BUILDING TENSION

Beware of my building tension might driving destructive and perilous fight or causing anxious, grievous fright toward shameful frustrating flight. Be braced against my building tension height toppling solid relationships plight shaking fellowships held tight as I reveal conflicts in full sight. Behold my building tension blight starting as solidifying delight then lurking hypocritically right putting doubts midst skepticism sprite. Be warned; my building tension blocks light I'm PRIDE, treating meekness as weak and trite breaking you down with my selfishness bite... choose me; together, reconciliation we smite. Believe my building tension with faith's insight admonishing the prudent along negotiations aright keep trusting God* for His wisdom, clearly bright granting triumphant peace day and night.
*Trust in the LORD with all thine heart; And lean not unto thine own understanding. In all thy ways acknowledge him, And he shall direct thy paths. February 27, 2024 2nd place, "This or That, Vol 23" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 2/29/2024
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Ibeh Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 8:52 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this beautifully composed poem, Beata:-) I thoroughly enjoyed the read!
Alex Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 8:12 PM
Each stanza illustrates a verysolid state of building tension. The poem beautifully ends with a hope-filled assurance: "keep trusting God for His wisdom, clearly bright granting triumphant peace day and night" - Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your great write/ending. Always "Love" reading what you write...  Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
Jones Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 1:13 AM
Wow your poem is amazing. Good luck in the contest.
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