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i know
the moment the wind becomes more than a melody,
   when shapes skillfully surround     me
            because of the sun -


                        i can feel    you.

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~ love is in the air ~
                and
  the welcome of a summer shadow

Sunday June 1st, 2025- Poem of the Day

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            i know
the moment the wind becomes more than a melody, 
   when shapes skillfully surround     me
            because  of the sun - 
                        

                        i can feel     you.  

                     ------------------------------


       
              ~ love is in the air ~ 
                                        and  
     the welcome of a summer shadow


Sunday June 1st, 2025- Poem of the Day

Copyright © Brandy Nicole | Year Posted 2025

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February 7, 2026 at 11:35 AM

When I read this it makes my soul warm...very well done Brandy

February 7, 2026 at 6:30 PM

Such a wonderful way to warm the soul. : ) Thank you Bruce, for your lovely comment. : ) Hugs and blessings, Brandy

Pace Ink-U-Script

January 3, 2026 at 4:37 PM

I can’t count how many times I’ve read this lovely piece of art….so seamlessly written…I absolutely love it!!!

January 4, 2026 at 5:29 PM

I'm in complete awe with you saying this. Thank you Pace, for coming back many times to read this simple scribble of mine. My heart is smiling. : )

January 3, 2026 at 11:32 AM

mikey likey

January 4, 2026 at 5:26 PM

Thank you, Mikey. : )

December 17, 2025 at 7:43 PM

Belated Congrats for POTD for this one, Brady. So ethereal and lacy, like most of your poems. They allow us to escape into the purity of nature’s moments when we need to. Seasons Blessings your way.

December 21, 2025 at 6:15 PM

' Ethereal and lacy ' Such beautiful words to express my poetic whispers. : ) Your lovely comment leaves me in awe. Thank you Ghairo, for the belated congratulations and the seasons greetings as well. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Dr. Ivan Edwards

October 27, 2025 at 11:59 AM

Brandy, this is absolutely breathtaking! The way you capture sensation—wind as melody, sun as presence—feels like a whisper from the soul. That final line, “the welcome of a summer shadow,” lingers like warmth after touch. I feel the tenderness, the longing, and the quiet joy. You write with such grace. Thank you for letting your light drift across the page. Many blessings to you always!

December 19, 2025 at 7:08 PM

Dearest Ivan, as I'm reading your thoughts, I can see that it has been a while since you placed them. I'm here now and my heart is smiling. So sweet of you to say that I write with such ' grace.' A compliment that means so much to me. I appreciate you highlighting that final line, sharing with me how it makes you feel. Thank you, and may your light always shine, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs and blessings to you, Brandy

October 3, 2025 at 8:56 AM

Beautiful. I see a little book, each page with one of your 'love' sentiments on it. Wouldn't that be cool?

October 4, 2025 at 5:24 PM

I'm smiling. : ) A little book with my love poems tucked inside. Such a sweet thing to say, and I can see that. Thank you, CayCay. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. : ) Hugs and blessings, Brandy

August 18, 2025 at 7:07 PM

Dear Brandy, A belated congratulations on POTD, with my sincere apology for not being that regular on the computer these days. Brandy, your style is so unique and soul soothing and truly worthy of recognition.

August 21, 2025 at 7:05 PM

Dearest Nancy, thank you for the belated congratulations and the wonderful compliment about my unique style. So kind of you to say my words are soul soothing. You humble me. I understand about being away. Life is important. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

July 17, 2025 at 12:26 PM

Brandy you make an interesting point. When we experience love, we might just notice more things than otherwise. Especially good things. Smiles!!

July 17, 2025 at 6:30 PM

So true. It's the little things, and sometimes those simple moments that mean so much. Your kind words are appreciated, Duke. Enjoy the good things and continue to smile. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

July 10, 2025 at 10:10 AM

oh I see this got poem of the day. Big congrats, Brandy.

July 10, 2025 at 7:35 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Your kind words bring a smile. :)

Eileen Manassian

July 9, 2025 at 11:58 AM

Sweet. Serene. Beautiful. Congrats on POTD with this whimsical write. Nothing like love. Also, thanks for your lovely comments.

July 10, 2025 at 7:28 PM

Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed, Eileen. Such a wonderful comment, one filled a touch of tenderness. Love is magical in many ways. You're very welcome. Your talent shines, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2025 at 12:19 AM

Beautiful as always, Brandy

July 3, 2025 at 4:59 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Your thoughts always bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

June 30, 2025 at 7:18 AM

I find this soothing. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Rick.

June 30, 2025 at 5:48 PM

I'm happy you find my words soothing. Thank you Richard, for the lovely comment and congratulations. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 30, 2025 at 12:07 AM

So beautiful!! Have a lovely day!!

June 30, 2025 at 5:45 PM

Thank you, Daisy. Your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 25, 2025 at 11:49 AM

This poem beautifully evokes sensory experiences, where wind, sun, and shadows converge into a profound awareness of another's presence. It's a delicate and intimate expression of love felt in nature's subtle shifts.

June 27, 2025 at 7:05 PM

Danny, your comment leaves me in complete awe. When wind touches soft skin, and the warmth of the sun traces every curve, it is a beautiful reminder of love and its sweet caress. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

June 19, 2025 at 4:03 PM

Congratulations on your recent POTD, Brandy. This was a lovely poem, your poetry is always relaxing and soothing. I've missed reading it. I'm back now and following your poetry ... my new moniker is Cowboy Tex :-) Hugs, my friend, Bill

June 19, 2025 at 7:04 PM

Bill, you're definitely the ' Texas Cowboy. ' Welcome back, my dear friend. I appreciate the comment, compliment and congratulations. Thank you for saying my poetry is soothing and relaxing. My heart is smiling. :) Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 19, 2025 at 7:13 AM

https://songer.co/song/df8w12hw7rfsmw7o1eew03bm Still scribbling on my mind... Lyric Man

August 9, 2025 at 12:17 PM

This song is beautiful. So romantic and dreamy. My heart is smiling. Thanks for sharing, Lyric Man. :) Brandy

Abdullah Alhemaidy

June 18, 2025 at 1:19 PM

Belated Congratulations on your POTD lovely Brandy, you! and your poem! Have a wonderful time, hugs AA.

June 19, 2025 at 6:55 PM

Thank you AA, for the comment and congratulations. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 18, 2025 at 2:46 AM

Belated belated Congratulations on your wonderful poem Brandy....All you write and your presence to me is just like a soft gentle breeze...just lovely! Debx

June 19, 2025 at 5:38 PM

Deb, I appreciate you saying that I'm like a ' soft, gentle breeze.' That my writing reflects that as well. You humble me. Thank you for the lovely comment and congratulations. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

sara Etgen-Baker

June 17, 2025 at 3:54 PM

genius and creative writing skill...beautifully written; I appreciate the softness and the brevity of your writing. hugs, yellow rose

June 17, 2025 at 6:51 PM

It's so nice to meet you, Yellow Rose. You humble me with your thoughts and you bring a smile to my heart. Thank you so much. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 15, 2025 at 2:55 PM

An inspiring write enjoyed Brandy, a worthy winner of pots, congrats to a great poetess!

June 17, 2025 at 6:47 PM

Thank you John, for the wonderful comment and compliment. So sweet of you to say. :) I appreciate the congratulations as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 14, 2025 at 6:07 AM

Pretty! Congrats on POTD!

June 17, 2025 at 6:45 PM

Kim, your kind words and congratulations are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 6, 2025 at 9:41 PM

There is something magical and heartfelt in this beautifully concise, poem. I am often guilty of too many words, but here, Brandy, you have crafted them wonderfully, condensed into the essence of emotion and I truly love it. Of course it won Poem of the Day but POTH <3 for me (fav). Blessings S:) x

June 8, 2025 at 5:17 PM

Sam, when you're able to set emotions free, the amount of words doesn't matter. More or less, those thoughts are from the heart. You can write as many words as you want, my dear friend. :) I appreciate your lovely comment, compliment and congratulations. My heart is smiling with you saving this in your favorites. :) Thank you. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 5, 2025 at 7:25 AM

This is the kind of poem that hits a chord in the heart. Belated congrats on the honour of POTD. Stay blessed. ^___^ JCB

June 6, 2025 at 7:40 PM

Your thoughts are greatly appreciated, JCB. Emotions within embrace the page. Thank you for the congratulations as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

June 4, 2025 at 9:42 AM

Dearest Brandy, lovely poetess, your poem is an ethereal inspiration that love-whispers through the sensate world, entwining heart and soul with nature. Your imagery tenderly touches appreciative, romantic places deep inside. I adore how there seems to be much more beneath the surface the longer I linger with your words. You are a poetic enchantress! "summer shadow".. I adore the last line too, more than physical, to me, so thought-provoking.. Belated congrats for your beautiful poem being honored with POTD. So worthy and well-deserved. Warmest wishes, my sweet, soulful friend.. ~Susan

June 6, 2025 at 7:24 PM

Dear Susan, I'm almost speechless with all your kind words and compliments. The way you feel my heart through my poetry is truly amazing. You're right, there is more beneath the surface. A beautiful message tucked deep within. You bring a smile to my heart saying I'm a ' poetic enchantress. ' Such a sweet thing to say. :) Once again you're right about this being more than physical. I'm floating, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing all your tender thoughts and for the congratulations. Many wonderful blessings to you, my incredibly talented friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers

June 4, 2025 at 7:07 AM

Dearest Brandy, O' the delicate moment when nature and emotion intertwine with the wind’s melody transforming into a presence, just like love itself. I love how you evoke the sun’s warmth and the welcoming shade of summer as metaphors for connection and intimacy. Love can be as subtle and pervasive as the air we breathe. Brandy, O what a beautiful, evocative piece reflecting your gift for blending nature’s grace with heartfelt feeling. Congrats on POTD!! Spring Blessings, Dear Brandy, Daniel

June 6, 2025 at 7:05 PM

Daniel, you're so polite and poetic. Your words caress the page like a sweet melody, which leaves me in complete awe. You truly understand the feeling within, those tender moments of pure bliss. :) It's simply breathtaking. Love is a whisper in the wind, tracing shadows upon the skin. Thank you for your lovely comment and congratulations. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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