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            i know
the moment the wind becomes more than a melody,
   when shapes skillfully surround     me
            because of the sun -
                        

                        i can feel    you.  

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  ~ love is in the air ~
                and  
    
the welcome of a summer shadow

 

Sunday June 1st, 2025- Poem of the Day 

 

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            i know
the moment the wind becomes more than a melody, 
   when shapes skillfully surround     me
            because  of the sun - 
                        

                        i can feel     you.  

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              ~ love is in the air ~ 
                                        and  
     the welcome of a summer shadow


Sunday June 1st, 2025- Poem of the Day

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Date: 8/18/2025 7:07:00 PM
Dear Brandy, A belated congratulations on POTD, with my sincere apology for not being that regular on the computer these days. Brandy, your style is so unique and soul soothing and truly worthy of recognition.
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Date: 8/21/2025 7:05:00 PM
Dearest Nancy, thank you for the belated congratulations and the wonderful compliment about my unique style. So kind of you to say my words are soul soothing. You humble me. I understand about being away. Life is important. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/17/2025 12:26:00 PM
Brandy you make an interesting point. When we experience love, we might just notice more things than otherwise. Especially good things. Smiles!!
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Date: 7/17/2025 6:30:00 PM
So true. It's the little things, and sometimes those simple moments that mean so much. Your kind words are appreciated, Duke. Enjoy the good things and continue to smile. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/10/2025 10:10:00 AM
oh I see this got poem of the day. Big congrats, Brandy.
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Date: 7/10/2025 7:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Your kind words bring a smile. :)
Date: 7/9/2025 11:58:00 AM
Sweet. Serene. Beautiful. Congrats on POTD with this whimsical write. Nothing like love. Also, thanks for your lovely comments.
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Date: 7/10/2025 7:28:00 PM
Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed, Eileen. Such a wonderful comment, one filled a touch of tenderness. Love is magical in many ways. You're very welcome. Your talent shines, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/2/2025 12:19:00 AM
Beautiful as always, Brandy
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Date: 7/3/2025 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Your thoughts always bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/30/2025 7:18:00 AM
I find this soothing. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/30/2025 5:48:00 PM
I'm happy you find my words soothing. Thank you Richard, for the lovely comment and congratulations. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/30/2025 12:07:00 AM
So beautiful!! Have a lovely day!!
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Date: 6/30/2025 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Daisy. Your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/27/2025 8:00:00 PM
Your positive and beautiful essence is a godsend to this planet. Cheers to you and your work <3
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Date: 6/30/2025 5:44:00 PM
So sweet of you to say, Beej. My heart is smiling. :) Thank you for the lovely comment, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/25/2025 11:49:00 AM
This poem beautifully evokes sensory experiences, where wind, sun, and shadows converge into a profound awareness of another's presence. It's a delicate and intimate expression of love felt in nature's subtle shifts.
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Date: 6/27/2025 7:05:00 PM
Danny, your comment leaves me in complete awe. When wind touches soft skin, and the warmth of the sun traces every curve, it is a beautiful reminder of love and its sweet caress. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/19/2025 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your recent POTD, Brandy. This was a lovely poem, your poetry is always relaxing and soothing. I've missed reading it. I'm back now and following your poetry ... my new moniker is Cowboy Tex :-) Hugs, my friend, Bill
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Date: 6/19/2025 7:04:00 PM
Bill, you're definitely the ' Texas Cowboy. ' Welcome back, my dear friend. I appreciate the comment, compliment and congratulations. Thank you for saying my poetry is soothing and relaxing. My heart is smiling. :) Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/19/2025 7:13:00 AM
https://songer.co/song/df8w12hw7rfsmw7o1eew03bm Still scribbling on my mind... Lyric Man
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Date: 8/9/2025 12:17:00 PM
This song is beautiful. So romantic and dreamy. My heart is smiling. Thanks for sharing, Lyric Man. :) Brandy
Date: 6/18/2025 1:19:00 PM
Belated Congratulations on your POTD lovely Brandy, you! and your poem! Have a wonderful time, hugs AA.
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Date: 6/19/2025 6:55:00 PM
Thank you AA, for the comment and congratulations. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/18/2025 2:46:00 AM
Belated belated Congratulations on your wonderful poem Brandy....All you write and your presence to me is just like a soft gentle breeze...just lovely! Debx
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Date: 6/19/2025 5:38:00 PM
Deb, I appreciate you saying that I'm like a ' soft, gentle breeze.' That my writing reflects that as well. You humble me. Thank you for the lovely comment and congratulations. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/17/2025 3:54:00 PM
genius and creative writing skill...beautifully written; I appreciate the softness and the brevity of your writing. hugs, yellow rose
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Date: 6/17/2025 6:51:00 PM
It's so nice to meet you, Yellow Rose. You humble me with your thoughts and you bring a smile to my heart. Thank you so much. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/15/2025 2:55:00 PM
An inspiring write enjoyed Brandy, a worthy winner of pots, congrats to a great poetess!
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Date: 6/17/2025 6:47:00 PM
Thank you John, for the wonderful comment and compliment. So sweet of you to say. :) I appreciate the congratulations as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/14/2025 6:07:00 AM
Pretty! Congrats on POTD!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/17/2025 6:45:00 PM
Kim, your kind words and congratulations are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/6/2025 9:41:00 PM
There is something magical and heartfelt in this beautifully concise, poem. I am often guilty of too many words, but here, Brandy, you have crafted them wonderfully, condensed into the essence of emotion and I truly love it. Of course it won Poem of the Day but POTH <3 for me (fav). Blessings S:) x
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Date: 6/8/2025 5:17:00 PM
Sam, when you're able to set emotions free, the amount of words doesn't matter. More or less, those thoughts are from the heart. You can write as many words as you want, my dear friend. :) I appreciate your lovely comment, compliment and congratulations. My heart is smiling with you saving this in your favorites. :) Thank you. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/5/2025 7:25:00 AM
This is the kind of poem that hits a chord in the heart. Belated congrats on the honour of POTD. Stay blessed. ^___^ JCB
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Date: 6/6/2025 7:40:00 PM
Your thoughts are greatly appreciated, JCB. Emotions within embrace the page. Thank you for the congratulations as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/4/2025 9:42:00 AM
Dearest Brandy, lovely poetess, your poem is an ethereal inspiration that love-whispers through the sensate world, entwining heart and soul with nature. Your imagery tenderly touches appreciative, romantic places deep inside. I adore how there seems to be much more beneath the surface the longer I linger with your words. You are a poetic enchantress! "summer shadow".. I adore the last line too, more than physical, to me, so thought-provoking.. Belated congrats for your beautiful poem being honored with POTD. So worthy and well-deserved. Warmest wishes, my sweet, soulful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/6/2025 7:24:00 PM
Dear Susan, I'm almost speechless with all your kind words and compliments. The way you feel my heart through my poetry is truly amazing. You're right, there is more beneath the surface. A beautiful message tucked deep within. You bring a smile to my heart saying I'm a ' poetic enchantress. ' Such a sweet thing to say. :) Once again you're right about this being more than physical. I'm floating, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing all your tender thoughts and for the congratulations. Many wonderful blessings to you, my incredibly talented friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/4/2025 7:07:00 AM
Dearest Brandy, O' the delicate moment when nature and emotion intertwine with the wind’s melody transforming into a presence, just like love itself. I love how you evoke the sun’s warmth and the welcoming shade of summer as metaphors for connection and intimacy. Love can be as subtle and pervasive as the air we breathe. Brandy, O what a beautiful, evocative piece reflecting your gift for blending nature’s grace with heartfelt feeling. Congrats on POTD!! Spring Blessings, Dear Brandy, Daniel
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Date: 6/6/2025 7:05:00 PM
Daniel, you're so polite and poetic. Your words caress the page like a sweet melody, which leaves me in complete awe. You truly understand the feeling within, those tender moments of pure bliss. :) It's simply breathtaking. Love is a whisper in the wind, tracing shadows upon the skin. Thank you for your lovely comment and congratulations. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/3/2025 1:06:00 AM
My belated congrats on your POTD. Exciting poem.
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Date: 6/3/2025 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Victor, for your lovely comment and congratulations. I appreciate you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/2/2025 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD yesterday. I feel the love. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 6/2/2025 6:07:00 PM
Your thoughts are appreciated, Benjamin. Smiling that you can feel the love. :) Thank you for the congratulations as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/2/2025 2:20:00 AM
Warm and heartfelt poem so well written in such a passionate and soulful manner dear brandy, you have expressed so well; and it isnt always we get to be felt , not many can feel us; but you seem to feel the ones reading this and the presentation of your poem is so elegant and charismatic! Pleasure reading you today! Congratulations on your poem receiving potd! Sending you light always! I felt this poem! So very deeply! So warm and sweet
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Date: 6/2/2025 6:05:00 PM
Dear Ink Empress, you always bring such beautiful thoughts to my page. You saying that I'm able to feel the one's reading my poetry is true. I can and I do. Thank you for this lovely comment. Praise from you leaves me in complete awe, being you're such a gifted writer. I can feel your light, my dear friend. Sending hugs your way. Continue to drift in the stars, because that's where you belong. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/1/2025 6:46:00 PM
Wow!!! Congrats on POTD! YAY! I haven't seen this one before. A breathtaking quill you write and amaze us with- <3
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Date: 6/1/2025 7:07:00 PM
Smiling at you, Paige. :) Your enthusiasm is encouraging. So uplifting. Thank you for your lovely comment and congratulations. I appreciate you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/1/2025 4:58:00 PM
Dear Brandy, Congratulations on your POTD. Your words are gentle and soothing, your poem is beautiful!
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Date: 6/1/2025 7:05:00 PM
Dear Malabika, thank you for saying my poetry is beautiful, gentle and soothing. I appreciate your thoughts and congratulations. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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