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The chill of winter bites deep into the skin, And the world stays inert in muffled din. In the freezing blustery winter days, Life poses threat to beasts in many ways. I, this little squirrel inside a tree’s narrow hollow, Am in hibernation to guard myself from nagging snow. Feeding on the scanty store of nuts gathered, Wondering if my life will be sheltered or shattered. Eagerly I await winter to have a natural ending, As the cycle of seasons keep changing. Hope the world will soon be up and awake, And life, in all possibility, a renewed turn take. As no season can pause for long or linger on, Winter will soon fade away and be gone. Once more spring will be back in all its cheer And my loneliness and frustration will disappear. The valleys and planes, now sleeping so silent, Will wake up as the sun from his hide out comes radiant. I wish to see birds once again soaring into the sky, And their lively twitter and chatter rising high! Oh! Come spring, the season of sunshine and mirth When the earth will show visible signs of rebirth Let me, from tree-to-tree scamper and scurry With my other friends, free of all worry! Jan.21.2023 ~ Placed First~ Winter Is Not Forever Poetry Contest Sponsor. B.J. Legros Kelley

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Date: 2/25/2023 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win my dear friend Valsa! Your Winter Is Not Forever poem is a superb write my dear friend. It shows great hope for everyone even those little but cute ones. Thanks a lot for sharing. Sorry for the late visit. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 2/20/2023 6:22:00 AM
Delightful thoughts of squirrel, Valsa. Congratulations on your top win
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:49:00 PM
There is a very flawless flow and music in your poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/19/2023 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your win! I love the personification of your sweet squirrel, we are all now longing for Springtime.
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:30:00 AM
A lovely poem of a squirrel, Valsa! I used to feed a squirrel along with bunnies, but the squirrel no longer comes. Sad. Anyhow, congratulations! I loved reading about the squirrel's life :)
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter is Not Forever" is a cute write/picture. The little guy needs to stay in to stay warm. Have a blessed day writing away............................
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Date: 2/19/2023 6:52:00 AM
I really like the feel of this poem Valsa. Great job! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/19/2023 12:35:00 AM
Wonderful Valsa! Congratulations on your win in this contest! Such a well-written poem and I love it so much :) <3
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Date: 2/19/2023 3:02:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear BJ for your generous appreciation and giving this poem a first place win . Am very delighted. Stay blessed!
Date: 1/28/2023 11:47:00 AM
I love that you chose a squirrel as narrator! Such a sweet poem, rhymes so clever. I tried to find a favorite, but they're all so good! Best of Luck!
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Date: 1/23/2023 6:37:00 AM
It is amazing how they make it through, but they do. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/21/2023 6:36:00 AM
Such a sweet squirrel poem, Valsa: and so beautifully crafted. SuZ
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Date: 1/21/2023 5:16:00 AM
Your poem gives voice to aspiration of squirrels looking forward to the arrival of spring, Valsa. Aptly themed for the contest.
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Date: 1/21/2023 1:54:00 AM
How can one not admire your poem? Great personification of a squirrel. So many images. Wonderful dear Valsa.
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Date: 1/20/2023 10:03:00 PM
Cute thoughts of a squirrel, Valsa:)
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