Whispering Walls

“Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house,
can you hear the whispering”...by Constance La France

An old, abandoned house touches the heart
its walls whisper of the lives it once held
though pillars and stairs now crumbling apart
lingering stillness stirs a mystic spell
as it yearns for those who long ago dwelled

Children's laughter echoes in nursery
their toddling drawings still hanging on walls
Gone are dinners, dances, lights strung in trees
walls sigh with memories, as darkness falls,
shivering with cold, the emptiness calls

In walls' whispers, I hear their plaintive mourn
their loneliness felt in the splintered wood
in rose-hued wallpaper faded and torn
shells of their dignity, once bold and good 
their whispers only by wind understood

May 25, 2023
for "Writing Challenge - C Quotes" poetry contest
by Constance La France
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Date: 9/13/2023 1:19:00 PM
A moving picture of times of love and laughter, loss, melancholy. Very nice Ann! :)
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Date: 6/7/2023 10:31:00 PM
"their whispers only by wind understood" It is a touching and soulful poem on all deserted houses. Once they teemed with life. But now only plaintive and mourful whispers arise from them and those whispers are fondly carried away and understood by the wind. Beatiful Anne. Congratulations !
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Date: 6/5/2023 12:15:00 PM
- An exciting theme, lovely written, Ann - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 6/4/2023 2:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
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Date: 6/4/2023 1:36:00 AM
"walls sigh with memories, as darkness falls, shivering with cold, the emptiness calls" - A very beautiful picture presented. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2023 7:12:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 5/31/2023 11:25:00 AM
Wow you've pictured an abandoned house so well in fitting terms and descriptions of the sights and goings on it once held. Kudos for this awesome poem.  >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem
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Date: 5/30/2023 10:11:00 AM
A lovely poem, immersed with mystic visions.
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:32:00 PM
wow. Looks like a first place winner. Sure hope it will be,
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Date: 5/29/2023 5:48:00 AM
A masterpiece, Constance, of vivid and moving descriptions--superb use of personification. Janice
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Date: 5/28/2023 7:58:00 AM
Smooth flow to each verse and excellent imagery, Ann. Good luck in the contest, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/28/2023 2:49:00 PM
Thanks, Bill from Texas! :) There are lots of those old wooden houses in Texas. I love those stately old homes==so much history there. Silver City, NM has a lot of them, too. So sad to see an abandoned one.
Date: 5/28/2023 6:02:00 AM
There are so many such deserted houses in our locality ! They all have a story to tell. Once those houses throbbed with life. Now they have only a plaintive moan. Very touching narration, dear Ann.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/28/2023 2:58:00 PM
I feel so sad for an abandoned house. My friends and I found one on a hike, so many years ago. It sat, all alone, sagging into the sand. Its table was still set for two. We felt we were intruding and left it to its loneliness. Thanks for commenting, dear Valsa.
Date: 5/26/2023 3:47:00 PM
So stirring and poignant, you feel how the house misses its family, and that last line so emotive~
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/28/2023 3:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle. I do love the stately old homes with wrap-around porches and old trees. Part of our past that's fading. Thank you for such nice comments! :)
Date: 5/26/2023 7:34:00 AM
Ann, I sent you a soupmail ~
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Date: 5/25/2023 6:15:00 PM
So very beautiful Ann….l felt it! Debx
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Deb M
Date: 5/30/2023 6:49:00 AM
Me too!!
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/26/2023 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Deb! I've always loved old houses.
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