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As your dreams disappear, hope's all you have left... living a life that's merely a collage of failures, fate makes fun of. Love, was to be romantic, filled with only happy thoughts. Yet, when reality's tossed, dreams sometimes just can't hold on. You gather up all of the slowly smoldering embers. And doused their flame with drops of tears salvaged from yesterday. Yet, you never stop trying, or ever feel you want to. For a smile can reignite passion into searing flames. You want what dreams are made of, to feel your heart on fire. And that requires both hope and an unquenchable desire. Written Aug. 11, 2015 for " End Line Word - Poetry Contest". The last word of each line reads as, “Hope’s a collage of romantic thoughts tossed on the embers of yesterday, trying to reignite flames of fire and desire.”

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Date: 11/12/2015 10:56:00 AM
Beautifully written Emile. Love the End Line sentiment.
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Date: 11/12/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 11/8/2015 7:16:00 PM
A sweet, sad poem. Well done. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Joyce, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/7/2015 3:58:00 PM
Congrats on your end line poem landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those end lines impressive..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2015 5:32:00 PM
Thanks Sara, your comments and support are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 11/5/2015 12:16:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2015 2:22:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate the support. Emile.
Date: 11/4/2015 11:09:00 PM
Wow Emile such a beautiful write.. congrats on huge win!
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appricate the support. Emile.
Date: 11/4/2015 7:17:00 PM
Emile, this is such beautiful piece.Great job! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, I appricate the support. Emile.
Date: 11/4/2015 2:47:00 PM
Nice Job Emile, beautiful, congrats!
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I appricate the support. Emile.
Date: 11/4/2015 12:14:00 PM
Emile, excellent work! A smile an reignite passion....Beautiful, Emile!
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Balveen, I appricate the support. Emile.
Date: 11/4/2015 11:50:00 AM
Hi Emile! congratulations on this fine win! You make this difficult form look easy! Your end line sentence is awesome. ~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Paul, yours was a piece of art. Emile.
Date: 8/12/2015 12:44:00 PM
Dear Emile, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting my contest. Superb Quill LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words HG, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest with such talented poets, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2015 12:56:00 AM
this is really great! Just a suggestion. You should put all the final words far to the right. For example: line one: As your dreams disappear. . . . . . . . . . . .Hope's I was here when the judge of this contest first introduced it to us and he likes the end words set apart so everyone can easily read them going down on the page! I bet you could make it look even better that way!
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Date: 8/12/2015 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, your comments and support are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 8/11/2015 9:15:00 PM
Emile: I don't have the foresight to put together a poem this clever. Well done. oldbuck
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Date: 8/12/2015 7:22:00 AM
Thanks Old Buck, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 8/11/2015 8:18:00 PM
Beautiful write. Good luck to you.
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Date: 8/12/2015 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Yolanda, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 8/11/2015 8:07:00 PM
Your descriptive is wise and eloquent, I love it, it intriguing..........A.M.
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Date: 8/12/2015 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 8/11/2015 6:09:00 PM
Emile, wow that is so creative and interesting, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my fluttering gems
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Date: 8/11/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 8/11/2015 11:38:00 AM
Wonderfully well done. A winner for sure. This one is not easy. . Thanks for your comments. Love,Joyce
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Date: 8/11/2015 11:49:00 AM
Thanks Joyce, for your vote of confidence, I appreciate it. Emile.

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