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Winter Is Not Forever

The chill of winter bites deep into the skin,
And the world stays inert in muffled din.
In the freezing blustery winter days,
Life poses threat to beasts in many ways.

I, this little squirrel inside a tree’s narrow hollow,
Am in hibernation to guard myself from nagging snow.
Feeding on the scanty store of nuts gathered,
Wondering if my life will be sheltered or shattered.

Eagerly I await winter to have a natural ending,
As the cycle of seasons keep changing.
Hope the world will soon be up and awake, 
And life, in all possibility, a renewed turn take.

As no season can pause for long or linger on,
Winter will soon fade away and be gone.
Once more spring will be back in all its cheer
And my loneliness and frustration will disappear. 

The valleys and planes, now sleeping so silent,
Will wake up as the sun from his hide out comes radiant.
I wish to see birds once again soaring into the sky,
And their lively twitter and chatter rising high!

Oh!  Come spring, the season of sunshine and mirth
When the earth will show visible signs of rebirth
Let me, from tree-to-tree scamper and scurry
With my other friends, free of all worry!

Jan.21.2023

~ Placed First~

Winter Is Not Forever Poetry Contest
Sponsor. B.J. Legros Kelley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gasun Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 11:26 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win my dear friend Valsa! Your Winter Is Not Forever poem is a superb write my dear friend. It shows great hope for everyone even those little but cute ones. Thanks a lot for sharing. Sorry for the late visit. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Poet Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Delightful thoughts of squirrel, Valsa. Congratulations on your top win
Alex Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 9:49 PM
There is a very flawless flow and music in your poem. Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your win! I love the personification of your sweet squirrel, we are all now longing for Springtime.
Peck Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 9:30 AM
A lovely poem of a squirrel, Valsa! I used to feed a squirrel along with bunnies, but the squirrel no longer comes. Sad. Anyhow, congratulations! I loved reading about the squirrel's life :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter is Not Forever" is a cute write/picture. The little guy needs to stay in to stay warm. Have a blessed day writing away............................
Fowler Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 6:52 AM
I really like the feel of this poem Valsa. Great job! Congratulations on your win! :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 12:35 AM
Wonderful Valsa! Congratulations on your win in this contest! Such a well-written poem and I love it so much :) <3
George Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 3:02 AM
Thanks a lot dear BJ for your generous appreciation and giving this poem a first place win . Am very delighted. Stay blessed!
Peck Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 11:47 AM
I love that you chose a squirrel as narrator! Such a sweet poem, rhymes so clever. I tried to find a favorite, but they're all so good! Best of Luck!
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 6:37 AM
It is amazing how they make it through, but they do. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Delaney Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Such a sweet squirrel poem, Valsa: and so beautifully crafted. SuZ
Pandit Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Your poem gives voice to aspiration of squirrels looking forward to the arrival of spring, Valsa. Aptly themed for the contest.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 1:54 AM
How can one not admire your poem? Great personification of a squirrel. So many images. Wonderful dear Valsa.
Daniel Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:03 PM
Cute thoughts of a squirrel, Valsa:)
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