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Off Beat

I gave you a listen the rhythm is missing either it’s hidden or locked up in prison Say each word of the line or it won’t clunking rhyme speak one line at a time so the sounds combine You're a dad at a disco this ain’t a diss though you’ve a hit and miss flow like a pissed ho For that I leave an apology I too can’t rap like a proper g can’t keep my timing properly but so what piss pot rap I’m not I’m poetry

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