Admonishing Poems

With A Gentle Hand - Mystic

With a gentle hand, He held mine,  
Guiding me through the night,  
Assuring me that I would find the light,  
A perpetual light that pierces through burgeoning darkness.  

We journeyed through the meadow,  
With a gentle hand, He held mine,  
Dispersing the gnawing shadows,  
Telling me to awaken the dying hope.  

We sojourned across the sea,  
The intermittent turbulence frightened me.  
With a gentle hand, He held mine,  
Calming my fearful heart,  
Telling me to see beyond the tempest.  

We journeyed through the forest,  
I was distraught;  
There was no place to lay my head.  
With a gentle hand, He held mine,  
Telling me to learn resilience from the trees,  
Admonishing me to seek knowledge from their silence.  

We travelled across the desert,  
I was parched and worn out,  
Blazed by the sun.  
With a gentle hand, He held mine,  
Telling me that the sun would soon retreat to its chamber,  
And the moon would open the door to mysteries that herald a new beginning.


September 5, 2025.
Categories: admonishing, inspirational,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberMusings on aversion

averse to noise
people talking loudly
whilst yet accepting what is
we make peace with incongruity 
recognising the looming gap 
between desire and reality
yawn and then move on

averse to religious dogma
we wonder at the insecurity 
devout brandishing their gods
making conversion a life mission 
so what it is a pastime after all
although harmful if we reflect 
spreading virus of delusion

averse to people pushing 
in queues and on the road
aggressive me-first approach 
these animals in human disguise 
we look at as though it’s a test
though we’re trampled upon
we nod in understanding 

averse to not being averse
we review our consciousness 
which has shifted into passivity
owing to recognition life’s a dream
but to make this dream beautiful 
surely we too must spread love
gently admonishing the crass
Categories: admonishing, introspection, nonsense, silence,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberPRAISE BE TO GOD FOR STRETCHING OUT HIS HAND

September 6 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Ezekiel 25-27

Key Verse – Ezekiel 25:13  Therefore thus saith the Lord GOD; I will also stretch out mine hand…

PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR STRETCHING OUT HIS HAND	

Praise be to God for stretching out His hand to:
Deliver us from disaster
Drive us against destruction
Defend us from Devi’s deception
Direct us toward His delightful design
Draw us for His dominion’s destination 

Ezekiel 26:20 Praise be to the Lord for 
admonishing us against His terror due to our:
Unfruitfulness along our pride
Ungratefulness despite His provisions
Unproductiveness that does not prosper
Unstable personality of perverted preferences
Uselessness, propelled by unfaithfulness in praying

Ezekiel 27:26 Praise be to the Saviour 
for being the Source of perfect beauty:
Brightening us by His beams triumphantly
Building us upon His braces of truthfulness
Bestowing us with His blessings along our trust
Buttressing us along His Bible for brave testimony
Boosting our bountifulness toward blissful thanksgiving. Amen!

September 6, 2024
Categories: admonishing, bible, blessing, christian, faith,
Form: Alliteration

Premium MemberPRAISE BE TO GOD FOR ADMONISHING US TO FEAR HIM REVERENTIALLY

July 20 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Proverbs 24-26

Key Verse – Proverbs 24:21 My son, fear thou the LORD and the king: and meddle not with them that are given to change. 

PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR ADMONISHING US 
TO FEAR HIM REVERENTIALLY	

Praise be to God for admonishing us to 
fear Him reverentially to overcome:
Mischievous persons with their meddling pestilence
Mishandled pressures due to mocking pleasures
Mismatched plans midst misbehaving posture
Mistaken plaudits caused by mystifying ploys
Misjudged pursuits along melting poverty

Proverbs 25:22 Praise be to the Lord for 
rewarding us for our:
Heart of honour
Hope against hell
Help for the helpless
Hunger toward holiness
Hatred against haughtiness
 
Proverbs 26:10 Praise be to the Saviour for 
rewarding us toward:
Victory from being a victim
Venture that vies over void vices
Virtuous vanquishing with our vow
Valuable vigour against vicious vanity
Valiant voyage against voluminous vexations. Amen!

July 20, 2024
Categories: admonishing, bible, blessing, christian, faith,
Form: Alliteration

Premium MemberPRAISE BE TO GOD WHO BLESSES US

March 14 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Joshua 16-18

Key Verse– Joshua 17:14 And the children of Joseph spake unto Joshua, saying, Why hast thou given me [but] one lot and one portion to inherit, seeing I [am] a great people, forasmuch as the LORD hath blessed me hitherto?

PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO BLESSES US	

Praise be to God for blessing us as we:
Love Him with devotion
Labour for Him with diligence
Live for Him with dedication
Learn from Him with discernment
Lean on Him with determination 

Joshua 16:4 Praise be to the Lord for
His given inheritance that is:
Precious midst waters’ provisions
Priceless midst wilderness’ pests
Pure against wickedness’ perversions
Perfect by His Word’s protection
Profitable through His ways’ preservation

Joshua 18:3 Praise be to the Saviour Who is admonishing
us not to be slack in possessing our blessings by:
Remaining in our selfishness
Retiring in our self-sufficiency
Resting in our self-righteousness 
Relying on our self-improvement
Rejuvenating in our self-confidence
Retreating in our self-pity
Rejoicing in our self-esteem. Amen!

March 14, 2024
Categories: admonishing, bible, blessing, christian, faith,
Form: Alliteration


Premium MemberBUILDING TENSION

Beware of my building tension might
driving destructive and perilous fight
or causing anxious, grievous fright
toward shameful frustrating flight.

Be braced against my building tension height
toppling solid relationships plight
shaking fellowships held tight
as I reveal conflicts in full sight.

Behold my building tension blight
starting as solidifying delight
then lurking hypocritically right 
putting doubts midst skepticism sprite.

Be warned; my building tension blocks light
I'm PRIDE, treating meekness as weak and trite
breaking you down with my selfishness bite... 
choose me; together, reconciliation we smite.

Believe my building tension with faith's insight
admonishing the prudent along negotiations aright
keep trusting God* for His wisdom, clearly bright
granting triumphant peace day and night.

*Trust in the LORD with all thine heart; And lean not unto thine own understanding. In all thy ways acknowledge him, And he shall direct thy paths.

February 27, 2024
2nd place, "This or That, Vol 23" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 2/29/2024
Categories: admonishing, character, christian, faith, god,
Form: Personification

Premium MemberPRAISE BE TO GOD WHO SHIELDS US FROM PLAGUES

February 22 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Numbers 26-27

Key Verse– Numbers 26:1 And it came to pass after the plague, that the LORD spake unto Moses…

PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO SHIELDS US FROM PLAGUES	

Praise be to God for shielding us from plagues as we:
Confess our sinfulness, pleading sincerely
Commit our lives to Him, pleasing Him along our service
Converse to Him in prayer with our supplication
Choose to praise Him midst sanctification
Cling to Him and His powerful strength  

Numbers 26:9 Praise be to the Lord for admonishing us 
not to strive against Him by:
Displeasing Him with our perversions 
Defying His precepts
Doubting His promises
Deriding His providence
Downgrading His provisions 

Numbers 27:14 Praise be to the Saviour Who checks us 
so we should not rebel against His commandments while:
Complaining about our situation
Cursing our status
Clamoring for self-sufficiency
Craving along selfishness
Continuing in our slothfulness.  Amen.

February 22, 2024
Categories: admonishing, bible, blessing, christian, faith,
Form: Alliteration

Premium MemberTHERE IS A DARKNESS

There is a darkness,
loose in the land
twisting and turning
in vicious hands.
Violations of innocence,
truth concealed,
under shadows of vanity.
In time     
revealed.

There is a darkness,
a challenge in every prayer
attacking a weakened vessel,
swiftly sent from open air.
As red and blue lights flashing
danger signals 
bright
Troubled hearts admonishing,
their lives may not be right

We work to build the kingdom
of excellence on Earth,
waging war with darkness,
so the lost can have rebirth.
And in each heart a story
of hardship overcome,
their journey to the brightness,
God’s mercy to someone.

There’s glory in the promise,
that one lost sheep is found,
to harness greater darkness
with Godliness
profound.
As fishers of the soul
cast nets where catch is many.
There was a darkness in some lives.
Now, 
there isn’t any.

2/10/2024
Categories: admonishing, evil, hope, humanity,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberPRAISE BE TO GOD WHO LIGHTS US WITH HIS LAMP CONTINUALLY

February 9 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Leviticus 24-25

Key Verse – Leviticus 24:4 He shall order the lamps upon the pure candlestick before the LORD continually.

PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO LIGHTS US 
WITH HIS LAMP CONTINUALLY	

Praise be to God for lighting us with His lamp continually to: 
Lead us with His might
Liberate us by His mercy
Let us learn from His miracles
Look at us along His magnificence
Listen to us through His ministry

Leviticus 24:12 Praise be to the Lord 
Who shows us His mind amidst our: 
Sins resulting to guilt
Strivings along iniquities 
Struggles brought by discontentment 
Shame in hiding transgressions
Sorrows due to misbehaviour 

Leviticus 25:17 Praise be to the Saviour 
for admonishing us to fear Him toward our:
Rest in His providence
Restoration along His protection
Redemption-rejoicing by His peace
Reaping with His provisions
Reward according to His prize.  Amen!

February 9, 2024
Categories: admonishing, bible, blessing, christian, faith,
Form: Alliteration

Premium MemberPRAISE BE TO GOD WHO PROVES US

January 23 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Exodus 16-18

Key Verse – Exodus 16:4 Then said the Lord unto Moses, Behold, I will rain bread from heaven for you; and the people shall go out and gather a certain rate every day, that I may prove them, whether they will walk in my law, or no.

PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO PROVES US	

Praise be to God for proving us whether we:
Walk in His laws, or wander from His light
Worship Him lovingly, or waver against Him lousily
Wax wisely in His lessons, or wane in our lusts
Win through His lordship, or wiggle from His leadership

Exodus 17:2 Praise be to the Lord for admonishing us
when we chide and complain:
Murmuring against His provisions
Maneuvering against His providence
Mocking His power
Moving against His purpose
Missing His plan

Exodus 18:4 Praise be to the Saviour for He is our help:
Delivering us from Satan’s sword 
Deterring us from selfishness’ stature 
Defending us from soulwinning’s smitings
Driving us from self-sufficiency’s sacrifice
Dressing us from scarcity’s spoilage. Amen!

January 23, 2024
Categories: admonishing, bible, blessing, christian, faith,
Form: Alliteration

Orphaning the Moment

Raging against tomorrow
blaming yesterday
Running in place—admonishing grace
denial on display
Cursing the past indentured
the future waits in vain 
No place to hide—the truth inside
the moment left unnamed

(The New Room: September, 2023)
Categories: admonishing, time,
Form: Rhyme

Billy Was Silly

If you're William, then you're Billy.
The one I knew was damned silly
Sick but climbing the hilly
Hard steel, if you sought his Lily
But soon wasting the same Lily;
Orders obeyed willy-nilly...

Do you like to dilly dally?
Still your acts with his must tally:
He wouldn't be facing Nelly
And you watching fancied Nelly
Or he admonishing Kelly
And you lying on your belly!
Categories: admonishing, allusion, analogy, character, perspective,
Form: Rhyme

Transcending the Silence

Do you have a secret
that’s never been told
Deeply within you
like long buried gold

Do you keep your own counsel
for no one to hear
While staying intrepid
admonishing fear

Do you treasure those moments
in spite of the time
As words born an orphan
adopted in rhyme

That one treasured secret
alive roaming free
Transcending the silence
—of what’s yet to be

(The New Room: March, 2023)
Categories: admonishing, silence,
Form: Rhyme

Like Mother, Can'T Be Another

I am continuously by many hated
My mother alone has compensated
Soothing words are by her stated
A feeling of happiness is created

She will warm me up by kindness
And advice me to practice calmness
She will tell the greatness of fairness
Admonishing me to follow carefulness

When I recollect the past and feel
She will for me before God kneel
Asking the Almighty to soon heal
My sorrow making my will steel !

Always she will give something to eat
Then only her act is for her complete
She will encourage me to compete
And accept in case comes defeat !

My sorrow is to her a sad occurrence
For me she will pray to act as a defense
Her love is a fence giving me confidence
She is a boon given to me by providence.!
Categories: admonishing, god, mom, mother, mother
Form: Rhyme

The Gift of Futures Past

Bigger in my memory
smaller in my inclination 
Regret a distant calling card
admonishing my name

Vacant in my recollection
bedded in my hopefulness
Joy a future invitation
—Heaven to proclaim

(Christmas Wishing: First Book Of Prayers- December, 2022)
Categories: admonishing, joy, time,
Form: Rhyme

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