Best Clunking Poems


Premium Member Twas the Night Before Christmas

'Twas the night before Christmas
when I and my groom
finally found a motel 
but with just one room.

My groom was in the bathroom -
leaving me alone-
so that he could douse himself 
with some cheap cologne.

I - in my red negligee -
thought of bump and grind,
visions of his sugar plums
dancing in my mind.

Then a noise I heard outside
gave me such a fright!
who was out there in the snow
on our special night?

Opening our small room’s door,
I felt like a goof.
It was just an icicle 
falling off the roof.

Then I felt a sudden breeze.
One unlucky bride!
As the door behind me shut,
I was locked outside.

When upon my motel door
I began to pound,
it was clear that my dear groom
did not hear a sound.

Right before my startled eyes,
what should then appear?
Someone dressed as Santa Claus,
filling me with fear!

His eyes, though not so cheery,
lit up, seeing me
as he crossed the street and came
stumbling drunkenly.

I stood helpless, trembling in
scanty siren red
when an icicle fell down
clunking my poor head.

I revived in the ER,
thong still on my rump!
Underneath my bandage was
an enormous lump.

Thankfully my groom was there,
smelling of Old Spice.
But we’d have no chance to give
gifts naughty and nice.

At our room I later saw
Santa Claus was there -
that same guy who’d seen me in
sexy underwear.

Having seen my accident
he’d informed my groom
right before he then collapsed
stone drunk in our room.

Santa on our honeymoon
with cheeks rosy red,
(but not one “Merry Christmas”), 
stole our wedding bed.

12/8/12 
Now used for Joseph May's 
The Night Before Christmas Poetry Contest

Premium Member Ordinary Toothpick

The ordinary toothpick fills the needs of mankind
With a pick, pick, here, and a pick, pick there.

A little piece of stick with no holes, handles
Cords, plugs, tops, bottoms, insides, or batteries.

You little piece of stick, literally at the bottom of the totem pole.
Probably preserved in a bottom drawer in the dark rusted hull
Of the Titanic at the bottom of the sea; you little unwanted stick!

You little piece of stick, colorful, glistening, and perky sticking
Out of a pig-in-a-blanket on a party boat that’s floating
Off the Boston skyline, then slung; I said slung like spit
Into the cold murkiness that keeps the ship afloat, the party going
And the hors d’oeuvres handed out.  Or, is the ship clunking about 
On millions of discarded toothpicks?  

All hail the toothpick.
You ordinary little piece of stick, or maybe,
Unordinary!?

The Piano Tuner

The Piano tuner

 The blind piano tuner knocked on the door
Where I was a caretaker -like I can afford to buy a piano-
I showed him into the music room and left 
to read a newspaper.
I heard some clunking as he tunes; then there was a long
silence, he had fallen asleep with his head on the keys.
When he awoke I said the piano was perfect, but for
some reason, it only plays Edelweiss and similar tunes,
not that I care, never cared for classical music.
© Jan Hansen  Create an image from this poem.


The Bark

The night was dark, in the park when I heard a bark

then a ringing bell, blood curdling yell straight from Hell

A loud clunking sound from the ground had me spellbound

by the ploys of the noise, but still maintained my poise.

I shed a tear from fear, but there was no one near.

No hand to hold, when I felt so cold, then behold!

Revealed, what had thus been concealed, an old airfield

Two ghostly planes and blood stains, wings secured by chains

The thump sound was a pump used to clean out the sump

The barking ceased. Time to feast, or a brew, at least!



August 20, 2020
Keen Observation I Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Funom Makama

Extirpated Idolatry

Lithospherical clunking, zest of our navel

Tumultuous melt, fizz ridden obliquitous

Inestimably stemming, trunking, branching

Exaspergrasping for equichosis,  ecliptic apotheosis

We shimmer and charade as though dwelt in strobe

Inscribing the vitroglyph, micro slinks to macro

Then back again

I sit lotus, perfecting the interlocking polygonoids of this scape

I resonate and learn over a new sheaf

A Palm Map.
© Rob Browne  Create an image from this poem.

Horses In Beverly Hills

Concrete bedroom w/ lights & sound.
People gather across wet streets --
The click of a women’s heel --
Many clicks like horses trotting.
Herds of clunking mares fighting
for the prize.

Recognition in being the first horse
across the finish line
The first blue suit from Calvin Klein.

Our country is at war.
Kids are dying!

I know those things but do you know
when the Rolex store closes?


Off Beat

I gave you a listen 
the rhythm is missing 
either it’s hidden 
or locked up in prison 

Say each word of the line
or it won’t clunking rhyme
speak one line at a time
so the sounds combine

You're a dad at a disco 
this ain’t a diss though 
you’ve a hit and miss flow
like a pissed ho 

For that I leave an apology 
I too can’t rap like a proper g
can’t keep my timing properly 
but so what 
piss pot 
rap I’m not 
I’m poetry
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Pre doms' v free doms

Should we forget about freedoms.?? And accept some
Pre-doms? Like a pre-bunking' so childlike and clunking.'
Breaking structure much nomen-less clutter..' A nonsense of
Pre-sense..' showing credentials quite useless.' Artificial
Utopia advertizing a visionary myopia.' Its peonies and
Pretzels to supplement 'word salad' utensils.?? With Kids flying
Killer drones..' we must emerge from this twilight zone.!

A Tv Star

A TV. Star. 

The man hiding in the light his persona, sparkling
sunglasses not enough when we gloried in his 
mesmerizing peculiarity. We saw not the sinister
black shadows behind him… except, from time to 
time we felt revulsion a glint in his eyes and shark 
teeth that told of what we didn’t want to know. 
He died a much loved hero, the abused stayed silent.
Now the dark hideous nature of the man is for all to 
see; and must bring shame of those who knew but
for the sake of his fame never spoke out. Pedophiliac, 
the seducer of children, his clunking gold chains we 
followed, to the tune of greed into the dark abyss of 
fear and loathing.

Sea Life

Sea Life 

What I see is not very much, a Formica table 
greasy plying cards and dirty finger nails.
It is like being stuck in a deep valley between 
green waves; tomorrow will be the same and 
my ignorance is as the flat map on the wall that
 shows oceans and land but nothing more; in 
the corner of the map is writing something
 idiotic in Latin: “navigation is more important 
than life. “Valparaiso and Buenos Aires names 
on the map, harbour bars are the same a dirge 
of empty, laud music and idle lips is what I see, 
just like a Formica table greasy playing cards, 
dirty finger nails; clunking fists hitting a table 
in impotent triumph… and nothing more but 
endless gossiping about fun last time ashore.

Premium Member I Am Pretending To Be Normal Today

I am pretending to be normal today. I have been doing it for two hours.
Sitting here, waiting for this side of me to be discovered by Joe, my first and last husband.
He walked through once and said a big enthusiastic ‘good morning Sweetheart.’
I must be normal because this did not irritate me as much as it does usually before coffee.
I tried to make myself appear normal, so I waved, but I did not speak.
If your black cloud is not engulfing you in the early part of the day, you are the weird one.
The second time he ventured into the living room where I was comatose in my recliner,
He asked “What are you watching?”  In an accusatory, all-knowing-me kind of way.
“Ghost story stuff,” I said, casually, in a really normal-sounding way, but my voice cracked.
Others watch ghost stuff, and they are normal right?
My hair is standing straight up, and there are goosebumps all over my arms right now.
“Do you want some eggs?”
More normal conversation from my one-and-only.
This does sound normal, but I am full of cookies to the point of bursting, so I decline.
“I had cookies,” I say.
Normal, right?
“Do you want to do anything today?”
He has failed to notice how normal I am, so I decide to give up.
I flip off the TV, and listen to my frightened heart clunking in relief.
Normal, shormal.   Never again!

Burst: On the World Behind Eyes

Press your eyes with 
The strength of the
Index and the ring finger. 

What do you see? 
See the shifting orbs of luminescent aqua, 
Starry-eyed fireflies wafting in a 
majestic, arrested stasis.

See the fabled constellations 
Form and appear, illuminating 
The dark void. They tell 
Stories of primitive times, 
Clinking and clunking clubs
Banging on the dusty ground
While newly-minted fire crackles,
Bursting with the galvanizing spirit 
Of God’s creationist firepower. 

See the subdued hues ooze freely, 
Seeping into each other to form
Fractious fractals, each corner and 
Angle forming the triangular wings 
Of angels singing the songs of 
Heavenly peace and joyful sublime. 

Take your index and ring finger off your 
Eyes. What do you see? 

See a darkened world seemingly dejected, 
But with glinting color orbs all around, 
Threatening to burst through the sun-kissed 
Meridians, lingering in purgatory. 

One only needs the strength to find them.

Premium Member Life Charges Up and Down Hills

Life charges up and down hills so fast
One day you are biting your cousin
And they are laughing because you are two.
But not your cousin of course.

In a blink of a wild flower,
you are clunking around in Mommy’s heels.
Thinking you are “all that”
because tomorrow you start kindergarten.

Before you kick off the second horrible shoe
You are learning to ride a bike without extra wheels.
Around and around in circles I go,
and then poof!

It is summer camp, church camp.
Lots of girls are taking Bible recitation seriously.
My friend and I are talking about music and hot guys.
We have started to blossom, and we are amazed.

It is prom today, and I am irritated my date is drinking too much.
I decide to drive myself home and let him walk.
I get his car keys by lying,
But probably save the fool’s life when I do.

Marriage was short-lived, to someone else, not to that guy.
I am fifty now with a child who does not speak to me.
Glad I have my childhood friends.
They are lonely now, abandoned by their husbands.

We form a little group, and marvel that we were eleven yesterday.
Poof! Guess what? 
We are now seventy.
Does anyone else know that we are twelve-year-olds on the inside?
Still blossoming and still amazing?

Premium Member Sleeping Outside


A week of summer heat
with no cooling breeze
or break made bedrooms 
like brick kilns 
still hot after a day's firing.
You couldn't sleep.
Air conditioning back then
was a couple of loud,
clunking fans that blew
a hum of hot air.

To get relief
we would all sleep outside
on the back lawn on hessian
camping beds that sagged
and creaked even under
a child's weight. The night air
carried a slight damp
and the hint of a breeze.

I can remember laying back
under a blaze of stars,
giddy and full of questions 
at such wonder strung 
in filaments overhead. 
Uncertainty and doubt 
had begun to pick 
my childish world apart. 
I would grip the sides
of the bed possessed by
a strange sense 
that if I let go, I would fall
upwards into the sky.

I could never get to sleep
even when a cool came 
upon the early morning air.
There were too many
sounds I could not explain
and shadows my mind 
would shape into threats.
I would creep back inside,
back into a walled safety
and the heat.

Premium Member The Sorcerer of the Moment

He takes the largest ladle he can find
And stirs them around and around
clunking their heads together
Scrambling their brains, 
Making them angry
And he laughs

He is the sorcerer of the moment
popular with his followers
who revere him
because of the fear
that if they do not
he will turn and they will become
the sorrowful, the left behind, the unchosen ones

He throws in dashes of anger and dollops of grief
He is the master of manipulation, 
There is no escape 
Others have tried to get close enough
to toss in enthusiasm, love and hope.
But alas, he is stronger because of the numbers
who chase him, trying to be the chosen one.
He spits into the fray, frightening them just a tiny bit more.

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