulders

Eloping away to foreign places
Places far Away in Westernlands
Proudly Abandoning your beloved
Your own beloved motherland
Building majestic palaces in thereto
Imagine a black  palace in Switzerland

Can all our success stories
Can they all be written
Written in foreign places
What will be our legacies
Notorious runaways I guess!
That one  I bet, I will bet on it forever

Will you be happy honestly
Will your ghost find peace
When Far away from its kind
Away from the cradle of its being

Let's build our own legacies
Write our own stories
Love our ownkind
And hate no one else
That way we will survive
Survive the harsh realities of derision

Road To Recovery Still Battling Empty Nest Syndrome 1st Twitter

many a december twenty forth gone by, 
whence wisp of carolers ghosts hauntingly adorn
remembrance of sum...
er things passed along tummy 
from ma late ma alm 

compunction eruption viz:
fruition, gumption interruption 
sans redemption how became re: born
whereby this pop - 
bleary eye lids ready to droop

with his tired bones snapping 
and popping like jimmy crack corn
an immediate need to succumb to sleep 
found me transfixed how blessings did a dorn 
mine attention riveted at shrouded foghorn
echoing...choing...hoing 

never knowing hands of time didst flap
matthew scott harris, 
who yawned avast cingular gap 
countless decades swallowed un hap 
pulley lost soul within early 
twenty something years
devoid of inner GPS to help map 
and guide this stricken n fore lorn future pap
though the hour 
(at time this got written) nsync kin rap
pa head lee well nigh 

closing in on six in the morn 
way before synapses snap
crackle and pop, 
whereby the sage within mine psyche 

waving a finger - tsk tsk - with mild scorn
for forgoing to bed, yet...
a powerful tsunami like force arose up 
when viewing the account of how tara - blank -
became rent asunder and torn
from an terrible accident of fate - 
though a miraculous recovery now worn.

now fast forward to recent past 
receding extremely fast
as if powered by remnant cosmic blast
resulting in avast

blurred montage flickr ring
exercise regimen of running plus lifting weights - 
perhaps so many reps of a curl
finds me applauding, huzzahing, 
and praising daughter's efforts...so you go girl

with all inner strength pell mell into fitness:
disciplining molding, sculpting- yar body hurl
testing your limits to the max
whether across busy urban streets or...
where landscape offers open space with pearl
jam skies - in outlying less populated tracts - 
giving freedom to dance n twirl.

Did Their Lives Matter, Part I

You see all of these protesters out
chanting and screeching on the TV,
convinced that we’ll solve all our problems
Ii we just get rid of the police.
They claim that they’re targeting people
merely of the color of their skin,
though by the per capita numbers
whites and Latinos tak it one the chin.
But they keep screaming about privilege
in a strangely religious fervor,
and use it as a helpful excuse
to release all their pent-up anger.
But when it comes to dark-skinned people,
whose interests they claim to pursue,
they all proclaim that ‘Black Lives Matter,’
but they sure don’t’ act as if they do.

First let’s look at all the businesses
that the rioters torched and destroyed,
they were mostly in inner cities,
so the end result we can’t avoid
is that the people they claim to help
were the same people who worked those stores,
which means countless folks with much melanin
won’t have productive jobs anymore.
Their own siblings, mothers, and fathers
bow have no method to bring in cash.
Basically, their lives have been ruined,
I wonder did they care about that?
Did looters realize that their actions
would make their communities much worse?
they all proclaim that ‘Black Lives Matter’
…except for those they put out of work.

And then there is the late David Dorn,
a dark-skinned grandfather, former cop,
who saw the evil burning his town
and went outside to protect the block,
hoping to provide security
for the pawn business of a good friend.
For wanting to protect his hard work
vile looters brought him to his end.
But strangely you do not hear his tale
when you watched the evening news at night,
the rioters get interference
but a good man’s death is not in sight.
Not one of these damn ideologues
care that a hero’s life now is done,
I guess that black life didn’t matter,
since his narrative was the ‘wrong’ one...

CONCLUDES IN PART II.

Don'T Fit the Narrative

The poor man’s name was David Dorn,
he was murdered by rioters,
trying to defend his friend’s business,
but the reaction quite disturbed.
The media wouldn’t say his name,
all mention of it soon was dropped,
since Dorn was a good family man,
and ‘worst’ of all, a retired cop.
Such people do not help the left,
no boost did the man’s demise give,
so this man’s loss was forgotten,
he didn’t fit the narrative.

Her name was Jessica Whitaker,
and she said that, “All lives mattered.”
Because she disagreed with some
she was shot dead, cruelly murdered.
Her three-year-old lost a mother,
and her fiancé lost his love,
but she was pale and believed ‘wrong,’
so no media picked it up.
She wasn’t a chosen ‘victim,’
and she had the wrong adjectives,
they would not speak of this great crime,
she didn’t fit the narrative.

His name was Cannon Hinant and
he was a boy, just five years old,
when his neighbor chose to murder him,
and leave his tiny body cold.
Such a vicious and savage act,
but the media had no time,
Cannon was white, his killer black,
so they said nothing, acted blind.
Had the skin colors been reversed,
we’d hear nothing but their missives,
only ‘some’ lives are worth reporting,
he didn’t fit the narrative.

Objective, ha! That’s such lie,
they’re propagandists through and through,
and you’ll be pushed aside quickly
if you don’t help their point of view.
They tried to hide cities aflame,
bathe us all in their deception,
if the full truth might hurt the left,
if it might cost them an election.
Horrific crimes they’ll push aside,
as if these victims never lived,
God damn the mainstream media
and their partisan narratives.

These people deserve to be remembered.

Premium Member Care Beyond George Floyd

Four years before George Floyd met death
Tony Timpa drew his last breath
A cop pressed a knee into his back too
Tony cried warnings, the warnings were true.

Tony was white, George was black
A knee in Tony's back wasn't a racist attack
In neither case, was killing sought
It was a bad police tactic, that cops were taught.

If we talk of George Floyd also recall David Dorn
When protests erupted, then riots were born
You can cry "no justice, no peace'
But a looter shot David, made his life cease.

David, a black man, was trying to protect a store
That too is a story we should not ignore
To some, black lives matter only if the story resonates
So many other stories buried in these United States.

Don't just care when the outrage aligns,
Think of the lives falling between the lines.

Paint the Heart With Love

P-aint the heart with love, 
A-im to bring pink color; 
T-he wound is finally healed, 
R-ecovered from pain and horror.
I-t's time to erase the scar, 
C-omforting the troubled mind; 
I-nside cracks of the core
A-re filled with soothing sign.

S-o paint the heart with love, 
U-sing care and concern; 
A-dorn the feeling with passion, 
R-esemble the pretty pattern.
E-arly September seventeenth, God is watching from above; 
Z-ealously apply affection, paint the heart with love.

Premium Member I Gotta Laugh So I Don'T Cry

When twist-and-turns, like narrow mount-roads, I face,
When deaths of kith, like winds in fall, bring disgrace;  
When my cries, like waves of oceans, surge endless,
I laugh, serving the orphan and the friendless...!

Wealth gone, poverty dorn, when I'm in the pits,
When shelter, in rain torrents, shatter to bits;
Stitching, ad infinitum, old robes I wear, 
I laugh with the poor who laugh in loincloth bare...!

When exhaustion and hurt feelings weigh me down,
In floods of helplessness when I sadly drown;
Grasping divine-drawn frail hands as lifebuoy,
I laugh within forgetting every ennui...!

Life is present presented to live the present,
Accepting each good and evil heaven-sent; 
As farmers separate corns from hay and chaff,
Keeping away grim facades, I loudly laugh...!


13 November 2022
Pick-A-Title, Vol 33 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh |

That Accident

Know very well why you are shedding tears;
but what you gain except remembering
that dreaded sorrowful event of past.
Makes you physically weak as I've fears
it'll affect your life, think surrendering
to HIM, HE will heal your woe, anguish fast.

Never blame yourself for that accident;
you're not at fault for the incident.

I was at the driving seat, despite years
of experience, it was my error 
of judgement to decide,  it appears  
that stiff turning one does flee in terror;
Yet, I wasn't cautious; horn didn't reach my ears;
'twas my fault, I didn't look at the mirror.
~x~x~

The Alfred Dorn sonnet is different than most sonnets,
in that it has an Italian sestet and a Sicilian sestet
linked by a couplet. 
Both sestets share common rhyme set by the first line. 
The rhyme scheme is as follows;
a. b. c. a. b. c. ... d. d. ... a. e. a. e. a. e.

Pasted from http://www.thepoetsgarret.com/2006Challenge/oneten.html
© Pratap Roy  Create an image from this poem.

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