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Walking away, I have done too many times, I am left with memories that live in my rhymes; At the funerals I have turned and walked away, My beloved lay with the flowers that decay. O, I walk away from my beloved with tears, I go to cold tombs no matter how many years; I have walked away from my sweet beloved pets, Putting my dearly loved in the hands of vets. Walking away is something I seem to do well, The pain of this turning away is my living hell; This is a sorrow that no one ever forgets, But loving is something no one ever regrets. So when the dead are put to rest, I walk away, Safe in my heart and soul they will always stay. __________________________ December 14, 2015 Canzone For the contest, Walking Away, sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 12/21/2015 2:20:00 PM
A marvelous CANZONE S.O... Sometimes walking away is all we can do, the pain of loss is just so intense. So it is certainly nothing to be ashamed of... I have done it many times, only to return and properly pay my respects. Well done! Keith
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Date: 12/21/2015 10:19:00 PM
I'm sorry...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/21/2015 8:12:00 PM
Keith, you mean Broken Wings, thanks for the compliment on my Canzone, and for the comment ~
Date: 12/19/2015 6:54:00 AM
I'm sad to hear of such lose. You however, are a survivor. Fantastic write. Congrats.
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Date: 12/19/2015 9:03:00 AM
Scott, thanks so much for your compassion and the congrats, yes I am a survivor ~
Date: 12/17/2015 4:58:00 PM
such a beautiful and emotional write congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2015 7:02:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the beautiful, the congrats and the hugs ~
Date: 12/17/2015 3:20:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Skat
Date: 12/16/2015 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations Constance, magnificent write, soul stirring in acceptance of most difficult of life's experiences.
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Date: 12/17/2015 9:40:00 AM
John, thanks for the congratulations, oh I love that word magnificent ~
Date: 12/16/2015 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations! Well written, different perspective, painful emotionally. Loss from death is forever. The good news I'm finding is we are blessed with memories and the losses live on through us. We love deeply and hurt deeply. You have found a way to tap into that. Again, congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 9:42:00 AM
Susan, thank you for the congratulations and that wonderful comment, and there is a saying I recall, the price of loving is grieving ~
Date: 12/16/2015 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful and so emotional, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 9:43:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and oh I love that word beautiful ~
Date: 12/16/2015 5:29:00 PM
Congrats on writing this superb poem my friend and on your great win!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 9:44:00 AM
Robert, thanks so much for the congrats and oh I love that word superb, I write whats in my heart and soul ~
Date: 12/16/2015 5:16:00 PM
Congrats for your first place in the "Walking Away" contest BW! ;-)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 9:45:00 AM
Teddy, thank for the visit and the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 12/16/2015 4:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win Constance...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 9:46:00 AM
John, thanks so much for the visit and the congrats, so appreciated ~
Date: 12/16/2015 10:22:00 AM
Heartfelt and touching Constance congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2015 11:35:00 AM
Michael, thanks for the congratulations
Date: 12/16/2015 10:06:00 AM
Nicely written, blessings and congrats. DMB
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Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2015 11:36:00 AM
Dmb, thanks so much for the congratulations
Date: 12/16/2015 7:23:00 AM
A poignant write and congratulations, BW
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Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2015 8:55:00 AM
Lin,thank you so much for the congratulations
Date: 12/15/2015 11:33:00 AM
Well written poem of sad determination and reluctant acceptance.
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Date: 12/15/2015 6:39:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting and commenting, I have been on a journey of acceptance it seems all my life ~
Date: 12/14/2015 6:17:00 PM
There is sadness and strength in this poem, it fills the mind with bowed heads and tears,along with the long walk of solitude...good luck a strong poem
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Date: 12/15/2015 3:43:00 AM
Frederic, thank you for that nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/14/2015 1:46:00 PM
Broken.... You did it again....BIG 7
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2015 3:45:00 AM
Judy, thank you for visiting and for the 7!!!

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