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You Are My World

Do you hear singing violins, oboes and the harp? We dance in love as cheek to cheek we feel elated: Hear the symphony, a melody from bass to sharp. Dance on, luscious lovers, for thus we were created. For this has now become our much desired world, we know Your breath mingles with mine, o how ecstatic we feel It has to happen for our love must forever grow. Bodies held tight, only by passion is life real. Our eyes shine like twinkling stars, our hearts entwined, appeal. This our world, our night, our day, our everything delight. Our lasting prayer that must not cease, our love must seal, Our zeal must never cease, we dare not feel such dire fright. If love ceases to be, it's the end for both of us, But our dance will last for such thoughts are superfluous.

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Date: 1/11/2022 3:58:00 PM
Quite beautiful, nicely penned with passion.
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Date: 1/5/2022 9:00:00 PM
Such a romantic dance you portray here, Victor:) great sonnet:)
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Date: 1/4/2022 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful feelings come through these lines; very nice. A Happy New Year to you.
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Date: 1/4/2022 7:49:00 AM
Memories are made of this kind of love, a love that only grows stronger as time passes Victor. Beautiful! New year blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/3/2022 9:26:00 PM
Such a sweet dance! :)
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Date: 1/3/2022 8:25:00 PM
Very beautiful verse, love the imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/3/2022 4:56:00 PM
Victor, This is just lovely and romantic. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 1/3/2022 9:42:00 AM
The lines of your wonderful sonnet are a joy to read, Victor. Such imagery! Best of wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 1/3/2022 9:07:00 AM
so beautiful and romantic, happy new year Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2022 8:11:00 AM
This is so romantic! Love it!
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Date: 1/3/2022 6:38:00 AM
There's nothing better than reading this sonnet since it flows so wonderfully and flawlessly. If love survives, life will be a melody and a ballet, as they say. If this does not happen, there will be noise and discord! Dear Friend, you have written a well-crafted and remarkable sonnet!
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Date: 1/3/2022 6:22:00 AM
This sonnet is an absolute delight... It flows so beautifully and perfectly... Loved it...
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Date: 1/3/2022 6:18:00 AM
Much enjoyed the revelry of your poem, Victor. The celebration of life with music, and the tempo of its passion as the poem progresses. A dance with love and romance!
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Date: 1/3/2022 4:52:00 AM
Victor the romantic enchants us again!
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Date: 1/3/2022 3:39:00 AM
Lovely Victor. I can see two lovers dancing in the night. Well done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/3/2022 3:15:00 AM
Wow .... so beautiful and fermenting with the yeast of passion. If love remains intact, life will be a song and a dance. If otherwise, it will be cacophony and dissension! A well groomed and outstanding sonnet, dear friend !
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Date: 1/3/2022 2:59:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Victor - It glows with love - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2022 2:04:00 AM
Sonnet of love's melody, very nice Victor...Delice
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Date: 1/3/2022 1:21:00 AM
You capture the theme of romance well Victor. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
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Date: 1/3/2022 12:59:00 AM
Victor what a romantic man you are …you write the most amazing poems about love and this is one of them! Cheers Debx
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