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The Bark

The night was dark, in the park when I heard a bark then a ringing bell, blood curdling yell straight from Hell A loud clunking sound from the ground had me spellbound by the ploys of the noise, but still maintained my poise. I shed a tear from fear, but there was no one near. No hand to hold, when I felt so cold, then behold! Revealed, what had thus been concealed, an old airfield Two ghostly planes and blood stains, wings secured by chains The thump sound was a pump used to clean out the sump The barking ceased. Time to feast, or a brew, at least! August 20, 2020 Keen Observation I Poetry Contest Sponsored by Funom Makama

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Date: 9/15/2020 1:30:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 9/14/2020 7:36:00 AM
Jenna, congrats on your win with this suspenseful write. Time to feast, or a brew, at least! Enjoy your day ~ John
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Date: 9/14/2020 6:00:00 AM
i feel goosebumps reading your poem Jenna!! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2020 5:33:00 AM
A big big congratulations for this feat. I am so sorry this is coming a month late, due to the pressure, we medical practitioners are facing at this time, I didn't have the time to go through the contest, but I am glad I did. it was a difficult decision to make, a big congratulations to you once again.
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Date: 8/22/2020 7:46:00 AM
Nice one Jenna, all the best in the contest, it sure sounds like a winner! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2020 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for being encouraging, Jennifer.
Date: 8/21/2020 4:45:00 AM
Bery clever,Jenna My fingers crossed you carry the trophy. PANGIE xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thanks for the crossed fingers, Pangie. Have a great weekend!
Date: 8/21/2020 2:41:00 AM
Well done, I tried to write something for this contest but I was killing too many trees
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 3:30:00 AM
Tree hugger not mugger, Mark. It was a bit of a challenge that I'm not sure was met. Thanks!
Date: 8/20/2020 10:29:00 PM
I see you have applied your very talented pen to a challenging contest. It reads very smoothly and with a lucid storyline. Well done, Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 3:29:00 AM
I started it a week ago then gave up, but I don't like to leave things undone, so there it is...blah blah blah. Thank you for thinking it makes sense, John.
Date: 8/20/2020 9:26:00 PM
Another with a hint of the twilight zone, love these kind Jenna. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/20/2020 9:43:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. I felt like I was IN the Twilight Zone writing this one. lol I don't know if I did it correctly or not.

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