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Pre doms' v free doms

Should we forget about freedoms.?? And accept some
Pre-doms? Like a pre-bunking' so childlike and clunking.'
Breaking structure much nomen-less clutter..' A nonsense of
Pre-sense..' showing credentials quite useless.' Artificial
Utopia advertizing a visionary myopia.' Its peonies and
Pretzels to supplement 'word salad' utensils.?? With Kids flying
Killer drones..' we must emerge from this twilight zone.!

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thriveni c mysore

November 1, 2024 at 9:03 PM

when man decided 'freedom means breaking structure', we fell from divine grace dear poet. No turning back now- we are but collateral damages of those free-thinkers. Loved your thoughts dear poet. Beautiful write. Blessings.

Joe Maverick

November 2, 2024 at 11:20 AM

You have a uniqe view Thriveni..Though none know All apart from God..Yet we can get a good grasp or idea of things.'

Joseph P. DiMino

November 1, 2024 at 10:40 AM

Hi Joe; there is only God. All substance, form, distance and time are God. We can only distance ourselves from God by wrong, lesser use of mind. A deceptive illusion of consciousness. But God is the place and substance of creation. When He created the universe, he did not go outside of Himself for parts -- if He did, then there is a bigger problem than any of us can imagine. All dimensions, all potentials are God. Acceptance, realization brings us closer to truth (the conglomerate of God~ is Love). Avoidance brings us cause and effect...for every wrong direction, there is a corrective force -- ouch! Don't I know it.

Joe Maverick

November 1, 2024 at 11:00 AM

Well put Joe Dimino you I see As a stalwart spirit and I welcome your comments which are original and very Honest.'

Daniel Henry Rodgers

November 1, 2024 at 9:52 AM

Hello Joe, ohh so many societal contradictions, blending whimsy with sobering reality. Your clever wordplay and unexpected imagery challenge readers to confront the absurdities of modern life. Your poem serves as a powerful wake-up call, urging us to critically examine the world we're creating. Amen! Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Joe Maverick

November 1, 2024 at 11:10 AM

Great to see your thoughts Daniel, I thank you for your Consideration, I am trying my Best to reveal to myself as much as anyone only God knows it all. It is good to ask Him always.' Yet we don't always in the case of trudeau.? I have done.' and I see God is Active and has empathy for Humanity 'of which he has the copyright.? The master key.' Which overrides any other power.' All Glory all Power in Him.'

Michael Tor

November 1, 2024 at 4:03 AM

It is a twilight zone Joe and it will never end but get worse. Thank you for bringing awareness. Thank you for sharing my friend hope all is well. God bless you...

Joe Maverick

November 1, 2024 at 5:59 AM

Hi Michael, We can only Rely on God.' Thank you for Your time here.'

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