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Word Morph - Dope To Lost

Once while I was high on DOPE I truly lost sight of the DOVE Which cost me my LOVE Such a terrible thing to LOSE My God I felt so LOST Inspired by Christie & Nigel's New Contest- Word Morph Hopefully I did it right

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Raul Moreno

Date: 1/25/2009 3:24:00 PM

Nice job on your morph Michael and congrats on your HM. The message behind your morph is nice and sincere...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 1/24/2009 12:47:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Nigel & Christie's contest Michael.Rgds Brian

Constance La France

Date: 1/23/2009 5:34:00 PM

I think it should have won a higher rating .... so gripping.. congrats on your win.. Constance

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/23/2009 4:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Micheal! This really is a wonderfull poem. Love, Robin

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/23/2009 4:19:00 PM

wow this is great!....Congrats on your win!...awesome job!...thanx for the congrats...love Maryam

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/23/2009 1:31:00 PM

Well done, Michael, on this emotional poem! Congratulations, Nor Cal friend! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/23/2009 12:39:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your win in Nigel's contest. An awesome write. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/21/2009 10:37:00 AM

Right or wrong, this is good in the style and truly offers the reader a real sense, a true message. Very well written. Michael

Constance La France

Date: 1/20/2009 10:10:00 AM

Ihad a difficult time writing mine also.. not easy to do.. this word morph thingy..good luck in the contest... and thank you so much for your comments on my poem Dads Workshed, I was very surprised to have it as one of the featured poems.. constance

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/18/2009 8:27:00 AM

Running from the POPO..lol..that had me cracking up..haven't heard that in a minute....by the way translation for those who may not know..POPO are the police..lol..love it Michael.

Brian Strand

Date: 1/18/2009 12:59:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/17/2009 12:31:00 PM

Check your soup mail when you get a chance. xoxo

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/15/2009 1:16:00 PM

Very creative, Michael. God Bless. Vince

James Foulk

Date: 1/14/2009 3:17:00 PM

Michael this was another great piece you wrote as only you can do. thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments. I have not been on the internet this year until today, sorry it took me so long to read some of your poems and to thank you.

Elaine George

Date: 1/14/2009 12:11:00 AM

Again! Michael you amaze me with the depths of your insight, wisdom, and deep compasion. A winner for sure! In answer to your question - I am working on my second book and well let you know when it is ready. Much love to you and your family. Lainie

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/7/2009 5:42:00 PM

real poetry and it really comes across clear as the speaker has placed it. enjoyed readding it. YOU GOT MAIL.

Heidie Buys

Date: 1/7/2009 2:04:00 PM

Interesting and very well written. Love the message. Well done. Love Heidie

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/6/2009 5:59:00 PM

Michael, this is very deep but well written and courageously expressed, Keep up the Great work and thank you so much for all the wonderful comments, I'm glad you are still posting and hope you will continue, God Bless You and Thanks again.....Tyesha

Mary Duhart

Date: 1/6/2009 7:05:00 AM

Nicely done. Continue to share.

Mc Mc

Date: 1/6/2009 6:20:00 AM

INTERESTING-STUNNING MORPH! GOOD IDEA TOO CHRISTIE AND NIGEL! THANK FOR YOUR COMMENTS TOO, MICAHEL!ALL THE BEST!

Chelsea Mcginnis

Date: 1/6/2009 5:41:00 AM

Very true. I love the subject matter. You touch on a touchy subject with simplicity. Good job. (I would like you to read "Is there life after meth?" It's a poem I wrote that may interest you. I'd like to hear your feedback."

Donna Golden

Date: 1/5/2009 10:06:00 PM

Looks great to me! Nice work, Michael, and yes...great message! Maybe I'll give it a shot! Donna G.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/5/2009 7:53:00 AM

You did it right, Mike! There's a definite message here. Love, daver

Brian Strand

Date: 1/5/2009 12:30:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian.Will mail you when it arrives.(Can take upto 10 days and last week included a holiday on the 1st).Thanks for your welcome comments on my postings

Cayetano Young

Date: 1/4/2009 10:23:00 PM

thanks for the welcome comment. happy new year Sir, much respect and adoration, Gino