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August.13.2023
Why are We Here Poetry Contest
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Why am I here? What’s the be all and end all of life? A million-dollar question is hurled on me. I have pondered over this question many a time. I am stuck fast in this question like my feet, Lodged in a slushy patch of mud which on pulled hard, The earth perversely refuses to free itself. “The greatest gift to man by God is our dear life. Embrace it, celebrate it, and live every moment. Don’t die before your death,”- This I always hear, but how? We work, we make money, and splurge on luxury. Is that just enough? Oh, Never! Know, we are on an eternal quest, After the purpose and meaning of life. Life is neither an accident nor a coincidence. When I juggle with the question why we are here, I am made to think…. rather introspect, That there is no merit in just living and dying. But in in rising up and acting in the living present We have to go out, meet people who are sad, And enjoy the beauty of shared moments. When we help others, it thrills the giver and taker. By becoming a sponge which can absorb all negativity We get a rare feeling of joy and contentment Wipe a tear, light a smile, speak a kind word. Be one who can emit positive vibes all around When we realize we have changed someone’s life, And because of us someone didn’t give up, It is the day, the great day, we have begun to live! Be grateful for what we have, And we’ll end up having more than we ever craved. Be kind to oneself and love yourself, Happiness is all around us and about us!

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Date: 12/9/2023 6:49:00 AM
VALSA GEORGE to have your three poems printed in Poetry SOUPS anthology is awesome and to have one of your poems printed on the fist page is again I feel an honor. Valsa I have been scare again catching up with life, healing our giving business, as it was neglected and catching up with comments as I was running far behind. Hope you are well my friend, blessings galore to you and your family. Hugs and love to you., JENNIFER
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Date: 8/21/2023 8:16:00 AM
Wonderful thoughts with which I wholeheartedly agree; congratulations
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Date: 8/21/2023 7:00:00 AM
I extend my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your exquisitely crafted poem boasts an array of remarkable verses that simply cannot escape notice.
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Date: 8/17/2023 6:12:00 PM
The literary composition boasts exceptional imagery, displaying exquisite craftsmanship and evoking a profound sense of beauty throughout, Valsa. May we one day unravel the enigmatic nature of our existence. Best of luck with your participation in the contest.
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Date: 8/16/2023 3:36:00 PM
You present a good case, and I learn so much about your thoughts, Valsa. I think you gave the answer [Why We Are Here] is an eternal quest. We can either be complicated, do certain deities or be simple and grateful for life itself. "life is not an accident or a coincidence" B0l on this difficult challenge!
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Date: 8/15/2023 5:42:00 AM
Hello, Valsa - This is full of wonderful imagery with a great, great message for all to adhere to in their own way - good job - i like >>>> " I am stuck fast in this question like my one foot, Lodged in a slushy patch of mud" Ok then where is that "Cool Million" you deserve - stay safe too! Perry C.
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Date: 8/13/2023 11:51:00 AM
A hard question to answer. You are right to fully live your life, help and love your neighbor, and be good to others.
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Date: 8/13/2023 7:18:00 AM
A heartfelt entry for the contest, Valsa. Your life displays the very characteristics that you share with us through your poetry. Sometimes I think the answer is as simple as, we're here because God has a part for us to play in the greatest story being told ... His creation story. Smiles ~ Blessings my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 8/13/2023 6:09:00 AM
Hopefully one day the mystery of our existence will one day be revealed to us. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're keeping well Valsa. Tom
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Date: 8/13/2023 4:46:00 AM
Something someone said a long time ago helped me with this and many other questions about life, and this is it, " you are where you are supposed to be doing what you are supposed to be doing right now" that is if you have been born again. God has you where He wants you and He wants you to do the best you can do with that. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/13/2023 3:40:00 AM
Awesome advice, Valsa:)
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