Astonish Poems | Examples

Premium Member I am a kindred dolphin

dazzling frothy dolphin dives in dual dynamic with daughter
I marvel at their beauty, and their diving prowess
They astound, astonish, delight and disarm me
I feel one with them, a kindred dolphin

Perfect Bones

Here comes the North Wind
Blowing the mountain of bones
Suddenly bones moving like whirlwind
Bone to bone connected its parts
To form a human skeleton standing
Throng of them standing in front of the Prophet
Standing, lifeless skeleton many of them
Came the voice in heaven saying
Can these bones live or not
The Prophet says, come and say my Lord
Then came the East Wind bringing sinews
Covering the bones with muscles all parts
Another wind bringing skins, hairs, eyeballs
Others came bringing mouth, nose and ears
Covering all the body parts to form human flesh
Standing, still lifeless in front of the Prophet
Came the last wind giving life on human flesh
The eyes began to roll, the mouth began to speak
Words of praises reverberating the place
Coming from the life of human flesh now
The Prophet is astonish the miracles that happen
In front of him are not the bones of the Church of the Dead
They are now living bones of the Church of the Living. 
They are now praising the Lord day and night.


Premium Member Fortune Cookies

Fortune Cookies

Sing every day and chase the mean blues away
the way I sing, the blues won’t be going too far.

Experience is the best teacher
obviously, I never listened to my teachers.

You will be happy with your spouse
I refuse to answer on the grounds that it may incriminate me.

Eat chocolate to have a sweeter life
and gain about a hundred pounds doing so.

Dance as if no one is watching
I plan to do that as I have two left feet.

Things usually do not happen overnight. It takes time and hard work
well, I guess nothing will ever happen for me.

You will receive money from an unexpected source
unless I have a rich relative I don’t know about, it ain’t gonna happen.


Move in the direction of your dreams
what happens if they turn out to be nightmares?

Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest,
It has been my experience that a good deed never goes unpunished!

Your ability to juggle many tasks will take you far.
Well, I have never could juggle.

Premium Member Zen mode

we celebrate the embrace
earth life offers
of contraction and expansion 
separation and union
limitation and liberation
designed to astonish 
light of our true Self within
mirroring the heartbeat of God

Premium Member BE A SOMEBODY

Write!  Anything. Be a dream writer
Write poeticly. Be about a spree! Take
Vacation from mundane. Be 
Astounding! Astonish YOURSELF!
HAVE WORD WEALTH! I am LONELY 
COME AND SEE. Visit me! Be just
Like me!  This me. Keep company
With me. WRITE with me 
PROLIFICALLY!  These
Poetics here is JUST  THE BEGINNING 
OF THE SPINNING! come! Be like me!
WHO Can  hide from WORDS? We use
Them often everytime we speak we
Write we seek.... we answer we dream.
Luxury and experience poverty! Heeey 
Be a poetic ROMANCER  Commander!
Even STAND UP FOR POETRY! DREAM 
Your poetic dreams! One verse one
Word at a time.  Multiple words with
A rhyme or a line. Reach extravagantly
Be extreme! Write dreams! Think
Poetry in the seams. BE A SOMEBODY!
Write everything Out there over everywhere.
 Write Those far thoughts and memories
On the minds of Gods! Think hard
Think things eternally allways Write
What has not been written. Take your
Craft seriously. IT IS TABOO TO DO
LESS!  Well now YOU HAVE ALL MY
BEST!


BEST ARTIST PAINT

I know, 
it is 2024 
When a best  artist paint 
mix different colours 
While drawing something on the board. 
He will end up happily 
As the outcome will be super. 
I can say loud,

" Best 
          Artist 
                     Paint 
always appreciates  his final product."
What can astonish me the most, 
To see a man of certain 
colour skin 
Sleeping with a woman
of other colour skin 
At the end of their enjoyment 
Comes a mixture colour child 
Then a man end up discriminating 
His own child 
                 While claiming publicly...
He " she"  is not of  his colour skin. 
Can you call this man 

" Best 
            Artist 
                       Paint " 

Does he really understand 
the beauty of mixture
colours? 
Look at this World 
visit this World and 
see different colour skins 
Of many folks. 
Don't ask who painted them well 
Remember they are 
many painters
Out there.

WHY KILLING THEM

when some folks
enjoy to  kill 
inoncent women 
& children,
don't astonish 
when they are called 
"Living monsters 
on earth."

Truth

as speaking the truth becomes habits, good listeners enjoying words. 
Poem by poet 

Truth,
Dont astonish
When truth sounds
           like hilux stout
 In the ears 
of some folks
                    who lost trust. 
              Truth can be heavy  
                        like milkstout,
                          In the brains 
of some people who hate it.
         Truth can hit terribly 
                    the hearts 
        of some liars. 
Don't astonish 
When some politicians 
claim to be true in their entire lives. 
Don't laugh 
When some liars 
confuse lies and truths. 
Truth can be like milk and sweet
To all true  people of the planet 
Earth.

The Perspective

First, change your mindset
Astonish transformation,
Seen in your action.

Premium Member Rainbow

If I were to look inside a rainbow
what sight would I find to astonish me?
Would there be a klatch of bright elves below
with brimming buckets and brushes in hand?

Would they giggle and sing as they painted
colors of the rainbow's mystic aura
with a linen drop cloth well-acquainted
with dribbles and leaks of the artist's stroke?

Would their casual conversation weave
tales of magic places and pots of gold
that a few unhappy humans believe
could be found to abolish all their woes?

I should like to think that the cheery elves
delight in creating rainbows of hope
to inspire mere mortals to love themselves
and rejoice in God's mysterious ways.

Speak Out Freely

Speak out freely, 
Someone always finds comfort zone 
               Through speaking the truths.
An other person finds comfort zone 
                          By speaking lies.
Both of them have goals 
To achieve in their lives. 
           Jesus is the Truth
Devil is the father of lies
In this  free World  many people 
                      Have different choices.
Who are we to choose for some adults 
              Who understand their choices? 
Who are we to blame millions of folks 
Who always condemn true speakers? 
                             What can astonish highly, 
It is when some people who claim to be true           
                          And don't support the truth
Because of fearing some hidden things
While burning their hearts on the sly. 

September 27/2023

Two Best Friends of the Planet Earth

Two best friends 
of the planet earth are liars 
And true people. 
A true person can hate lies 
but he "she" still be good to a liar. 
A liar can burn by hearing the truth daily 
but he " she" is  still thinking  about
 a true person mostly. 
It is hard to separate these friends 
as they understand each others the most. 
When you see them cooking different 
caprochinos in same restaurant 
The customers will always give much tips
 to the chefs than waiters...
( Every chef has his personal spices 
For his "her " delicious caprochino. ) 
Sometimes you can come in between 
some liars and true people 
and astonish to  find out about the origin
of their strong connection.  

All foods enter the mouths 
And go to toilets 
But when ears cupture some  truth and  lies 
It is the  matter of  best choices 
Either lies to comfort you  
If you continue doing wrong 
Or the truth to help you doing right. 

June 29/2023

Complaints of Majority Attractive Women

When a woman respects a man , he turns her to be the queen of his life. 
Quote by poet. 

               Complaints of majority attractive women 
                  Are similar as usually left in the ways 
                      After being played by some men 
           And always failed to understand the reasons. 

When a kind man leave an attractive rich 
Woman and marrying a simple woman can astonish 
Some people who don't understand about
The best qualities majority men want 
From women they plan to live long with. 

Most attractive women quickly 
Attract majority 
Men but majority of them 
Remain unmarried 
Due to pride and
 Bogus beliefs
In the minds and
Thoughts 
which mislead them mostly. 

Majority men are arrogants by nature 
Same as majority attractive women 
Reason why some men always  wish
To be in long relationships with
Some attractive women and 
End up marrying some women 
Who don't real attract.  
Later on they come back 
To their attractive ex - girlfriends
And continue  enjoying lives with them.
 

June 21st 2023
By Alfonso Warally Ngengethe
 Mussabwa Chris

If Hate and Envy Fill Up Your Brain

If hate and envy  fill up your heart,
Scopions 
Can always come
out of your mouths.
Demons
will be filling up your brain. 
Your stomach will always 
Give daily strange sounds 
 " Brooor!Brooor!
    Proor! Proor!
  Fruur! Fruur!
Huur!huur"
And astonish your neighbours 
And friends. 

May 30/2023
By Alfonso Warally Ngengethe 
Mussabwa Chris

Bantu Poem , Shahiri Mussabwa 4

When you astonish by seeing
 An elder brother Calling 
His young bother
 " Big brother or father " 
______________________________

Because he is so rich 
And he depending on him , 
You will make diarrhea ,
 Flies will follow you till you die. 

April 26/2023
By Alfonso Warally Ngengethe 
    Mussabwa Chris 

Message:
 If you are not informed 
About money
To buy respect, 
Popularity, 
And attentions, 
You will be putting to shame
 In the future.

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